OS Avita- Together Again..Completed - Page 11

Originally posted by: joliefille

Hey Parasu dear,🤗 Heyyy Jo😉


u were asking to press like button if we like ,
tell me what to do when i looove it,😳 Awww...thts sooo sweet of u😳


wooow wow dear , Priya is right you are a damn good Romantic writer, i think cv' s need tuition, Im ready to give them tuitions😆😆
n Avi's look,
uh maaa i m totally flat dear, 😍🤪 😆
can imagine each n every scene,
*cough, cough*,ya each scene 😳😳
😳thanx for the sweet twist in story i mean took them to another place instead of Haveli , at least they have some time together,
n about ur writing style-
👏

Thnks sweetie

Originally posted by: swamini5

Prashu too good yaar

Romantic scene was UUUFFF Thnks Di😳

I Think u should sent this to CVs for Avita's SR I want to seriously send them...Romance show mein dalna bhool hi gaye hain

Originally posted by: Bubbles2k4

I had tears of joy in my eyes reading your OS, Prash!!! It was so beautifully written.

Thnks Bubbles😳

Like Joliefille I did not like it I loved it to bits ... 👏! I wish and pray whatever you just mentioned in your OS comes true! Me too wish ...I hope this comes true

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for launching your OS now when everything on the show seems to be going against Avdesh and Arpita reunion. This place is like a haven for Avdesh and Arpita fans!! Awww...thnk u soo much...This meant a lot to me😳

Keep them coming Prash!! I really look forward to the next part.

Bubbles 😳

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

☺️...haye mein to mar jawaan... I am really thankful to God that i was alone while reading this...warna ithne excessive blushing ka kya explanation deti...Ohhh hehehe😆while I was going to read this my aunt called me to help her in making biryani...biryani ki tho aisi ki thaisi...first I finished your OS dear...it was super hot and romantic... thnks yaar!!!!! you wrote the SR sooo beautifully my words won't suffice to praise it jaan...Thnks jaan😳 all their emotions were traced really beautifully...loved it to core love you🤗 Thnks a tonnn sweetie...Love u too

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Wow, what an outstanding update. Prashu, Thnks Sidda you went to the romance straight away and pleased all of us. Laxmi Didi will be proud of you. I can imagine a Maha episode for this scene, you had so many beautiful songs to lengthen the night. I'm just laughing at BJ now, even if Avita comes back, she really as no reason to want Avi because he is not a virgin anymore (Sadly only in this OS). Arpi is two steps ahead BJ. Yeah ...She is 😆 I'm so proud of the girl. It would be amusing to see Arpi enter the haveli being pregnant and make BJ more furious and jealous. Thnks fr commenting Sidda😳

Originally posted by: Sunaha6

wow prashu...literally i am blushing...truly romantic...Plase continue this OS into a FF yaar...its really good...and the song se4lction was good... Thnks darling..But I wont be able to do it

Kash yeh gana Avitha key suhag raat pey play karthey(If this ever happens in the show🤣) Seriously yaar..I wld start dancing then😆

Originally posted by: gnitika

big smile 😃
thanks prash 4 lovely os Thnks darling😳
awsum ,wonderful🤗
lage raho prash 😉 Thnk u soo much😳

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye prashu, Heyyy Rups😉

2nd part was just hhmmm hmmm
well i can say that only. Bad or good😕

what a plan made by avi kash serial mein bhi he could thought like that. I really hope..aisa avi kuch kare😉😆
😆Waise jungle mein bhutni ka ek ghar hai remember na.
Avita can plan for dat.
Very very nice part. Thnks a tonnn😳

And congo once again for your 1st OS.