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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Excellent writing desperately waiting for 2nd part of ur latter can't even wait . u just squeez up the emotions of avdhesh without any dialog of his ,with innocence too,great waiting for other part .

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: joliefille
Excellent writing desperately waiting for 2nd part of ur latter can't even wait . u just squeez up the emotions of avdhesh without any dialog of his ,with innocence too,great waiting for other part .

Hi Jolie,

The second part is on page 2😊. Sorry, this is not a recent post of mine....was kind of resurrected.😃

It was a oneshot piece in two parts.

Thanks so much for liking it.😊

Btw, haven't seen you around, so if you are new, welcome to the GKD forum. Hope you have loads of fun😛

Vista

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sanam

@sanamrahman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

WOW............ITS MINDBLOWING .........AWESOME.....CORRECT WORD SELECTION TO DESCRIBE THE STORY.........WILL BE WAITING 4 THE 2 PART........

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Twin vice prez and Twin R

@Twinz

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

wow that's great....u have great writing skills

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

@Sanam (beautiful name)😊: Thanks for liking it. Second part is on page 2.

@Twinz: Thanks dear. Who is the girl in ur avatar picture?

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Komal

@komalSingh

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

hi vista very nicely written i m in drem of Avi

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MONY

@MonyP

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

wah wah wah wah maan gaye Moghal-E-Aazam😃😳, kya khub likhte hai aap. 👏👏👏

Thanks Vistawa, beautiful piece of work. Keep it up

Edited by MonyP - 14 years ago

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

vista di......loved it very much.........thanks to sidda.....i came to know this letter....😳

i read atleast 15 to 20 times.....copy pasted it in my diary😳😳

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Dreamygal301

@Dreamygal301

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Vista,

brillant!👏

Oh I love it and would love it even more if you could translate in English..😳😊...I always wanted to know the meaning of 'rom rom pukar'..and so on...overall I understand the haunting words, it is beautifully written that letter....

Thanks again👏

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

hi di, u know that i luv ur writing.n this latter,u remind me it again now i m looking for 2nd instollment more impatently hope u will post it soon.i know it will b awsome,so thanx in advance 👏 😃

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