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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Mera late arrival here Miane chappi last night hi padh liya tha but no reswa directly comment marti hun..I want to say so many things but chalo break mar mar k kehti hun..fine kitkat le break maar maar kar bolo 😆

a--Biji
No matter how much I love KG but your biji looks like a very wise woman.Torn between the zid of two people she loves the most and then the words of wisdom and support she tries to give both GUlaal and Kesar was truly heart Wrenching..Poor Biji when she said kaash mere do bete nahi hotey Toh I was like very pained..Biji ko toh dekh lo😡 dono Kesar aur Gulaal😡 biji is wise she is silent sufferer of the fate...she had suffered alot a bad marriage pangs of widhowhood her son died at the young age and now her kesar is at the verge of destroying everything uff bechari is in pareshani mode..she is trying to fill some brains in these loggerheads but yeah sune tab naa both of them have this ruining streaks in them they plunder themselves one turns into iron plate... other turns into molten lava haaye kya hoga in dunno and she said the most genuine words mother say in distress yeah bache kanha se paida ho gaye mue sardard kahin ke 😆

b- dushy #^%#^#^&# gadha kahin ka encashing on sentiments and pushed Kesar towards alcoholism SCREW HIM😡 aur uske itne ghatiya plans hao😡, ghar basa nahi baarati aa gaye lutene 😆

c.Gulaal
What to say her stubborness is irritating but then you just can't force someone to love you matey dekh tune munde ki kya halat bana di hai the point is does she knows wht her heart wants she has actually locked it under the moral obligations of society u know one love waala concept this is most typical notch of a woman rural woman preicesly she lives under the dilusion love happens once in life and if her heart is beating is again it becomes a sin😳

d.Kesar
Burning in his own fire Kya karega dil lagaya bhi toh kisse Gulaal se Gosh poor thing destroyed in love and now finishing everything he he he uske uapar koi gusaa nahi y so 😆😉
Plesae bring on the next update fast fast Loved it!! thanks and updated complexities waala chappi hai agar samajh aaye to mujhe bhi samjha dena

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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=LoLali]Hai hai such a hair pulling update😡 😭. wht else will u expect from me 😆😎 . .fully dipped in daaru devdaas ho gaya yaa majnu 😆. . .ab e veer ji kaha se aa gaye mauke pe chauka maarne . koi nahi ji drama mein spice add karne aaye hai thts it 😆. .i feel like beating everyone for using kesar . . .banda daaru pi pi kar baawara hui gawa hai . . kya batau he is not in senses 😭.u know arti the thing i hate about gulaal is that she has made her assumption about lagaav and reached to the final conclusion that avoidance is perfect cure . she has her own reason its the common tendency in gals they sense a hush hush and they retreat back in their cocoon it would be their first and instance reaction its like dont u dare descend me from holier than thou image. .arre jab kesar ne confess kia toh gulaal ne use lagaav wali baat kyu nahi ki . .confession ke baad se woh ya toh bhaag rahi hai ya dhamki de rahi hai 😡. .usko kuch samajh nahi aata she never said she is suspicious of his love wooh to usko pata hai banda gadbad hai the from the day he retuned she just says she doesnt view him as her husband thts it 😳 .aur biji dono ke beech mei tennis ball bani hui hai . poor biji . .hai re m pissed of . . . kunnu manager ne gulaal ko khuphiya khabar suna di . . .dushy ka jhol jhal along with tarranuum bano . .let's see gullu sirf dhamkati hai ki uska sar bhi katati hai . . .maar daal unhe gulaal 😡.[/QUOTE] maara nahi hai😭 updated bol to phir se edit karo naya waala chappi and gulaal se bolti hun maar daalne ko
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

okies guyz chapter 11 updated... plz koi question mat poochna u see my physical complexity ki teacher piu says i m still a bachi 🤔😭 so i dont know anything ...😊all the questions to piu plzzz😭


OYE donno ki bachi😡 😆 Aaajkal bache bhi teachers se jyda sayane hotey hain😛😛😛😛😛 😆😆😆 all questions back to arti PWEETY PULEEZ
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Okies coming to chappi..the whole chapter was a major deja vu of Ek chadar maili si where Rano surrenders to bring him back from the depths of misery though the circumstances are entirely different to the point coz Kesar is almost in shambles due to the immense love of Gulaal...
good that he gave matey a piece of his mind where he says that he did not need that karewa to love her ,he had always loved her and if she did not end up doing karewa he would have done it by hook or crook shows his state of mind how convinced he is about his love ...The sharafat of kesu is amazing😛 telling her to leave but Gulaal is determined to bring him back... coming to chii😳 It was good though matey still in denial mode but a women surrenders to a man only if she shares some kind of connection to him whether emotional ,mental ,physical etc..here she does it willingly coz she has some comfort level plus her duty towards him yet cries coz she is in denial as u said tied to her age old ethics and morality ...
So i bet she will be all paap jaap next morning or maybe Kesar will be shocked what he had done in the state of delirium...but sanu ki😆😆😆 chii aa gaya baat khatam😛 next update jaldi lao..



Oye black eye wali 😆😆😆 tune likha hai tujhe nahi samajh aya 😆 😆 TELL TELL BOLO BOLO😆.. JHOOTHI😆. you must have understood how your character should react and you wrote it just according to the mindset that these two have CONVINCING ENOUGH!! Well written😳 me samajh gayi😳and I could understand why she is almost broken ..ab ismein main aur kya samjhaun 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul


OYE donno ki bachi😡 😆 Aaajkal bache bhi teachers se jyda sayane hotey hain😆 all questions back to arti PWEETY PULEEZ


seriously mujhe kuch nahi malum 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Okies coming to chappi..the whole chapter was a major deja vu of Ek chadar maili si where Rano surrenders to bring him back from the depths of misery ...no actually rano didnt surrender she cossumated they were already feeling love for each other they had tht pull psuh between them but madam rano and mangal were both in denial mode and he seeks refuge in alcohol as he was attracted towards her as he was like man wht am i thinking and she was in denial mode though she was aware of this UST between them and it was both sided she didnt ran she actually waited for his call but banda kesar se bada dabloo tha 😆 and then they fought and fight karte karte consummation ho gaya tha ...both surrender willingly to the need...and lived happily ever after..😳 here gulaal isnt feeling UST her kesar is turned into a maniac she is left with no option she has to bring him back at any cost fill in some senses into his brainless head he was hell bent on destroying himself and she cant let this happen it was painful surrender for her though the circumstances are entirely different to the point coz Kesar is almost in shambles due to the immense love of Gulaal...yes thts y caption love is like fire dunno weather it warms heart or burns ur soul 😳

  • good that he gave matey a piece of his mind where he says that he did not need that karewa to love her ,he had always loved her and if she did not end up doing karewa he would have done it by hook or crook shows his state of mind how convinced he is about his love .kesar is a mature guy maybe he doesnt know his depth of love but he knows he loves her there is no arguement here the case rests here..The sharafat of kesu is amazing😛 telling her to leave...haan to jo banda surufui ki wish k liye bio book padhe usese hum kya expect karenge 😆... but Gulaal is determined to bring him back... coming to chii😳 It was good though matey still in denial mode but a women surrenders to a man only if she shares some kind of connection to him whether emotional ,mental ,physical etc..here she does it willingly coz she has some comfort level plus her duty towards him yet cries coz she is in denial as u said tied to her age old ethics and morality ...emmm mujhe gulaal ka surrender nahi samajh mein aaya mein chup rahungi

So i bet she will be all paap jaap next morning or maybe Kesar will be shocked what he had done in the state of delirium...but sanu ki😆😆😆 chii aa gaya baat khatam😛 next update jaldi lao.simple naa see it was a OS kaise SS ban gaya 😊😭 and update emmm well me exhausted seriously hospital se jaane se pehle watever i wrote i posted but abhi to its hectic and strenuous😭



Oye black eye wali 😆😆😆 tune likha hai tujhe nahi samajh aya 😆 😆 TELL TELL BOLO BOLO😆.. JHOOTHI😆. abhi shaadi nahi hui hai meri mein kya jaanu 😭you must have understood how your character should react and you wrote it just according to the mindset that these two have CONVINCING ENOUGH!! Well written😳 me samajh gayi😳and I could understand why she is almost broken ..ab ismein main aur kya samjhaun 😛 meri gulaal is devoid of physical complexities kyunki jo use likh rahi hai us bechari ko physical complexities waali education mein C milta hai 😭 and then she is a wall 😳 thanks for the comment this was for u i hope u liked it

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🤪 mujhe moti saru fui aur kesu ki bio book yaad ayying 😆😆😆haahahhaa😆😆😆😆😆 masoon bachi😆😆😆😆 ofc I like it next chappi chapo when you get well 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

🤪 mujhe moti saru fui aur kesu ki bio book yaad ayying 😆😆😆haahahhaa😆 masoon bachi😆 ofc I like it next chappi chapo when you get well 😳


banda kitna obedient tha naa 🤪fui ne wish ki and bande ne book utha li to fullfill her demand 😆haaye kis bio book mein detailed knowledge hota hai re 😉..kesar give us the name of the writer plz 😎.and mein seriously ekdum exhausted 😕... i swear this is my last piece of writing on GK aaj k baad no ss os or ff watsoever...
Edited by arti07 - 12 years ago
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oho Kesar toh ek dum Devdas ki style copy karne laga...uff it was so hard watching him walk on the path of self destruction...I wanted to give him one tight slap...but kya karein all this is very necessary to make him a very strong man.He has to make these mistakes then only can he learn from them na...urrrgh Dushyant and JK...I don't have any words for them...oppurtunistic hyenas...urrrgh...so very angry with them😡I was angry with Gulaal too but then I was able to understand her position too.How can she force herself to feel something for him when she is not yet ready for it and it really pained my heart when she surrenders herself to him in the latest update.It was so sad...a moment which is supposed to be special,memorable yet I could feel her heart break in the exact moment that she decided to go through with it.I loved how you wrote the scene.It was so emotional and I was silently begging Kesar to stop...even though he warned her...I so wanted him to stop but then we won't get the angst na...Now with the dynamics chaged drastically between them I am eager to know what happens next

oh I forgot to mention some other things...Biji is sort of a female MB in this story.I am liking her a lot.awww she was a victim of domestic violence...it made me so sad.The conversation between her and Kesar was well written...really enjoyed that part and that slap ...yay for Biji cause Kesar needed that very badly😭
Good job Arti and do update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arti 🤗...so chii chapter is here😳
I LOVED gulaal when she was all threatening dushyanth and jamuna kaki...she has such a strong will to save her kesar from the plans that dushyanth has made to destroy and kill kesar...good that dushyanth said her about all his plans so that now she knows that how kesar is effected by all these...Dushyanth still wants to marry gulaal😡
Coming to kesar and gulaal convo...I liked when he told her that he never loved her because of karewa..his feelings are irrespective of karewa...he is very much determined that he loves her and only her and also he is damn sure that to get her love he would have did karewa with her even now😳...ohh so he thought that she wants to have some time to understand the relation but he is shattered na when she disagreed to accept the relation...ohh she is determined to get her kesar back to her at any cost and so did the only thing that she can do, to surrender to his love and passion...see he is such a good boy he asked her to go away but once she decided to get her kesar back she can do anything and every thing to get him back...chii ☺️...now looks like kesar will regret or feel that he forced her while he is drunk and so though he will be back to be her kesar, he will remain distant to her...
This is a lovely update Arti...do update the next chapter soon...

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