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Posted: 12 years ago
Phataka update ... Luved it ! luved it! luved it!🤗

Gul-Dushi--JK Scene :- Dushi ka bharta bana diya Gullu ne.. ...Maza aa gaya ...
She can do anything for her Kesar..😳

Kesar-Gulaal scene :- ☺️ ☺️ I can't express the amount of times I blushed n awwed..😳 during the time I read the last part ..☺️
It's so amazing the way u portrayed their feelings specially Gulaal.😊 feeling bad for her ...
Overall great part...👏 👏 👏 Hats off 2 u ...

Jaldi -Jaldi update karo next chappy I can't wait anymore Pleasshhh ...





Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it..😊 Wow!!! Gulaal how boldly took Dushyant..👏 OMG!!!😲 He is giving poison to Kesar..😡

Kesar is completely broken..😭 Gulaal tried her best to make him understand and finally had no other option than to surrender herself to him!!!

Kesar is happy and Gulaal not..

Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update..😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: minizz

oho Kesar toh ek dum Devdas ki style copy karne laga...uff it was so hard watching him walk on the path of self destruction...I wanted to give him one tight slap.me too but cant help tht's kesar wen he gets messed up he drinks 😳..but kya karein all this is very necessary to make him a very strong man.He has to make these mistakes then only can he learn from them na...urrrgh Dushyant and JK...I don't have any words for them...oppurtunistic hyenas...urrrgh...so very angry with them😡they are like catalyst they just accelerated gk dynamics I was angry with Gulaal too but then I was able to understand her position too......gulaal tried her level best to maintain a reasonable distance she tried to explain him she scolded him remained aloof but nothing helped and now wen dushyant had set an evil eye on him she had to protect him like she did in karewa it was for his sake she married him as she didnt wanted dushy to ruin him and her family How can she force herself to feel something for him when she is not yet ready for it ...thts gulaal she never set any boundaries limits moarlities for him she broke the set rules of society wen she married him in the tender age now she surrendered herself breaking her own shackles and it really pained my heart when she surrenders herself to him in the latest update.It was so sad...a moment which is supposed to be special,memorable yet I could feel her heart break in the exact moment that she decided to go through with it.I loved how you wrote the scene.It was so emotional and I was silently begging Kesar to stop.me too strange naa they always have constrasting emotion wen he loves her she rans away wen she takes an initative he retreats back here too he was ecstatic but she was tormented .oh btw wen mature kesar was all messed up i wanted gulaal to fill in some senses into him it was always her who mended up his ways his guide but we got the great scholar talli there.i hated tht sindoor waali thali scene i know gulaal couldnt make him understand but still y talli i was like y did u poke ur nose in between was she even needed ....even though he warned her...I so wanted him to stop but then we won't get the angst na...Now with the dynamics chaged drastically between them I am eager to know what happens next lets see

oh I forgot to mention some other things...Biji is sort of a female MB in this story.I am liking her a lot.awww she was a victim of domestic violence..u know i always wanted PB to be little wise and intellegent but the makers failed there miserably she was such a interesting character she too had a deeyearvattu she was the most appropriate person to explain GK about the complexity and necessity of this relationship but cv never explored it too bad... .it made me so sad.The conversation between her and Kesar was well written...really enjoyed that part and that slap ...yay for Biji cause Kesar needed that very badly😭 yes me too no story could be completed without a slap naa😆
Good job Arti and do update soon😊 thanks alot actually i was apprhensive about this story i didnt wanted to bring this ss ... ur bday present should be something really special... but see i brought this absolute crap 😭 anyways thanks for the appreciation

Edited by arti07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

Arti 🤗...so chii chapter is here😳 ha ha ha chii ka to pata nahi par chappi jaror aaya

I LOVED gulaal when she was all threatening dushyanth and jamuna kaki..haan for once i wanted her to threaten dushyant wen she came to know about his past remember she did danda pitaai of reva's ex financee 😆.she has such a strong will to save her kesar from the plans that dushyanth has made to destroy and kill kesar...good that dushyanth said her about all his plans so that now she knows that how kesar is effected by all these...Dushyanth still wants to marry gulaal😡 oh yes not coz he is obsessed he is eyeing her property
Coming to kesar and gulaal convo...I liked when he told her that he never loved her because of karewa..his feelings are irrespective of karewa...he is very much determined that he loves her and only her and also he is damn sure that to get her love he would have did karewa with her even now😳, he is not messed up like a mature kesar since there was no murder mystery and things like tht, he understood his heart profoundly...he knew he loves her for the word go...not at all confused in this regard 😆

..ohh so he thought that she wants to have some time to understand the relation but he is shattered na when she disagreed to accept the relation.gulaal is one confused denail soul here..ohh she is determined to get her kesar back to her at any cost and so did the only thing that she can do, to surrender to his love and passion..aur kya kare bechari pati dev doesnt understands anything 😆.see he is such a good boy he asked her to go away...phir mat kehna warn nahi kiya tha see i told u wifey stay out but no 😆...... but once she decided to get her kesar back she can do anything and every thing to get him back...chii ☺️...now looks like kesar will regret or feel that he forced her while he is drunk and so though he will be back to be her kesar, he will remain distant to her..pata nahi😭
This is a lovely update Arti...do update the next chapter soon... thanks will try and thanks alot for ur comments feels elated chalo kissi ko to acha laga 😳 thanks once again🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

Phataka update ... Luved it ! luved it! luved it!🤗 i love love love tht bandar 😆🤗


Gul-Dushi--JK Scene :- Dushi ka bharta bana diya Gullu ne.. ...Maza aa gaya ........chaar dande aur dene the 😉
She can do anything for her Kesar..😳 yes morality...ethics hardly matters to her if the things are related to kesar she becomes one directional nothing matters at all absolutely nothing

Kesar-Gulaal scene :- ☺️ ☺️ I can't express the amount of times I blushed n awwed..😳 during the time I read the last part ..☺️ ha ha ha i m not responsible for anything 😳
It's so amazing the way u portrayed their feelings specially Gulaal.😊 feeling bad for her ... yes their feeling during the intercourse were entirely different he wanted to love her to absorb all her pains and suffereing out of her body,he wanted to confort her love her... even in the state of delirium he wanted her happiness... he wanted to fill her heart with the tremendous love he has for her but she was suffering it wasnt her first choice...😳
Overall great part...👏 👏 👏 Hats off 2 u ...

Jaldi -Jaldi update karo next chappy I can't wait anymore Pleasshhh ... will try not so soon still bed ridden haaye budhapa 😭 thanks for ur lovely comment 🤗and ur emoticons are really cute





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poo_j

Loved it..😊 Wow!!! Gulaal how boldly took Dushyant..👏 OMG!!!😲 He is giving poison to Kesar..😡

not poison but a cheaped illicit adulterated liquor desi daaru...and gulaal was a woman of substance who took hold of her own destiny and charted a new course for womanhood -..hats off cv for bringing this beautiful character in tv land else in the name of strong independent woman all we get is a modern educated docile bahu whose sole purpose in life is to prepare basundi kheer just to win approval of dominanat saas...😕 this was a small tribute to her character

Kesar is completely broken..😭 Gulaal tried her best to make him understand and finally had no other option than to surrender herself to him!!! again this was one of the aspect of her tremendous strength... entire life she lived and protected her honor she even went against the set rules of society and married kesar she is one who would willingly die rather than risk her honor but wen it is kesar nothing matters at all

Kesar is happy and Gulaal not.. yaa the conflicting emotions 😳

Looking forward and thanks for writing an amazing update..😊 thanks for the comment it means alot 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
Arti . . .acha kia tune jo dushy aur jk ko gulaal ke haantho marvaya nahi . . .warna gulaal ko jail ho jaati toh kesar ka kya hota .😆 . .loved how she thrashed dushy jk along with those gundas . . . .she is toh always brave when it comes to kesar and family . . .chalo gulaal ke bheje mei baat toh ghusi ki kesar kitni dur nikal aaya hai . . .i loved the conversation between gulaal and kesar . . .kesar is so damn hurt . .ruining himself completly but i don't know what to say about last part . . .kesar warned her that he would not be able to stop himself . . .still gulaal surrendered to him . . .mujhe dar lag raha hai since gulaal did not feel anything toh uska reaction subah kya hoga . . .aur kesar ko jab pata chalega ki usne kya kia toh uska reaction kya hoga . . .is hanky panky ne story gadbadwa di hai . . 😆.arti jaldi update kar . .😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
haaye am so late here...
read the last two chapters now only..

was busy with another kesar..vaise bhi ye waali story tho menu pata hai na...isliye thodi late lateefi toh chalti hai😆

coming to the chapter...

haila kesuda becomes pakka drunkard waah...dushy ke bache...tere ko abhi tapakna tha...
gosh he is feeding poison to hamra kesar..screw u dushy...and he has full fledged plan to make my kesar all paapi...

but thank god gullu has sense..and she acted instantly to get rid off that dushy..wow

the bestest part was kesar's confession to gulaal..that was way too emotional..especially where he says "hamesha se pyaar karta aa raha hu..and all that""" brilliant lines there

but what the heck ..kesar told only to love back aur ye gullu chipak gayi..kesu na kaha na dont touch me ..fir bhi chipak gayi...
and mere kesar ki aisi ki taisi kar di usne...she dint feel anything with kesar...haye kesar ki izzat ki waat lag gayi...khud hi chadhar odwaathi hai ..khud hi utharwaati hai...not fair gullu...

i hate u gullu...tune mere kesare ko kahi ka nahi choda..ab vo kaise muh dikhayega tujhe...

btw forgot to say abt biji..i loved her..but poor biji she has no control over these two cranky ppl
Edited by nneeiill - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
^ ^ i so agree with u neilu . . . kesar ne love maanga tha usne chipakane wala love nahi manga tha . . .aur main janti hun yeh use hi ulta blame karegi .😭 .sachi apna kesar khud ko hi apna muh nahi dikha payega . .😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

aww so cute... sorry couldnt write too straneous waise bhi the story is utter crap😭 thnks dear 🤗

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