SS : KAREWA chapter 15 updated page 30...1st june - Page 16

Originally posted by: enchanted23

As the saying goes der aaye'durust aaye'so here I am with my two cents' worth..aditi 🤗its always great to hear from you thanks for the comment 🤗

Chapter 6 : I loved how you have kept Kesar's characterisation consistent with the show wala Kesar,he will not rest in peace till she has forgiven him for his mistakes and even if he has to give up his most favourite thing'.and the way he goes making declaration in public about his "yaar"'yeah toh sirf Kesar hi kar sakta hai'.The nauk jhok through the songs were really nice touch '..and Gulaal finally letting herself go and danced to the rhythm of her heart after a long time'hmm didn't she stop for a second to think what made her do that'.memories'

kesar character is more consistent with the young kesu...grown up one was so complex and messed up...here the dynamics is between young kesu and gulaal...they were far more romantic 😆

Kesar the only one who noticed and remembered her discomfort and the only one who actually came with the ointment for her swollen feet, yeah she craves for this Kesar, her Kesar the one who fulfils her, the one who completes her, the one she would do anything for, the one who she would always want to come running to her, the one who she would not bind her in any sort of relationship, the one who will set her free, her Kesar'.

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yes her needs and wants are different she doesnt view him romantically hell scared with his passion 😳

Chapter 7 : The classic pull and push begins, both right and both standing by what they believe in, guess one will end up being hurt in the process till love conquers it all'.That typical Kesarish gesture of not eating till he gets his way does give Gulaal some jitters na, there she is trying her best to get away and here he is pulling her with all his might''Loved the way he carefully carried her downstairs full of care and concern,completely forgetting their tiff from earlier'.

words adi the complexity about this simple story is about her virtues and promise not to have a relationship tht invokes physical desire... its about vunerability of being stucked in the relationship tht wants complete love...its about running from the risk of casting off her holier than thou status...😳 i dont know i made sense or not

Ahh he couldn't control himself but that's him na jo dil mein wahi face pe'so now she knows he has actually fallen for her and probably she will be blaming herself for it and he is afraid of his possessiveness and obsession!!! Gosh where is this leading to'

Interesting and intriguing updates Arti, will get to rest very soon' will do asap thanks alot and sorry for the short reply i m still in the recovery process thanks alot for the valuable comment🤗

Originally posted by: nneeiill

oh arti..glad to c u back..get well soon🤗

read both the chapters today

mai pehle hi bata du..mai kesar ke side hu...i am in kesar;s team..so no sympathy watsoever for gulaal...hey prabhu thodha to socho re itni bhi buri nahi hai 😆

kya haal bana diya usne mere kesare ka...haye haye munda even cut his hands...😲

inna pagalpan...i would say immature attitude just like chota kesu

.acha kaasa kisi ladki ko patatha agar ye karewa na karthi really do u really think so?😉😆

and now gullu is such a bedardi...😡..i actually feel way too bad for kesar..💔 oye gullu k baare mein bhi soch 😡😭 😆

wth she says she will end her life...itna torture kiya vo kam hai kya ki..aur dhamki de rahi hai... haan to wooh to hamesha se hi aisi thi dominating wife 😆

thanks neilu never ever forget tht u dragged me into this😭 to gullu ko gaali pade u come and face it 😆❤️ and sorry short reply k liye mom danda lekar beithi hai love u❤️

Originally posted by: MR21

Arti 🤗...this is full on kesarish chapter...thanks alot we love kesar saat khoon maaf haina 😆🤗

Felt really bad for kesar ...though gulaal is being forced into this marriage, she is the one who initiated it...i understand that kesar never listened to her reasoning about the karewa in the past but then gulaal should not have kept the distance by not meeting him all these years...if she would have tried to make him understand in all these years.

actually she tried her level best but he didnt understand and socho wat she would have explained him listen i m ur wife i married u but i cant love u 😕 hanky panky to hell no 😆 wooh kaise samjhati jokes apart the destiny led her to make a decision but she never thought he would take this reationhip seriously after all they never had any husband wife relationship she wanted to explain but he was in teen the teen itself are so complicated he would have messed it up big time so the idea was to stay away and let him understand by himself as he grow up 😳

..he would have atleast not forced her to accept him as her husband and to love him back...coming to biji n revji being not happy about kesar...did they ever tried to talk with kesar??? well no...did they ever thought about gulaal future once kesar will be back??? no...then why r they shocked and worried that kesar wants to continue this marriage.

actually noone was serious about this marriage they were kind of relive as the panchayat rest their decision on kesar they thought he is studying and as the well educated man he would understand the invaidity of this marriage oh he was just 15 wen he was married didnt he read its illegal to wed at this tender age 😳

..poonam is the only one who is thinking about gulaal n her future...she has a valid point that if kesar is 15 then even gulaal is 20 at that time of karewa...her worry for her daughter n her family is understandable...as expected gulaal is giving silent treatment to kesar and his situation is becoming worse now...looks like gulaal's words that she will end her life if he tries to come near her will lead him to keep his distance from her all these days...oh i m so predictable 😭

Awesome update Arti...do update the next chapter soon... will do thanks alot for ur comment it means a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: minizz

Arti,I hope you are feeling better now.

yaa better thanks alot 🤗

I loved both the chapters .The way Kesar confessed was great...loved the dialogues which were simple yet so genuine and effective but I really hated how he tried to emotionally blackmail her towards the end of the chapter.One thing I hate the most is threatening to kill yourself to make someone love you.It is not at all romantic and is actually quite distasteful

same here...😳... i hate all sorts of emotional blackmail and all tht ploughing and forcing me hate it to core...🤢 its just to show his imprudence...as .i have already said this is story about chota kesu and gulaal...and kesar was a mature as well as the reckless guy in the words of neil he is most genuine living person he is mature he is sensible yet reckless immature and impatient remember he climb the terrace and threatened to jump if he doesnt get the permission to go with her its just the extreme case of this "get her by hook or crook" attitude

and I am so glad you made Kesar from the present time regret it.

we love this about kesu he commits the mistake and regrets it later on😆 wen he blurted about dushyant's truth he regretted later on😳

This shows how mature he has become.He now knows that what he did may not have been the correct way of making her love him.I knew it that he would grow up and all this is just part of that growing up process just like in the show...loved it Arti😃I also blame Gulaal here.Instead of avoiding Kesar like plague during the years he was growing up she should have explained to him the situation but maybe she was scared...

she tried to make him understand but then knowing the fact tht it isnt leading anywhere she chose to stay away from him she wanted to wipe off this incidence so desparately but then left with no option she decided to maintain a distance she thought the education would make him understand the invalidity of this relationship ...he is a educated man a guy brought up in city he must have known how baseless this relation was... but this is kesar the most illogical guy in this whole world 😆

cause in this story she too is quite young na...just 5 yrs older than Kesar...awww so I forgive her

yaa not to forget she was just 20 and this is wat a 20 year old gal do hide herself 😆

.Kesar forcing her to accept his love was quite hard to see and I can understand Gulaal trying to distance herself which actually made Kesar all the more stubborn...dono ek se badhkar ek what to do na😆 haan so to hai ...Finally Gulaal had to use the same emotional athyachar trick that he used on her to make him come back to his senses...and I am pretty sure that that threat will do the trick...cause even though his way of showing his love is questionable there is no doubt that he loves her more than his life..may be maybe not 😆.without her he is nothing.A big round of applause for the dialogues in both the chapters Arti👏... thanks alot 😳I was so engrossed and sachi mein it was emotionally fulfilling to me...very nice... and though I am dying to know what happens next do take care of your health and write only if you are completely fine ok😃 aww thanks alot u know it was for ur bday so i hope u like it 🤗

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

OMG ...U r fab gal !!!!👏 👏 👏 aww thanks sonam... right 🤗i was waiting for ur comment (read greedily, anxiously...on one feet )U almost brought tears into my eyes! 😭 i so knew it this is gross utter crap...

that was too touching ...😭 I was able to picture everything u wrote, it's jus blew me away..Feeling bad for Kesar ...😭 Poor guy ...😒 oh ok 😆thanks alot we all feel bad for kesar he is so adorable 😳

Dialogues were in place too. so touchy ...😳 aww thanks once again *blush*☺️

Do I have to say this!! Oh yeah I'll *SCREAMS* PLEASE CONTINUE. u r a gifted writer ...😊 yes i m a gifted crap writer 😎 give me GK i make a worse story out of it

Did I forget to mention I need a PM ...??? Oops this is my first comment on ur FF.. i m so happy u did does bhangra Next time do PM Me K ...😊 without a fail trust me 🤗

Keep up the good work..👍🏼 thanks alot 😳🤗

CHAPTER 10 A

gulaal continued vasant ki sau (swear) kesar agar aaj k baad tune mere pass aane ki koshish ki yaa mujhse baat ki to mein apni jaan de dungi.

kesar shrieked in fear..The winters were cold enough to chill his blood but they were nothing compared to the coldness of the look gulaal gave to him''he shuddered at the mere thought of losing her his heart pounded heavily he felt sick and his legs trembled..he turned and ran outside the house

gulaal opened her eyes and extended her hand to stop him kesar."

Ratan singh asked "kya hua parjaiji"

She looked around she was in the car'.with a sigh she rested her head back she stayed passive her memories unfold in her mind little by little in a gradual act of reminsicene tht took deep courage to pursue'her decision'..her one decision changed everything'.she felt guilty may be she should have silently resigned to her brutual fate? maybe she should have consented to her silent deadth in the hands of dushyant tht day? life would have been more easier than

Maybe her sufference in silence must have been less painful than to see him suffering silently

Flashback

A year ago Sanour Punjab

kesar was walking slowly in the streets he was lost'''' her words "mein apni jaan de dungi kesar" kept haunting him'''he was blank he was wandering aimlessly the earth was resting under the cover of darkness black color had wholly diffuse the air the lamps were diminished nobody kept awake'.the night grew cold because it wasn't welcomed nobody loved it nobody cherished it...the night was gloomy and depressed... his hope faded in darkness...he felt his life was destroyed piece by piece within him.

He kept walking like a lifeless wood tht floats aimlessly in the sea his feet hurt and his legs threatened to collapse under him but it was nothing compared to the pain he felt in his heart'''..suddenly he heard the screeching sound of the engine brakes being applied'..

Dushyant got out of the jeep in haste''he looked at kesar''''.and said oye''. kesar tu? ki hoya'''. kabse horn de raha hai par tune sunana hi nahi hai''. ki gal hai? sab theek to haina ?

He looked at him in suspicious'kesar stood there like a statue his heart was broken and nothing could mend it

Dushyant put his hand on his shoulder and said "oye koi gal nahi''aur itni door nikal aaya hai chal mein tujhe chod deta hun"

Kesar brushed off his hand and said in barely audible tone mein

thek hun veerji'chala jaunga"

Dushyant looked at him carefully he was miserable heartbroken full of self pity'.he surely understood his plight'what a twist of tale.dushyant thought''.a cunning smile spread across his face he thought for a second and then said "arey kamal karta hai ek to veerji bhi kehta aur madad bhi nahi lena chahta'.koi nahi'''..bahoot dino baad mila hai chal aaj donno bhai chal kar todhi mauj masti karte hai'chal oye'.."

He insisted and compelled him to sit inside the jeep '..

Kesar sat inside blankly

Few minutes later

Dushyant's residence

Kesar was sitting on the terrace the night was cold enough to simply squeezed the soul out of him'the bonfire lit infront of him the heats from the flames were roasting but still he could not feel it, the numbing coldness only sensation''.. Oblivion of surrounding he kept staring into nothing

Dushyant was sitting adjacent to him he watched him in silence after a long pause he said "kesar''''' mujhse jyada tera dard kaun samajh sakta hai kesar"

Kesar looked at him

He nodded his head in consent "haan kesu''''.kuch saal pehle meine bhi kuch sapne dekhe the''kuch armaan is dil ne sanjaaye the" he said remembering his past '.

He paused and resumed "par wooh armaan miti mein mil gaye '.."

stretching his arms over the flames of cracking fire he continued "mere bhi sapne tute hai isliye teri haal samajh sakta hun '."

kesar was in tears dushyant had touched his sour wound but before his sorrow began to speak he silenced his grief'''

dushyant resumed "sapne tutne ki awaaz nahi hoti kesar par dard'''.par dard bahoot hota hai'''"he sighed

tera dard mein baant to nahi sakta''par ek cheez hai jo tera dard kam kar sakti hai"

saying this he grabbed a bottle of whisky uncorked the bottle and poured a shotful and extended to kesar'''. he said "yeah le kesu pee le yeah kadwi cheez kadwi yaadein ko door rakhne mein madad karegi"

kesar glanced at the alchohol''.he had never touched a drop of liquor his gulaal used to tell him tht alchohol ruined lives but today for the first time he took it as he felt he had nothing else to lose in life''''he grabbed it and took a big swig It burned like an acid he coughed and gagged'' he gasped hard as the pain railed him..he gasped a bit and shook his head

dushyant looked at him and rubbed his back and said rehne de tu nahi sehen kar paayega'''

kesar stared at him and said painfully "agar aisa hai veerji to aur do''''..mein dekhna chahta hun ki aisa kaun sa dard hai jo is dard se bada hai''..itna ki mein bardaasht naa kar pau"

and he grabbed a bottle put it to his lips and drank it the whisky ran down his parched throat he shook his head '.the pain slowly subsided as the alchohol flowed through his blood and veins'''''.he leaned back and finished the bottle himself''.he felt light the bottle dropped''.. Everything appeared fuzzy and spinning in his mind'.'''. The pain began to die down as the whiskey flowed hot through her veins and numbed his pain ridden body.

while dushaynt sat there looking at him he smiled at his dry and ashy fate just like tiny piles of ashes tht emerged from the roaring bonfire''..shivering and empty''''

after some time kesar stood up he trembled terribly dushyant tried to support him but he said "rehne do veerji'..is dard ko akele bardasht karne do" and he left

after some time he reached home he was so drunk tht he could hardly stand on his feet

he staggered climbing upstairs''.he trembled and looked at gulaal's room he walk towards it but his feet froze remembering the words of gulaal "kesar agar tu mere pass bhi aaya yaa mujhse baat bhi ki to mein apni jaan de dungi"

he stopped and stood bracing himself against the pillar to ease the nausea rocking his body

in dizziness he uttered "gulaal'''.."

he thought she was sleeping but no how could she ? she was waiting for him every minute every second she stood there in the balcony waiting for him to return..her heart was beating fastly with every passing hr she prayed to goddess for his safety as soon as she heard his voice she rushed to the door she wanted to hold him nag him for his reckless behaviour'''..but as she heard him calling out his name her eyes widened in shock his voice quivered''''y his voice slurred the words as though he was drunk?'oh yes he was DRUNK!!!''..gulaal was horrified she stood close to the door

kesar said in half dizzy state "gulaal mein tere pass bilkul nahi aaunga tujhe apni shakkal bhi nahi dekhunga'''..bas tu kuch karna mat'''..tu aapne aap ko kuch hone nahi dena nahi to mein jee nahi paunga..mein mar jaunga"''.. he said and suddenly everything blurred and he collapsed'''there was a grave silence gulaal stood for few minutes and then slopped on the floor she wept bitterly her dreams died'"aaj tak tune jo maanga mein diya meine diya par yeah zid mein nahi maan sakti yeah paap hai"''she cried for hrs

kesar squinted as he awoke to find himself sleeping on the floor infront of her room he closed his eyes and opened it again to find everything was blurry he tried to stood up but felt a sharp pain in his head he was confused slowly his awareness came into focus as he tried to decipher what had happened'..he remembered he was drunk he got up in haste he was suspicious and hesistant'.he put his hand on his forehead in desperation'''.the smell of alcohol still bathed his whole being''he looked at gulaal who was present in the room he was apprehensive'.he thought she might scold him for drinking'''but she stood unmoved instructing preeto about the daily chores her face was impassive difficult to read she dusted the furniture arranged the sofa cushion completely ignoring him as if he never existed for her''''.

he kept on looking at her may be she would turn around maybe she would nag him maybe she would give a long dreary sermons on the harmful affect of alcohol'''.but she remained aloof and unresponsive there was a unsusual silence and it irritated him to no end'''''''.

in anger he slammed his fist on the wall and took out his mobile and dialled a number

he said "dushyant veerji"?

dushyant smiled and said "uth gaya tu mujhe to laga aaj to uthana nahi hai tujhe"

he frowned and said "veerji kya mein aa sakta hun"

dushyant grinned and said "oye tu sada munda hai aur ghar bhi tera'''.jab marzi hoye aa jaa"

kesar said firmly "to thek hai veerji mein adhe ghante mein milta hun"

he disconnected the phone and left the room angrily''..alas is she could have stopped him tht day

''from tht day kesar was frequently absent from his house his factory'.he would rather spend his day and night at night cosuming alchohol'..he wanted to torment himself'. so he would drunk until the nerves in his eyelid would became paralyzed his mind would give up and he would reach to the state of delusion where loving her was not a sin''''kesar was now drinking everyday in excessive amount

his drinking issues became a serious concern for biji she tried to make him understand but he plainly refused to listen

in desperation and in distress she decided to talk to gulaal ''''

biji headed to her room and called for her "gulaal"

gulaal looked behind she stood up and asked "ki hoya biji ap pareshan lag rahe ho?"

she said "gulaal kesar ko samjha dekh kya kar raha hai wooh sharab peene laga hai buri sangat mein rehna laga hai tu samajha use"

gulaal retorted "nahi biji ache se janti hun mein'..mujhe takleef dena chahta hai khud ko chot pahuncha kar..bachapan ki aadat rahi hai kaise bhi karke apni zid manwata raha hai'..meine hi bigada hai use'''par ab aur nahi yun har baar apni manmaani nahi kar sakta'use samajhana hoga jo wooh chahta hai wooh namumkin hai"

biji remained silent for a sec and then asked wisely "kyu gulaal yeah kyu namumkin hai"

gulaal was shocked'''''..her biggest strength was questioning her

she turned around and said in disbelief "biji aap kaise baat kar rahi hai"

biji made her sit beside her she put hand on her forehead and said dekh "gulaal tu galat mat samajh, meine tujhe apni bachi k tarah paala hai, pehle tu meri beti hai baad mein kesar"

"mein kesar k nahi teri baat kar rahi hun''.tune kabhi apne bhavish k bare mein socha hai''

gulaal yanha aurat ko jeene ka mauka nahi milta'''aur jaruri nahi ki sar dhaakne waala devta hi ho''.. jyadatar to sirf mard hote hai''remembering her past how savage her husband was''. she still has the mark of his brutuality on her skin the day he died she didn't cried but took a deep sigh of relief'''''.

She continued "jarori to nahi jisese shaadi ho usese pyaar ho...kuch rishte jindagi ki jarurat ko poori karne k liye hote hai...harz hi kya hai isme"

gulaal stood up she said "harz hai biji wooh kesar hai biji kesar"

biji shoted back "gulaal aur bhi auraton ka karewa hota hai to phir"

gulaal looked in her eyes and said "biji aur karewa mein aur is karewa mein farq hai'''kesar tab bacha tha''use to pata hi nahi tha shadi byah rishte naate kya hote hai...use meine sochne aur samjhane ka mauka bhi nahi diya aur apne saath bandh liya" her guilt was apparent

she continued "biji meine janati hun kesar bada ho raha hai is rishtey k liye uska aakarshit (attraction ) hona samajh sakti hun mein''..par biji pal do pal k aakarshan (attraction) ko pyaar nahi kehte"

aaj apne junoon mein use kuch nahi dekh raha hai par kal jab yeah junoon khatam hoga tab kya hoga yahi rishta uske liye ghutan ban jayega... bojh ban jaayega''..biji kya wooh yeah nahi kahega ki mein bhavna mein bah gaya tha par tujhe kya hua gulaal tune kyu nahi khud ko sambhala''kya jawab mein dungi biji'''nahi biji mujhe kesar k sau ilzaam manzoor hai par yeah hargiz manjoor naa hoga''.meri niyat mein koi khot nahi hai' phir meine kesar ko bade hote dekha hai uske sar par ek bade k tarh haath rakha hai khud vasant k tarah uski jimmedaari nibhayi hai'''uske bare mein aisa sochna bhi paap hai... narak mein bhi jagah nahi milege mujhe chii'''

biji said par gulaal tu'''

gulaal begged nahi biji''''ek baar meri jagah par rakh dekhiye biji'meine apne pati se bahoot pyaar kiya tha unki jagah kisi aur ko kaise de do...yeah dhokha hai unke saath unki yaadon k saath''' nahi biji...pyaar sirf ek baar hota hai aur meine apne hisse ka pyaar kar liya... mein vasant ko apna sab kuch saup chuki hun ab phir se khud ko kaise kisi aur ko saup dun...nahi mein vasant ko dhokha nahi de sakti unke saath...saath phere'''.saath vachan liye the''. meine saat janam tak sirf unki rahungi ...yeah kasam khayi thi'''phir kaise usko apne man mein basa lun? '.''.mein use us nazar se nahi dekh sakti" and she cried

"Kesar k aane waale kal k liye yahi behtaar hai k mein usese door rahu" she cried

biji look down and consoled her she said in distress "gulaal tujhe aane waali kal ki chinta hai aur mein to aaj ko lekar darr rahi hun''..kahin aavesh mein aakar usne koi galat kadam utha liya toh" she feared

gulaal looked fearful she replied nahi biji aisa kuch nahi hoga'..wooh kuch nahi karega bas thodhi si zid hai kuch din mein shaant ho jaayega

but nothing changed everyday he returned home staggering trembling muttering her name "gulaal" wen other ppl came forward to support him he yelled at them saying '''. "tum gulaal nahi hai phir kyu aayo ho mere pass dur raho mujhse''..dur"

biji was miserable'her both children stood at either side of same river and she was helpless she made one more attempt to talk to him...she went inside his room

kesar was drunk he saw biji and turned his face in guilt''..never in his life he thought he would face his biji in a drunken state he was ashamed of himself yet helpless

biji looked at him and said "kyu''.muh kyu chupa raha hai'kya hua sharam aa rahi hai

she made him look towards her "agar aa rahi hai to chod kyu nahi deta'''kesar kya kar raha hai tu apne saath''.yeah galat hai'in boori adaaton mein kaise pad gaya''''. rok apne aap ko kesar rok le"

kesar looked at biji and said "biji aapne bhi to nahi roka tha''. 8 saal pehle jab aapke beta ka karewa hua tha tab aapne kyu nahi roka '''''kyu nahi kaha gulaal se yeah galat hai...kyun nahi kaha sabse yeah galat hai. kyu biji'.."

kesar looked at her questioning her'.

Biji was shocked to hear his response

She was deeply hurt she lowered her eyelids and said in distress "aurat ko kuch kehne sunane aur faisla karne ka adhikaar kahan hota hai kesar'.use to sirf aadmi k zid k aage jhukna padta hai"

She said painfully "khush mein tab bhi nahi thi khush mein aaj bhi nahi hun''.kesar mein wooh faisla to ruk nahi paayi par tujhe'.tujhe to rok sakti hun''..kesar jis raaste par tu jaa raha hai wooh sirf barabadi ki aur jaata hai'ruk jaa is pehle ki sab khatam ho jaaye"

Kesar turned his face away as if anything else was left in his life''his life was empty''

She said "aur jis insaan par bharosa kar raha hai wooh bharose k layak nahi hai'..dushyant sahi insaan nahi hai kesar"

Kesar replied "jis par sabse jyada bharosa kiya biji usne bhi to dhoka hi diya hai'phir kya sahi or kya galat?"

Biji retorted "kesar tu gulaal ko galat samajh raha hai

Kesar replied "sahi to ab samjha hun mein biji use'.uski soch ko ''..sirf apne liye mera istamaal kiya aur phir phenk diya''" he cried his heart out

In anger and frustration he said "nahi socha tha wooh inti matlabi hogi wooh toh'''''jamuna kaki sahi kah rahi thi ki usne jayadad k liye''"

Before he could say any further biji slapped him hard

Kesar was shocked he looked at biji in disbelief

Biji yelled "kya bak raha hai tu hosh bhi tujhe tu gulaal''''..gulaal k liye aisa soch raha hai'sharm aati hai mujhe aapne aap''.tujhse toh baat bhi karna paap hai

He yelled back "to phir kyu baat kar rahe ho biji aap bhi dur ho jao jaise wooh ho gayi'mat aao mere passs aur'''bhagwaan k liye mujhe mat baatiye k meri bhalai kisme hai rehne dijeye mujhe akele"

Biji was filled with tears she said in distress thek hai kesar "tera jo jee mein aaye woo kar mein nahi rokungi tujhe bas menu rab se sirf ek hi shikayat rahegi ki usne mujhe do bete kyu diye?kyu meri wajah se us bachi ko itna kuch sehna pad raha hai" she cried and left the room in haste

Kesar extended his hands to stop her he hurted her'''.he hurted the most important person in his life he felt shock, then anger, then disgust at himself.' .he put his hand on his forehead and turned around and saw her pictures on the table smiling contendly he looked at her with bitter hate he picked her pics stared the pics with anger and threw it with force'''

Unable to control his emotions he slopped on ground and weeped bitterly''"I HATE U GULAAL '''.DAMM I HATE U"'''.

continued in the next post 😳

CHAPTER 10 B

with bitter hate he picked her pics stared the pics with anger and threw it with force'''

Unable to control his emotions he slopped on ground and weeped bitterly''"I HATE U GULAAL '''.DAMM I HATE U"'''.

.a pair of eyes cried along with him too, gulaal who was standing outside the room she heard all the conversation between biji and kesar her heart was filled with immense sorrow''..but too late his drinking habits increased every day and night life began to spiral out of her control''''.

Everyone was concerned except one who took the advantage of his generousity in the drunken state'' Dushyant'''he asked for money property his share in his business and kesar give it all without asking any questions without any worries'.day byday dushyant's involvement in the business increased''.he fiddled with accounts manipulated the numbers he did everything to gain his control on business but kesar didn't bother at all

''''for him nothing mattered absolutely nothing

Dushyant was sitting in his cabin he was incessantly happy a wide smile spread across his face as he saw the bundle of note on the table he grabbed the the bundle and threw a triumphant glee at it

Suddenly the door opened with the bang and kunal barged in the room

Dushyant was startled he quickly put the rs bundle in the drawer and said "arey kunal aisa kaise bhaaga chala aa raha hai sab khair to haina?

Kunal looked at him and gritted his teeth he said angrily "meri khairyaat k baarein mat sochiye tussi yeah dasso ki jo factory k workers k payment k liye jo paise kesr ne diye the wooh kanha hai"

Dushyant hesisted a bit he said "kaise baatein kar raha hai wooh paise to meine bank mein jama kara diye"

Kunal's temper flared the higher he said"acha to aapke pass koi bank ki slip koi receipt to hogi naa"

Dushyant grew angry'he threw a angry glance at him and said "oye tu mujhse paise ka hisab poochega are aukat mat bhul tu srif naukar hai teri himmat kaise hui malik se kuch bhi poochne ki"

Kunal shoted back "aukat aap bhul rahe ho veerji malik aap nahi kesar hai'aur haan jis din is factory k malik ne aapse saawal kiye aapko aapki aukat ache se pata chal jaayegi"

Dushyant clenched his fist in anger he was about to say something but kesar arrived at the spot

Kunal looked at kesar he took a huge sign of relief he moved ahead and said "acha hua kesar tu aa gaya mujhe tujhse kuch jarori baat karni hai"

Dushyant was scared the sweat popped on his forehead and his face turned pale he intervened in between "arey kar lena jaruri baat abhi kesar ko chain se beithne to de jao jaakar paani bolo"

Kunal looked at dushyant in irritation he said "kesar plz sirf do min"

Kesar looked at him uninterested he said "kunal plz baad mein kar lena mujhe abhi dushyant veerji se kuch baat karni thi

Kunal pursued "kesar plz listen"

Kesar said kunal kaha naa baad mein abhi tu jaa turning away his face away from him

Kunal looked at him helplessly''..while dushyant took a huge sigh of relief he threw a victory smile at him kunal frowned and quietly went out of the cabin

Duhyant looked at kesar and asked haan bol kesar ki gal karni thi

Kesar took a deep breath and said "dushyant veerji wooh stock khatam ho raha hai aur chahiye tha referring to the stock of liquor

Dushyant looked at kesar and a cunning smile spread across his face he said "arey stock khatam ho raha to koi gal nahi hum kis vaaste hai'.chal aaj tujhe aise jagah le chalta hun janha jaakar tu apni saari yaadein ko peeche chod dega'."

Kesar looked at him curiously "kanha veerji"

Dushyant smiled and said "are chal naa sab kuch yahi poochega chal:'..he holded his hand and led him out of the cabin kunal was listening the whole conversation he grew suspicious he saw them leaving'he thought for a moment and called his trusted collegue "suno unke peeche jao aur dekho kesar ko dushyant veerji kahna le jaa rahe hain aur haan dhyaan rahe dushyant veerji ko pata naa chale"

After some times the collegue returned and he told whatever he saw kunal stood numb for a second'he took a deep breath and said "parjaiji ko batana hi hoga"

Half an hour later

kunal was sitting at his residence he was disturbed his legs shake in discontentment'..how would he tell her he was nervous

Gulaal came with the tea and snacks and said "kunal tu kitne dino baad aaya hai aur bata factory mein sab thek thak chal raha hai na?"

Kunal took a deep sigh and said "nahi parjaiji kuch bhi thek nahi hai vyapar mein bahoot nuksaan ho raha hai aur is sab k wajah hai dushyant veerji hai wooh bahoot gadbadi kar rahe hai parjaiji

Gulaal took a deep sigh and said "tumne kesar ko bataya"

Kunal said "kesar kisi k sune tab naa bahoot baar batane ki" koshish ki dushaynveerji hisaab mein gadbad kar rahe hai''anap shanap kharch kar rahe hain par wooh sunana hi nahi chahta"

"Usko to khud ko barbaad kar dene ka junoon sawar ho gaya kya kare kuch samajh nahi aa raha"

Gulaal took a deep breath "kunal panchayat ne to mujhe factory k kaam dekhne se manaa kar diya hai mein dhakal nahi de sakti hum kya kar sakte hai"

Kunal replied "hum nahi parjaiji sirf aap kar sakti hai''.. sirf aap hi kesar ko samjha sakti hai''..parjaiji aap janti hai kesar sirf aapki sunta hai bachpan se hi usne sirf aapki suni hai''aap use samjhati kyu nahi''"

Gulaal stood up she turned around and with gloom in her eyes she said "bachpan k bat alag thi ab wooh bada ho gaya'kahan kisi ki sunega''''"

Kunal retorted "nahi parjaiji agar aap bhi aisa sochegi to kesar ka kya hoga yun is tarah usese muh naa modiye'''"

Gulaal stood silent'..

Kunal looked at her in vunerability he said "din raat sharab ki nashe mein dubba rehta hai aur ab'ab to had hi ho gayi'..aaj dushyant veerji use aisi jagah le gaaye kehte hue bhi sharm aa rahi hai"

Gulaal was alarmed she was horrified she asked in suspicion "kahan'."

Kunal stood silent she asked again "dushyant use kahan le gaya"

Kunal lowered his eyelid and said in the barely audible voice "tarunnum bibi k kothe par"

Gulaal was shocked she felt as if someone has squeezed blood out of her skin'how could he stoop so low''' she felt disgusted'''.she cried "kothe pe''..kesar aisa kaise kar sakta hai'''..

She put her hand on her forehead and cried " use kuch bhi hosh nahi biji ko pata chelga to kya beetege unpar"

Kunal folded his hand and said with teary eyes "parjaji mujhe kesar k bahoot chinta ho rahi hai'''..mein uski yeah halat nahi dekh sakta''."

He left with teary eyes

After he left gulaal went in her room and closed the door she felt dead and numb she felt lifeless she felt like someone ripped her heart took her soul away her throat choked with emotions she couldn't even breath''..the pain was unbearable she was stricken with guilt'..wat has she done? Did her one decision ruined him irrevocably

the feeling sank deep within her''''''.she looked at vasant's picture tht hung proudly on her bedroom wall and broke down into hysterical tears "mujhe maaf kar do vasant haar gayi mein''.mein haar gayi'''.kesar k jimmedaari nahi nibha paayi sab meri wajah se"

Late night

it was dark'it was a dark cloudy night with no moon and no stars Gulaal was pacing in the balcony with the quick steps her face flushed with anger''and the tears drops kept falling on the balcony' she was breathing heavily and her heart was pounding as if she had ran a marathon''she was waiting for him anxiously''

few minutes later she heard the jeep stopping outside her house she reached the balcony in haste and saw kesar''..she rushed to the door to hold him''''

kesar was trembling coz of the effect of alcohol, dushyant came out of the car and supported him'"oye sambhal kar"

gulaal was alarmed she frowned'''.grew suspicious she hide beside the pillar

kesar looked at dushyant and said "kuch nahi veerji thek hun mein"

dushyant said "thek to hona hi tha jagah jo topclass thi'''acha bata kaise laga wanha par"

kesar nodded his head and said "acha"

dushyant smiled and asked "aur tarunnum bi'wooh kaise lagi" as if he even noticed her'''he was sitting there like a lost in his own world oblivion to the surroundings

kesar said in low voice "achi thi'''"gulaal heard this and she felt a sharp sting at her heart''''''

kesar said "acha veerji raat bahoot ho gayi rab khair kare"''.

Dushyant stopped him he said "arey kesar tujhse kuch kaam tha

wooh subah ekdum bhul gaya wooh factory k liye kuch papers mein sign karwana tha"

kesar looked at the stamp papers he smiled and signed it without reading it'

dushyant had a huge grin on his face he smiled and said "arey padh to leta"

kesar looked at him and said "bharosa hai veerji aap ho naa mujhe kahan yeah sab samajh mein aata hai"

dushyant looked at him and said "oye koi gal nahi kesar tu chinta naa kar mein huna mein sab sambhal lunga jaa soo jaa raat bahoot ho gayi hai..''

kesar nodded his head and walked inside the house with his trembling legs''. he walked past gulaal''''.she slid beside the pillar little farther so tht noone notice her

dushyant looked at kesar and shouted "rab khair kare tera kesar and he broke into laughter'''par kaise dushyant tera bhala hone hi nahi dega"

gulaal looked at dushyant wat was he upto? She grew fearful

dushyant turned around''.sat in his jeep and went away

gulaal was suspicious she stood there for a moment undecided and then she decided to follow him'.with quick steps she followed dushyant to his home''as she neared the house she heard some voices low mumbling rising n breaking into cynical laughter she slowed her pace to trying to make out wht he was saying she stepped closer to a window rested her hand on it to hear the conversation

Jamuna kaki said with winful smile "waah kamal kar diya dushyant ek hi jhatke mein aam ka bageecha haitya liya" looking at the legal papers

Gulaal mouth parted in a frieze of disbelief and horror''..her throat impaled in fear

Dushyant said with his cunning smile "dekhte jao maa abhi to bas shuruaat kaise mein us ghar k neeche se zameen kheench lunga bas kuch der k baat aur hai'''"

Dekha biji kismet ka khel barso pehle jis hukkum k patte ko gulaal ne mere khilaf chala tha aaj wahi mera ghulam ban gaya"

Bahoot neecha dikhaya hai gulaal ne'pal pal zaleel kiya hai ab meri baari hai aisa sabak sikhaunga ki zindagi bhar tadpadi rehegi"

Gulaal was breathing heavily her eyes rolled out as she felt the mix of anger and frustration in her body and mind she was feeling tense she still clenched her fists and continued to listen to their evil plans with her increased breath

Jamuna kaki frowned and said haan "chodna mat use''. deemak k tarah khatam kar dena is parivaar ko'..aur us kesar ko nashe mein aisa uljha dena k khoon k ansoo roye wooh gulaal"

Dushyant replied "nahi maa itni asaan keemat thodha naa hai meri beizaati ki''.gulaal ne saalon pehle jo mere saath kiya uska badla kesar chukaayega apne khoon se''''..

marna hoga use'' marna hoga kesar ko'''haan maa dekhna tadap tadap kar marega wooh" he said with deep hatred in his eyes

Gulaal was horrified and in fury her jaws tightened as her eyes grew red''her blood tingled hot and cold in turns her frustration turned to rage - wild ungoverned fearless rage'.unable to bear any further she grabbed the sickle on her hand tht lied on the sack of wheat and roared at the top of the voice "dushyant"