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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Piu,sorry about the late reply.My laziness is to blame😭

Chapter-6:Thank you Piu.I am so glad you loved this chapter.The pond scene was actually inspired from the show so it makes me so happy that you were able to relate to it.hahahaha I am loving the name Hitler didi and awww I loved the lines.

Chapter-7:Piu...I am so happy that you loved the paap.I was so nervous about it.You know na...The dance was so difficult to describe.I kept watching a dance video to look at the steps and write it down.It was quite a nightmare for a non dancer like me.haan they are realizing it slowly but there will be hiccups along the way.Thank you so much for the lovely comments

Chapter-8:No problem yaar.Look at me I am replying to the comments so late.haan Piu even I am wondering the same yeh dono kab samjhenge hahahaha hopefully soon.haan I do love Talli's character actually if only the CVs had not inserted her in every scene I would have actually loved her a lot.So my Talli here is going to be quite sensible and sweet.I loved what you wrote about Gulaal.so true.she lets down her guard only in front of Kesar and I guess Talli has realized that.Thank you so much for your awesome comments and so sorry for my late comments.

Chapter-9:hahaha Piu thank you yaar.I know I had to make him sleep agar abhi sab kuch hogaya toh phir UST ka kya hoga hehehe...I am so happy that you loved the Kesar MB convo.yes Gullu is finally getting the love.She is now part of the family...something she has always craved for.haan sorry about that glass piece...I needed it so please us glass piece ko dosh math do bechara innocent hai hahahaha.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Arti,sorry about the late reply but I am here now

Chapter-6:Thank you Arti.I am so happy that you could feel for Kesar's pain and anger.I was a little nervous about it.awww so true thanks for reminding me.They are partners in the truest sense.

Chapter-7:Thank you Arti for your lovely comment.I am so happy that you liked the dance.It was very difficult for me to describe

Chapter-8:I am so glad you loved the chapter

Chapter-9:hahaha thank you so much Arti for liking the pseudo chiii wala chapter.I know the glass piece played the spoilsport na.I hope I can make up to you in the upcoming chapters.awww I am so happy that you liked the Kesar-MB convo.haan Kesar ka shirt utaar diya hehehe.oh that scene was really tricky for me yaar.I was very nervous writing it.I am glad that you liked it.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Kalika,thank you so much for your constant support and your beautiful flowers.I love them all.It means a lot to me

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Jzee,sorry about the late reply.

awww koi baat nahi Jzee,better late than never and I am so happy to see you here and awww you noticed it.You guessed it right... I am kind of concentrating on Kesar at the moment cause I am planning to explore Gulaal's feelings a bit later.You are absolutely spot on about Gulaal's character especially the part about expectations and exerting rights.I want to show the change in her gradually.Hope I will be able to do that.yep the Kesar-Talli angle is sure to create some hiccups for our "duffer" duo.You read my characters so well it amazes me.Thank you so much for your beautiful analysis.

...yep the turmoil has just started now that their feelings are involved.haan my Talli Rani is not going to be like her counterpart from the show hehehe.She quickly understood that Kesarji ke mann mein toh Gulaal hai and here Gullu is not going to brainwash her so yep Talli will be the sensible friend and sister they both will need in the upcoming chapters.Dushyant...haan I do have something planned out for him.Let's see what happens.Thank you so much for the lovely comments

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Saamya,sorry for the late reply.

Thank you Saamya.I am so glad you loved all those scenes and that you were able to realte to Kesar's pain.

I love Dushyant's character a lot.For me he can never be the typical two dimensional villain and even though he doesnt have a major role here I wanted him to stand out and I am so happy with the response to his character.awww you noticed that bit about Gulaal facing upto Dushyant bravely.I did not want her to appear weak or give up.She was going to try to rescue herself from his evil intentions.

hahaha Saamya...I am so happy that I could provide you with some sukoon.aww you have no idea how much your comment about the last scene means to me.I was very very nervous writing it.I did not know whehter it would be very convincing.So yes thank you for giving my dil some sukoon...hahaha.Nahiii yeh kya keh rahi ho Saamya Talli ko bas ek chota peak naseeb hua tha she did not get to see him totally shirtless hehehe.I wish it had been Gullu in that scene...why couldn't she have brought the nimbu paani?Maybe I will add it in my next chapter.haan his shirtless avatar as Lakshman... somehow it just doesn't appeal to me that much now if it was minus the wig and a pair of jeans instead of that dhoti hmmm now that I would have loved.ok so let me stop before I become too besharam.Thank you so much Sammya for the wonderful comments

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: princessofkesar
mini bada waala sorry,😭
i m super duper late

but really loving this story , not only kesgul but
dulli is also quiet interesting yaar.

i m not able to give my detail comment as read few chapter 2-3 days back , few yest and sum today.

but mini i feel this is ur best ss.
kesgul r awesome

loving dulli story too

thanks 4 pm🤗

Shradha,so glad to see you here.Thank you so much.I am very happy that you are liking the story😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: NivRen_1
Thanks for the PM you sent i have been so busy so i havent had a chance to read but i read all 9 chapters together and i love the story line and how the characters are developing.
please PM me the next update
Thanks

awww thank you so much.I am so happy that you are liking the story and the characters.It means a lot to me.I will definitely PM you😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: sharmishta
Mini,🤗
for dis awsme chappi... so sorry 4 dis super late chottu cmmnt... am really busy... hpe u'll undrstnd... keep writing... waitn 4 a full on chiii chappi...

awww Sharmishta,I am missing your cute emoticons yaar😭so happy to see you😃Take care😊

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

dont u think we should get the chii chapii after that glass piece fiasco chii night

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: arti07
dont u think we should get the chii chapii after that glass piece fiasco chii night

Arti🤗I am so sorry about the delay.I have started writing the chapter now.I will surely make it up to you with a lengthy update and hopefully with something interesting😊

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