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Incense

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

res and throw that glass piece😡 chii it ruined the chii night😭 and i love the chapii love is in the air😳

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Mini A big Jhappi 😛.Hum paapi atmaon ko sukoon aya 😳

.But grrr How can you make him sleep😡Awww Lovely update...😳Talli feels like an OUTSIDER 😆 m so happy😆 ..and Awww the father son convo was so heart wrenching..It reminded me of the show ka MB and Kesar convo...Very nicely written..and then the bonding with rewa was awesome too...Gulaal is finally getting all the love she had been missing due to her step mother..In totality a complete family..

Kesar's turmoiL and emotional upheaval was so beautifully written..What started as a compassionate gesture finally turned out to be passionate when two souls who yearn for each other were together without any inhibitions ending up the resistance but chiii DAMN that glass piece😡but honestly I loved the wonderful romance so ...ab next update mein aur paap lao😳Me waiting desperately🤗

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EXOL

@EXOL

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

wowie dil ko sukhoon after a chi chappi😆

btw i loved the MB n Kesar scene, gulaal and rewa scene..and wow apni talli was dushy ki deewani once upon a time...interesting dynamics there...

bed room scene was really bfully written...but ye kya he slept...hai ram..😆

btw shirtless kesar...so dreamyyy

show mai shirtless kesar ke darshan talli ko hua tha na😆

and now a days shirtless neil ke darshan is for all the janta 😛

chalo chalo give us update fast..i wanna give him a fatka for sleeping...

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Incense

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

minizz hats off girl what a brilliant chapii it is and what a start ,,,,,,,,,they were still in each other arms blush blush and talli is a sensible girl here and she has ahem ahem for dushy girls do fall for for a bad guy...hmmm and chalo dushy is ashamed of himself better late than never and then convo with MB was beautiful i always loved MB for this intellegence and sensiblity and rewa is a sweetheart and gulaal instead of attending to her wounded husband is busy with talli rani hey raam and kesar standing shirtless OMG and doing patti to himself he must be in pain and good gulaal got some senses and came to his room and lovely description of emotions feelings pull everything was so blissful i totaly loved how kesar accpeted that he need her he was drunk his feeling finally found a vent and wow it was intense scene everything was so heavenly and damm that glass piece and he slept arey yaar isko lakhsman kisne banaya he should be playing kumbhkaran instead sorry got carried away but he slept😭 mein gullu k jagah hoti to two tight slap deti but she is gulaal thats y we love them overall i loved this pseudi chii chapii😆

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MR21

@MR21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Unres done in previous page😃

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SRJKiShraddha

@SRJKiShraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

mini bada waala sorry,😭

i m super duper late

but really loving this story , not only kesgul but

dulli is also quiet interesting yaar.

i m not able to give my detail comment as read few chapter 2-3 days back , few yest and sum today.

but mini i feel this is ur best ss.

kesgul r awesome

loving dulli story too

thanks 4 pm🤗

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NivRen_1

@NivRen_1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Thanks for the PM you sent i have been so busy so i havent had a chance to read but i read all 9 chapters together and i love the story line and how the characters are developing.

please PM me the next update

Thanks

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SHARMISHTA

@sharmishta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Mini,🤗
for dis awsme chappi... so sorry 4 dis super late chottu cmmnt... am really busy... hpe u'll undrstnd... keep writing... waitn 4 a full on chiii chappi...

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Aditi,sorry for the super late reply but I am here now so here goes

Chapter-6:Thank you so much Aditi for loving the cutie Kesar.Yep the journal had been his only confidante until now and yes he would have written down all of his feelings in it but now he has someone to share his thoughts with...as you said his best friend...his soul mate ...his wife Gulaal.Though I do think he does have to over come some obstacles and then only will he come to realize how important Gulaal is to him and what he exactly feels for her.awww thank you loving the small scene with the present.Gulaal is beginning to know him but there might be bumps on the road in the next few chapters.

Chapter-7:awww haan Aditi our hero is a bholuram but he did have his suspicions.He just thought that Dudhyant might have moved on just as he did but I guess it was not the case.I too am loving writing this adorable Kesar and easy going Gullu and yep he can be quite dense at times...bechari Gullu.yep Aditi he will realize it soon that what he felt for Talli was maybe not love...I will try to put in a dance Aditi...thank you for the wonderful comments.

Chapter-8:Aditi,you have helped me out so much while writing this chapter so big hug to you.I would have been lost without your help here.haan I never wanted to make Dushaynt a typical villain.I love his character too much for that hehehe.awww yes the conversation that Gulaal overheard definitely will play some role.so true yaar he was angry at himself because he blames himself for being responsible for this mess.wow that last para was beautifully put.Thank you so much for your awesome analysis and your support throughout.

Chapter-9:Awww Aditi,thank you yaar.haan Talli is intelligent in some ways and she has a clear heart and is very straightforward.She has never seen Kesar as anything other than a friend and so the question doesn't even arise in her mind that he might have feelings for her.Good for us nahehehe.A big hug yaar you noticed that little look that Guaal was giving Kesar and yep that was exactly what I had wanted to show.So this made me so happy.haan bechara thak gaya tha it was physically and emotionally exhausting na and upar se he was drunk too toh yeh toh hona hi tha...aaah this reminds me of the Rishi-Neetu song "Ek main aur ek Tu"hahaha

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Ramya,so sorry for my late reply.I will try to be regular from now on😃

Chapter-6:Thank you Ramya.Yes Kesar and Gulaal's realtionship is deepening though they themselves are not quite aware of how deep it actually is.I am so happy that you liked the Kesar Mb scene.

Chapter-7:You were absolutely right Ramya.He was planning to take revenge and well you now know how that turned out na.Kesar hai toh nautanki toh hogi na...awww thank you for liking the scene.I must admit I was a little nervous while writing it.yep he will soon realize that his so called feelings for Talli were never that deep.awww thank you writing that part was so hard.I was watching a dance video to write down about the steps.hehehe.Thank you so much for your awesome comments

Chapter-8:Thank you Ramya...awww Ramya samjhenge lekin thoda time lagega hehehe yep water is enough for bechara Kesar to cool down after that passionate dance.I am so happy that you liked this chapter.

Chapter-9:Thank you so much Ramya for your awesome comments.yep meri waali Talli thodi smart hai aur Gullu bhi toh nahi hai na to brainwash her.ya Gulaal is getting the love she had always craved for.Of course she always had Talli for an awesome sister who loves her completely.awww I am so happy that you liked the last scene.I was nervous writing it so I am relieved.

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