FF:Tum Ho Toh...Final Chpt updtd on Pg-34

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Special flower for alanta,

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

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EXOL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

oh man that was such a master piece...i thoroughly enjoyed it...
the slow progression u showed was sheer brilliance...
me totally fida over this chapter...gonna read it again and again..i was like..let this chapter not end...wish it was never ending...
this chapter really touched my heart..i was feeling so deprived of kesar and gulaal thesedays and this was just a wonderful treat...a big hug to u...

@alanta : awesome posters..so serene and bful !!!!

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

unres done in previous page 😊

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without-fathom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Mini 🤗 Sorry about being MIA through two updates, but I was hardly online IF all week, courtesy life at large! =)

But here I am - and can I just begin by how my heart went thud, at that last bit of the 7th chapter?! ☺️ Haha! Really, I didn't see it coming like it came, I think, which is why I found something stuck in my throat just reading that line, and then I was all GK mode high 😆

Khair, after few minutes of finally regaining semblance of other facts in space and time, here I am making my belated appearance to comment! I'm not even going to go into how much I'm loving this story, and how for the nth time, I'm so glad you chose to walk such tedious paths! But the justice you're rendering to all 3 characters, fantastic 👏 I just can't really begin to justify one over the other, and it's so hard to stay steady rooting for GK, when I know that even if Vasant's love can seem selfish (given his understanding of how a part of Gulaal will never belong to him entirely) he's but a mortal, who's trying to his wit's end to get what he was made to believe is his! How can one let go?! Why is letting go to be expected of him, if not of Kesar - but for that we love our GK that much?! Of course, there is also all the ground work emphasizing how GK themselves have a tilt for being GK, than anything else - but Vasant is still going to go off for collateral damage, with but one fault of being stuck between star-crossed (or in this case, age-and-circumstance-crossed) soulmates! And I feel for him - even through all my doting on GK!

And talking of them - aww, the strains of love that are strung ripe and echoing in the hollow left behind by their respective angst!!! Beautiful, it is! I just want to some up Kesar and Gulaal's preposition with the following bits of famous verses:

For Kesar: Too early seen unknown, and known too late... poor guy had seen the ethereal love of his life and been bewitched for a lifetime, before he knew what was going to hit him, the path that lay ahead, the very first time he saw her!!!

For Gulaal (and her current predicament from chaps 6 & 7):

When panting sighs the bosom fill,
and hands by chance united thrill
At once with one delicious pain
The pulses and the nerves of twain;
When eyes that erst could meet with ease,
Do seek, yet, seekingly, shyly shun
Ecstatic conscious unison,-
The sure beginnings, say, be these,
Prelusive to the strain of love
Which angels sing in heaven above?

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Okay, that's from me. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter(s) Update soon!!!

JZee

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ps: Alanta - the banners look beautiful and soft just like Mini's story, and the music surrounds ever echo of GK of course!

Nithu - Awwieee! Your siggie looks hip (even if that wasn't my fave NB shot) but ooh, fangirl revival in me for the 6436523876219387102380 time ☺️ 😆

Edited by JZephyr - 13 years ago

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Awww Mini Is this chappi for real..⭐️That is one masterpiece yara...so beautiful..each and every emotion..each and every feeling is so beautifully potrayed .Mini...I am in lubb with the story👏...Both of them so much in love but so totally oblivious Awww Mini jealousy always gets the better of lovers na...Gulaal and her outburst..kesar and his complaints,...That was such was wow chappi...👏.I lubbed it to the core👏Please update really soon.🤗.Oye ab kiss ka kya hoga☺️

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Alanta🤗 That is such a beautiful poster👏

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SHARMISHTA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

mini dear🤗... waitn 4 nxt chappi...

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minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: sharmishta
mini dear🤗... waitn 4 nxt chappi...

Sharmishta😭I am so,so sorry about the wait.I have been very lazy this week yaar.I have the chapter mapped out in my head bas ab type karna baaki hai😆I will do it today and try to put it up in the weekend.I know I have been lazy with my replies to all your comments too.Sorry about that.Weekend mein sab up to date kar doongi😊

Thank you for the support🤗

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kalika.j

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: minizz

Sharmishta😭I am so,so sorry about the wait.I have been very lazy this week yaar.I have the chapter mapped out in my head bas ab type karna baaki hai😆I will do it today and try to put it up in the weekend. weekend tho gaya, Monday agaya Mini is missing😍 I know I have been lazy with my replies to all your comments too.Sorry about that.Weekend mein sab up to date kar doongi😊. no need to reply we want only update.😉

Thank you for the support🤗Always with you.👏🤗

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