NEW FF - That Fact

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEYYY! And I am back! I have been wanting to pen this down for a long time now. If you don't believe me, ask Piu! Hahah! Well, I can't promise if my updates will be regular, but what I can assure you, that you would MOST PROBABLY enjoy this! 😳 The thing is, I miss the fiery, angry Kesu a lot. So this is to the "Tantrumy Kesu" (quoting srush here!) So here goes the prologue. ENJOY!

Love,
Shalu/PFC/HC/Neilpari.

PROLOGUE.

Humming one of her favourite tunes, she came out of the shower, with the towel in hand, brushing away the droplets clinging on to her wavy hair, and sometimes dripping down her back, sometimes seeping in through her blouse. She sat in front of her mirror, continuing with her task, when she finally got tired of it, and just stomped out to the balcony with a heavy sigh to hang it dry. She came back into the room, wondering where he could have gone so early in the morning. She again took her place in front of the mirror, and opened the small gold box in front of her. With delicate hands, she opened it lightly, careful to not spill its contents. She was about to pinch out some of it, when a strong palm grabbed her palm, to allow another similar hand to reach out to pinch out some of its contents with its own fingers. She smiled contently, closing her eyes, waiting for the fingers to caress the middle of her hairline. She felt the familiar tingle run down her spine as his skin came in contact with her forehead. She let out a contended sigh.

She was about to open her eyes, when the same strong arm, gently snaked around her waist to pull her closer when she gently bumped into the solid body that she had been so familiar with. A moment later she felt a gust of hot breath in her ear, causing her to shiver in delight when a husky tone completely drowned her in his voice, "Miss me?"

She recovered back to her senses, and her eyes fluttered open to gaze into the familiar magnetic pools of fiery brown. "Kesar, what if someone comes in. Leave me." She swatted his arms but the grip never loosened.

He smirked to let her know how much she just lied about what she really wanted. "Gulaal. Your eyes seems to be telling me a different story though. Are you sure you want me to let go of you?" he said, challenging her to entangle herself from his cocoon of passion. She did everything in her power to take a deep breath, completely determined to do so, when she was momentarily distracted by his intense gaze. She pried her eyes away from his determined to step out of his embrace, when she finally tickled his sides, finally freeing herself. Her laugh tinkled throughout the Haveli, and his gaze softened up to see laughing. She twirled about when her gaze landed on his picture, and her smile remained firm as she mentally thanked him for giving her so much joy.

"I miss him you know?" said Kesar, standing right behind her, with a solemn expression.

"We all do," she said quietly, as she stared at his photo for the longest time.

Suddenly, her eyebrows frowned together to form a worried "W", and she said, "Kesar, Dushyantji pushed him into the river right?"

"Yes," said Kesar, unaware of where this headed to.

"So he reached after the vehicle toppled over, right?"

"Yes, but - "

"Then who toppled our vehicle?"

The birds stopped chirping outside. The clouds covered the sun. And all they could hear in the bright sunny morning that it was supposed to be, was deathly silence, penetrating every happy place.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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REs😛

EDIT

Haha Shalu Ki bachi..🤗.Guys for those of you who do not know that this lazy birdie had been planning to put this FF since before Christmas and somehow I came to know her secret*coughs and gushes some more*☺️

I had been suffering from impulsive pangs to spill the beans ever since then,But good Lord gave me the strength to refrain myself from doing so.🤔

So guys since Shalu has come up with an FF,I gear myself up *taps fingers on the desk* ahem ahem* to read some ahem ahem chii loaded chappis now☺️

Haila bole to Shalu what dhinchak beginning😳...Owww that was dhak dhak one.😳I so miss the passionate moments which Cv's completely ditched us with instead gagging us with throwing Kulli on our faces😡 and Elaichi toffee *wonders what was that*😳

So Shalu epic start..bole to ekdum Shalu ishtyle😎

I want next update like really soon...Lazy birdie😆

Untill then Muahhh * a big sloppy wet one*for writing this for us☺️

Edited by manzilmukul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Shalu🤗..
...res😊

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Sorry Shalu, dont know how I missed to unres,...maaf kardona please...

I think we haven't talked much...but I used to follow your KRMLs and enjoy ur and Srush's partnership😛...I was a fan of ur writings...and am so glad that u are back and that too with an FF with an interesting concept "That Fact" was something which the CV's hastened with tying up and now I am happy. The prologue itself proved it to be an excellent start👏..eagerly waiting for the updates😳
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me late...Mein kahaa thi 😭
Res

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Hey Shalu 🤗...this is amazing dear...loved the way you started it 😳...now I cant wait to read the rest of the story...so do come up with the chapter soon 😍

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res😊

Shalu,I am very happy that you decided to come up with an FF.I used to love your posts so really looking forward to reading this.I loved the intro.awww I loved the flirting between Kesar and Gulaal-I had wanted to see at least a glimpse of it on the show but nahi hua.chalo theek hai koi baat nahi,FF's hain na 😳
So are Kesar and Gullu going to be detectives?hmmm...interesting.
Do update soon😃
Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😲 Look who's back here, that with an FF?!!!

ps: IF refuses to leme like your post - perpetual defaulter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOOK AT THIS BLOODY THREAD. EVERYONE IS A RES QUEEN! 😡😡😡
to my UTTER SHOCK, All i saw was res. 😡

EDIT EVERYONE! 😆

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

REs😛

EDIT

Haha Shalu Ki bachi..🤗.Guys for those of you who do not know that this lazy birdie had been planning to put this FF since before Christmas and somehow I came to know her secret*coughs and gushes some more*☺️

I had been suffering from impulsive pangs to spill the beans ever since then,But good Lord gave me the strength to refrain myself from doing so.🤔

So guys since Shalu has come up with an FF,I gear myself up *taps fingers on the desk* ahem ahem* to read some ahem ahem chii loaded chappis now☺️

Haila bole to Shalu what dhinchak beginning😳...Owww that was dhak dhak one.😳I so miss the passionate moments which Cv's completely ditched us with instead gagging us with throwing Kulli on our faces😡 and Elaichi toffee *wonders what was that*😳

So Shalu epic start..bole to ekdum Shalu ishtyle😎

I want next update like really soon...Lazy birdie😆

Untill then Muahhh * a big sloppy wet one*for writing this for us☺️


HAHAHAHA! Yes, Madam. I shall do my very best in putting up CHII Scenes! 😆 And I'll DO MY VERY BEST IN UPDATING AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! 😳 ooo! i got a big sloppy wet kissy from you!! LOVE YA!

Originally posted by: JZephyr

😲 Look who's back here, that with an FF?!!!

ps: IF refuses to leme like your post - perpetual defaulter


LOOOL! IF sometimes, can be crazy! LOL. AND HOW WAS UR BACKPACKING TRIP? 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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* goes into dream mode reminiscing her wonderful vacation* ... *brought back to life by the heap of review papers on her desk* If I could, my life would be one long backpacking trip 😆

C'est la vie, they say, c'est la vie! *dramatic sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharneil92

LOOK AT THIS BLOODY THREAD. EVERYONE IS A RES QUEEN! 😡😡😡
to my UTTER SHOCK, All i saw was res. 😡

EDIT EVERYONE! 😆


Shalu 😃
updated my chota comments 😳...so now bring the chapter 😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HAHAHAH!!! That good eh? :D
I went to the Philippines! :) Saw penguins and a dormant volcano! HAD THE TIME OF MY LIFE! :D

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