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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: MR21
Me late...Mein kahaa thi 😭
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Hey Shalu 🤗...this is amazing dear...loved the way you started it 😳...now I cant wait to read the rest of the story...so do come up with the chapter soon 😍

YAAAY! I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT! 😳 I have something in my mind right now for the next chapter, but it's not formed solidly yet. So let's see what happens. :)

Originally posted by: minizz
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Shalu,I am very happy that you decided to come up with an FF.I used to love your posts so really looking forward to reading this.I loved the intro.awww I loved the flirting between Kesar and Gulaal-I had wanted to see at least a glimpse of it on the show but nahi hua.chalo theek hai koi baat nahi,FF's hain na 😳
So are Kesar and Gullu going to be detectives?hmmm...interesting.
Do update soon😃

MINS! 😃 Aww! I kinda miss Caramel! 😆 Mostly cos Srush and I used to have so much fun bickering over who'd take the better episodes! LOL. And I'm so glad you'll be reading this. I hope you'll like how it'd end! :) LOVE YOUUU!!! and yes, they'll sort of be detectives... but it's more than that! You'll see why! 😉

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Edited my comments on page1 😊

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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Rimjhim

@CertifiedBabe

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Oh wow im ready :D...i was reading your FF on Arnav and Khushi on IPKKND fourm and i thought it would be so amazing if you could write something on GK :)...look's like my wish just came true :P..

Start seems promising, i cant wait for more...Update soon pleease😃

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

yupee neilpari is back ...and tell me u had time write a story of touch me not and expressionless trunk but not on our oops my kesar😳 huh

but chalo better late than never

so wen ur back i can expect chii paap and tearing of the white kurta

and coming to the chapii its so capitivating seems like gulaal and kesar will solve murder mystery of vasant so besides some breathtaking romance we wil also witness some dishum dishum anyways waiting for ur next update eagerly😳

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rimjhim1
Oh wow im ready :D...i was reading your FF on Arnav and Khushi on IPKKND fourm and i thought it would be so amazing if you could write something on GK :)...look's like my wish just came true :P..
Start seems promising, i cant wait for more...Update soon pleease😃

I've been thinking to write this for a very long time you know? 😳 But I'm glad you'll enjoy reading this! 😳

Originally posted by: arti07
yupee neilpari is back ...and tell me u had time write a story of touch me not and expressionless trunk but not on our oops my kesar😳 huh
but chalo better late than never
so wen ur back i can expect chii paap and tearing of the white kurta

and coming to the chapii its so capitivating seems like gulaal and kesar will solve murder mystery of vasant so besides some breathtaking romance we wil also witness some dishum dishum anyways waiting for ur next update eagerly😳

AH! The most awaited review has come! HAHAHAHA! yes, well that expressionless trunk just stole the show away on tonight's episode! He was brilliant! Maybe on par with Neil even. But he was just too good! 😳 Anyways, yes, lots of romance, will come. And I'm definitely gonna tear up that white kurta! AHAHAHA! It'll be an emotional roller coaster for you people! 😳 anyways, glad to see you arti barti! 😃 🤗

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

shaluuu u r back 🤗 yeayyy yipppyyy welcome back 😃 muahhh, i liked the starting dear 😃 so gulaal n kesar already r husband n wife?? n they love each other??? hmmm so who hit their jeep 😆 chal tell me 😉 update soon yarrr, n soon means sooon *looks innocently at shalu* 😆 😃

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

wow shalu, that was an awesome start!!
very interesting one...will wait for updates...plz update soon😊

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Faryal-Makhdoom

@Faryal-Makhdoom

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

HI SHALU SORRY IF YOU DONT KNOW ME IMA INAYAH TRUELY KNOW AS INZZ YOUR WORK HAS A MASSIVE IMPACT ON ME LIKE REALLY I LOVE IT
Hey i forgot to Fully write abt the update...coz tab maine saara nahin check kiya tha
abhi net gud so dekha sooo *bear with me again am back*

This Updateis rellii reliii amazinggg
OOO matlab kya merging hai Wah wah
Aye waise mujhe tumse bahut dar lagta hia...
Right for for DR PIYU u knw
But luv u as much !!!
So ya dis onez minddd blowing

Haha Adorable Update...Gulsar luks sooo cute in all of the parts in shalu shtyle ek dum rapchick

Hey u better make ur next update soon with ROcking WOrksss

ANd ya this FF is soo unique

AM so glad seeing thisss

Yummm work !!!
Love u

Hey u can love me back if u want

FOr reading my bakwaas lol and ya for these superb workzzz

yours Truely Inayah aka Imli face