My dear Friends,
I wanted to tell something related to these diary entries,..
As I have said in the preface of "The Trespasser", that this is something experimental from my part to tell a story through the help of a number of irregular diary entries and also some of the daily happenings of her life from Gulaal's POV, and for the same reason, the details had to be limited and only the tids and bits are 'directly' conveyed in sentences here..so I thought an explanation is inevitable...
So the back ground was like, an orphaned girl named Gulaal, whom had spent her childhood and teenage in an orphanage, happened to meet 'Vasanth' and eventually fell in love...but in the very next year he died in an accident, totally unexpected. The loss of her only companion in this whole world, was some thing far beyond her tolerance that her heart rejected to accept, and thus she built a world of fantasy of her own, and started communicating with 'him' through her diary or she believed so..and the story starts somewhere near this, by his first death anniversary and her take on the day...
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There she meets Kesar in her office through Talli, and Talli was her friend since her college days. She always had an inclination towards Kesar from the very first day of their meeting. His behavior, his ways, his thoughts ...had definitely an influence over her...and by the time she realised it, he had become a part of herself...and Kesar too was getting closer to her day by day,..and certainly he was in love with her and it doesnt took much time for him to accept himself as he was not going through such turmoils as that of Gulaal's other than that of a person who fall in love for the first time..for him it was as natural and he was not in a dilemma, but by the time he knew Gulaal, and her probable way of response on knowing his feelings for her...he too had an inkling that she too feels something similar for him as he does..and he somewhat became sure of that from the her reaction to his ignorance...and she used to share what ever happened in her life, with Vasanth through the diary,...but slowly the pages began to get filled with Kesar's name...Vasanth was not just a soul here who silently listened to her, but also he used to reply her or she believed so, as in a conversation through the diary itself, where some blank spaces are left in between her writings.
In that context, Vasanth too had played an inevitable part in making her realise, what she exactly felt for Kesar..along with Kesar's confession to her which certainly had an impact on her,,...especially the way he confessed his genuine feelings for her and also how he showed her the mirror of herself...which made her accept his love for her, even if she couldnt reciprocate it at that point of time and from that day (June 05) her heart had slowly started to come in to terms with her logical mind of the fact of Vasanth's death and the world she has created for herself is nothing but just a mirage and the reality is none other than Kesar,...which gradually lead to their marriage on Dec31 which followed by her confession too, when Kesar too have just realised that his love has started to reciprocate and thereby he gestures a silent thanks to Vasanth.
Even while Kesar so strongly stating his love for her and making her realise her heart, he knew her and equally her sensitiveness and the need to understand her and support her and steadily making her come out of her fantasy in which she was living for the past 2 years.
Vasanth was a total stranger to Kesar, but Gulaal was the one to connect them, but an undefined bonding was shaping in between Vasanth and Kesar too through her...which I tried to show through his Thanks to Vasanth in the last part..
Hope this was useful to all my readers.
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This story might be the stupidest thing that ever happened in this forum..but I couldnt resist myself from posting this...and while saying all these, I want to thank again and again from the bottom of my heart to all my readers..and Piu, Ramya, Aditi, Mini for supporting and inspiring me with your comments and for appreciating the attempt...
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I hope you all will go through the note above and share ur opinion with me on this.😊
And regarding starting a new one...
Every time I start writing a new story, thinking that this is probably the last one...and I think its high time for me to stop now...warna aap log muje dhakke maarke yahaan se bhaga denge😆
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With lots of Love
Alanta🤗
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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