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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: minizz

awww Alanta,I am liking Gulaal's one sided convos with Vasant.They are so cute but at the same time it is making me very emotional...It reminds me of her loneliness😭.Gulaal is so sweet,she is feeling jealous but still she is not able to have any hard feeling towards Talli as she was the only one to support her during her time of need.ab yeh kya,why is Kesarji being all mean towards our sensitive Gulaal...though I love the nakhre waala Kesar,right now I am not very happy with him.I am feeling very protective towards Gulaal so I hope he has a good reason for his behaviour.I want to know more as to what is actually the reason behind his ignoring Gulaal.so you have to update soon Alanta...
I loved this update and thanks for being so prompt.yeh le badi si jhappi for that🤗


Mini...thank u so much dear.Am so glad that u liked it..sorry to make u emotional yaar,.....she is such a sweet girl na...😊...sorry dear...I am updating it now..hope it get conveyed to u...Return hugs🤗🤗...please do read the update and comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: MR21


Alanta 🤗...first of all yeh le badaa sa jhaappi for the back to back chapters 🤗
coming to chapter...gulaal feeling all bothered abt kesar n talli closeness n him ignoring her...loved the way she is talking every thing in her life with vasant through diary...why did kesar ignored her...is there any reason behind his behavior...so update the next one soon...

Thanku so much dear,.🤗..and yeh le meri taraf se bhi 🤗..so glad that u liked it...updating yaar..please do read and comment..😳
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: enchanted23

sorry Alanta will have to comment later, haven't got around reading yet😭


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Aditi🤗..Take ur own time and add one more to the queue😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: smitha2728

superb yaar... keep updating

Thank u so much Smitha😳...will post the update with in few minutes..please do read and comment.
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

😛He he Jalphukdi Gullu..I am lubbing it😍

Well I like the sweet yet soulful diary entries.Awww Gullu already jealous and sharing it with Vassy so so sweet.👏

Alanta..pls update soon🤗

I am so glad that u are liking the diary entries..Thanks a lot yaara..🤗..and update follows..please do read and comment as soon as u find time😳
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sauris

Alanta beautifully written,update soon...

Sauris, where are u dear..missing u a lot..Thank u so much yaar...update follows
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sauris

Alanta beautifully written,update soon...

Sauris..where are u dear??missing u a lot...Thank u so much...update follows.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4


July 05

Kyun Vasanth? Kyun kiya mere saath aisa? Tu jaantha tha na? jaantha tha na ki, tere siwa iss duniya main mere liye aur koi nahin hein,,,,,phir bhi,,,,,kyun chodkar gaya tha muje??

Tears were flowing all over her cheeks and finally she placed her forehead over the opened diary and wept uncontrollably.

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STOP IT GULAAL, ENOUGH IS ENOUGH!

She couldn't continue with her words anymore as his voice struck her ears like thunder bolts..while he resumed , trying hard to control his breath'

Aur zara apne aankhe kholkar dekh'tab tuje patha chalega ki kaun, kis bhrahm main jee raha hein'

He moved closer towards her, while his look pierced her trembling eyes'.

Ek baar zara sochle Gulaal, kithna dard ho raha hoga unhe, yeh dekhke ki, jis ladki ko unhone hamesha khush dekhna chaha, wahin ladki unhin ke naam pe aaj ghut ghut ke mar rahi hein, kya beeth rahe honge un par, kabhi socha hein ???

She couldn't take it anymore, as she tried hard to move away from him avoiding his glance

Gulaal (harshly): Muje jaane do Kesar.

Kesar instantly caught hold of her wrist and pulled her closer, he creased his brows and with a knowing gesture he nodded his head and in a slight challenging tone he continued,

Kuch din pehle jab, thode der keliye mein tuje nazar andaaz kya kardiya tha, dekh raha tha mein ki, kaise tu andar se andar ubal rahi thi uss waqt. kaisi teri aankhe taraz rahin thi mere ek nazar ke liye, mere ek lavz keliye a tear drop fell from his blood shot eyes as he said the last word, he softened his voice as he continued..tu chahe, mana karne ki laakh koshish karle,'lekin ithna tho mein jaan hi paaya hun ki,..kuch tho hein,'kuch tho hein tere mann main mere liye Gulaal, jise tu jaankar bhi anjaan banne ki koshish rahi hein mere saamne..yeh maanle Gulaal, yeh maanle ki, tuje meri zaroorath hein.. ,almost chocked

You need me, Gulaal..

Trying to hide herself, she bursted out,

WHAT NONSENSE???Tuje ho kya gaya hein Kesar,'kya bak raha hein tu?? Ab chod mera haath..

She violently pushed him aside and walked away'

Kesar(shouted back): Jaa Gulaal, aur mein bhi dekhtha hun ki kithne der tak tu aise apne aap se bhaagthe rahegi, ek na ek din tho tuje apne bhrahm ki duniya se bahar nikkalna hi padega Gulaal,,,,,

His words made her retard her pace, while he walked and stood behind her :

,,,,,,,,,kyun ki mera pyaar sacha hein, tuje jo samachna hein samachle, he got hold of her arm, with one of his hands and forced her to face him,,,, but the truth is just that I love you..MEIN TUJSE PYAAR KARTHA HUN GULAAL..and that's it!!!

And with the same force he let her go, on which she tried hard to regain her senses as well as her physical balance.

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Its almost past midnight and her sobs by now have fainted somewhere in the dark, while the letters on the page have been drenched in her tears.

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Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
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Alanta 🤗...wow kesar confession was superb...he will never listen any one na when it comes to his feelings for gulaal ...not even gulaal's words...so he ignored her to know abt her feelings...kya baath hai...intelligent banda hai..confession ke saath saath proof bhi de raha hai ki she loves him...
loved it Alanta...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res 😳

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Oh I just lubbed the assertive and straightforward Kesuda and the diary bits were very emotional Alanta.😭I like the way you described the diary being soaked and drenched in tears😭Gulaal can really be one damn stubborn womam na..But I trust Kesuda he is the one perfect guy when it comes to winning over Gulaal😆

Thanks a ton for the lubbly update🤗

Edited by manzilmukul - 13 years ago

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