DE:Gulsar_The TrespasserClimaxpg6 Note on pg8

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Friends,
This is something experimental from my part, I donno how it would turn out, I am not that confident but just couldnt resist my self from posting it here...

These are some non-consecutive diary entries of Gulaal to Vasanth, and the rest follows😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res me first.😛.I am waiting alanta😍*rubs hands in glee*😉
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Jan 1

Dusron ke nazron main, yein tareekh uss din ki yaad dilathe hein, jab ki taqdeer ne tuje mujse cheena tha, lekin mere liye aaj ka yeh din, hamare pyaar aur saathgi ka dusre saalgira hein,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aur tere yadon ke saath meri zindgi ki dusri saal...


Naye saal ki mubarak ho Vasanth..
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As I have told in the previous post, this is just a try from my part, so I need your genuine comments, suggestions and criticisms and its further updates and all depends on u, kindly do comment😊
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Alanta 🤗...do continue with this...


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Go for it Alanta 👍🏼
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Alanta🤗please continue😃
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Yay! Alanta good job,It's always good to see her pov as well...I promise I will try my best😉
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Piu, Ramya, Jzee, Sauris, Mini, Aditi...🤗

Thank u so much for ur valuable support. the update is in the following post...
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Part 1


Jan 1

Dusron ke nazron main, yein tareekh uss din ki yaad dilathe hein, jab ki taqdeer ne tuje mujse cheena tha, lekin mere liye aaj ka yeh din, hamare pyaar aur saath ka dusre saalgira hein,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aur tere yadon ke saath meri zindgi ki dusri saal...


Naye saal ki mubarak ho Vasanth..
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Feb 26

Baathon baathon main Talli ne muje kahan tha ki uski office main ek job vacancy hein, usse bathaye bina mein ne job keliye apply ki thi,...agar use patha chalega tho kabhi nahin manegi (a small smile escapes from her lips)...

Mein sab samajthi hun, lekin kab thak aise rahungi...jab baath paise aur kharj ki aajaathe hein tho,..uss par bhoj bhad jaayegi,..aur mein kisi keliye bhoj nahin ban na chahthi hun,,,,,,,(she paused for some moments)

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Nahin, nahin...mein khush hun Vasanth,..bahut khush hun,..tu jo mere saath,,,,,,,

she couldnt proceed further, mean while a single drop of tear fell, next to the last word on the page...which marked a full stop for the day.
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March 03

Aaj bahut dino ke baad ek ajeeb si khushi mehsoos ho rahi hein,,,,,patha nahin kyun,..aisa lag raha hein jaise koi cheez kho kar paayi hun...wajai nahin jaanthi lekin bas ithna jaanthi hun ki aaj sab kuch alag sa lag raha hein...

Vasanth,?? tu sunn tho raha hein na??

Chutti ke baad woh aaj office lauta hein... Talli ne bathaya tha..woh uski bachpan ka dosth,.. ..aur ab hamare saath hi kaam kar raha hein,,,,,,Kesar, ...Kesar naam hein uska...

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Haan, patha tha ki, uska naam tuje acha lagega...aakhir saffron tere favorite color jo hein,...,,,,,,,,,,infact muje bhi acha laga hein woh...

Gud Nite Vasanth.

She closed the diary with a slight mischievious smile , while her eyes twinkled even without her knowledge, as she remembered the moment in the morning when he winked his pair of magnetic eyes as he extented for a handshake with her.

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[to be continued]


Kindly do forgive me if I disappointed u, please dont get angry...do comment please...I so need to know your opinion😭...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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res 😊

Alanta 🤗...this is amazing yaar...loving the diary bits very much...she is feeling happy as she met kesar na 😳...would love to know about their story ...
update soon...

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