Collection of unsent letters-update on page 10 - Page 4

Originally posted by: minizz

Aditi🤗This was so,so emotional.aankhon mein aansoo aa gaye.loved the starting so,so much showing the tussle in Kesar's mind between shaq and vishwaas.

You captured Kesar's loneliness and pain perfectly.

Kesar realating to Gulaal about every incident and experience-very well written.The letters were so important to Kesar na.They were his only solace,the only way in which he could still communicate to Gulaal without any fear😭 through which he could be her Kesar and she could be his Gulaal.very similar to Gulaal's diary to Vasant.I felt very sad for him and not attending Devdi's shaadi awww that was painful.I mean Devdi was so special to him along with Rewa na. the ending was perfect which revealed to us that it's not shaq that is haunting his mind instead it's the fact that Gulaal kept a secret from him, from her Kesar that is actually torturing him.beautifully put Aditi,loved it.

Aditi,This letter was very beautiful.please do come up with more😃

Hey Mini yeh le return 🤗My pagal jodidaar I had no intention to make it so emotional yaar, It was just basic hostel life that this lonely guy is trying to come to terms with, as he has no vacations to look forward to or no interest in indulgence of kiddish pranks, he was a tormented soul so young so vulnerable seeking answers to his internal turmoil completely oblivious to his surroundings….

I don't think his world extended beyond Gulaal, even in the show any letter you pick it was all addressed to her, questioning her, complaining to her or just missing her never he mentioned anyone else….

This was his medium to pour his heart out and naturally he could share this only with her,her who was the centre of his existence and the one who would never deny him his right to know the truth when asked,such was his belief and the day she broke this trust in that lake side confrontation he was a broken boy and then what followed was kiddish tantrum, I say boy because he never did grow up till that Mandir scene with the terrorist …may be some day we can do a OS on that too

Thanks for your lovely comments😊, and now be prepared for the torture that's coming your way….😉

Originally posted by: arti07

aditi hugswa to u for this unique idea i seriously loved it

i m so attahced to kesar's letter his letter were his soul his his treasure his inner conflict everything and i loved u r now doing this lovely job seriously i can still imagine kesar/NB writing those letter the first one was so gloomy i mean deeyarvatto break oh no 😭 and now he is away from gulaal i can imagine him writing this letter with shaky hands

but my heart went out for the second one it was so emotional i can literaaly feel NB reading this letter and crying near the pool side so heart wretching

u have immense talent of writing dear lovely collection and do update soon

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

oh aditi so so so lovely letter u have written yaar 👏 🤗 i felt as if reading a letter written by kesuda himself, he had been so alone in the hostel na, yehi feelings hui hongi uski, he must have wanted to come running back to his home, to mota bha, paan ba, his sisters n his gulaal but he kept himself away from all of them, he wanted to punish gulaal but instead he punished himself all these years, the laddu n namkeen reminded me of the scene of chotu kesar sitting beside rewa n eating the namkeen n saying mujhay meetha pasand nahi hai n then afterwards, watching gulaal go away from behind the wall n then eating the laddu which he was holding in his hand ahhh those old days, i so so miss them, fantastic letter aditi, do write more 😃

Ok Guys, I am back with another one😳Mini helped me with the ending part where I was getting stuck,It's not as intense as the other one, I have tried exploring his feelings after he gets back from Gulaal's home after Dushy wins the elections..I hope you like it,please please do not hesitate to point out any mistakes and do not forget to hit the like button😊

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Gulaal,

Aaj subah tera aane kabahut besabri se intezaar kar raha tha,her subah ki tarah doodh le ke jo aajati thi muje uthane, sach kahu Gulaal muje nahi pata maine itne saalo kaise tujse door raha lekin ab to har roj subah tere aane ka hi intezaar rehta hai,ke tab tu aaye,phir koi na koi bahane se muje woh doodh pine ke liye majboor kare Muje teri aadat si hoti ja rahi hai Gulaal yeh
muje kya ho raha hai...

Maine janta hu uss din ki baat ko lekar tu mujse bahut naraz hai,tere mana karne ke babajut maine phir se pee le aur tujse batameeze bhi ki,per main kya karu Gulaal mujse yeah bardast nahi hota ki tu thodi der ke liye bhi muje undekha kare,kuyn main tujse door nahi reh pata,kyun chahta hu, tu har waqt bas mere hi aas paas rahe,kyun Gulaal...

Kal ba aur bapji ke yaha tera bahut intezaar kiya socha tha tuje manake le hi aauga tere bagar iss ghar main rehna itna muskil hoga yeh kabhi nahi soch tha,aur tu bhi toh waha iss ghar ko chod ke bahut hi dukhi hogi,meri wajah se tuje iss ghar se door rehna pade yeh mene kabhi nahi chaha tha Gulaal,Janata hu yeh ghar teri jindagi hai,aur tu apni jindagi se kaise door ho sakti hai, bachpan main tere ghar chod ke jane ki dhamki se bhi kitna darta tha main,tab aur aaj maine farq bas itna hai ki ab teri chunar pakad ke tuje rok nahi sakta,yeh haq kab mujse chin gaya Gulaal aur kyun...

Kal bhi jab bijli chali gayi thi to tera naam leke mombatti dhoodhne nikla tha,abhi bhi tere naam se he andhere ko bagata hu Gulaal,per isse tere samane manne se darta hu,agar tu woh sacchai hai jo har andhere ko door baga sakti hai,to mere man ke andhere main muje yuh akela chod ke kyun chali gai hai Gulaal...

Manta hu jab tune sarpanch ke pad ke liye Dushyant bha ke naam ka sujav rakha tha to muje bahut gussa aaya tha aur isliye tujse who sawal puch liye the maine,per muje kya pata
tha inn sawalo ke badla muje yuh door karke legi,bachpan se tu yehi karti aa
rahi hai mera sath kyun Gulaal...

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Jaldi wapas aa jao na Gulaal.waapis aane ke baad tu mujhse naaraz reh le,chaahe tho gussa ho le ...lekin kam se kam tu meri aankhon ke saamne tho rahegi. Tujhe shaayad nahi patha lekin Tere bina Is ghar mein ek pal bhi jeena bahut mushkil lag raha hai aur Is bechani ki wajah bhi
tho nahi jaanta main Gulaal...

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Kal ba aur bapji ke yaha tera bahut intezaar kiya socha tha tuje manake le hi aauga ter bagar iss ghar main rehna itna muskil hoga yeh kabhi nahi soch tha,aur tu bhi toh waha iss ghar ko chod ke bahut hi dukhi hogi,meri wajah se tuje iss ghar se door rehna pade yeh mene kabhi nahi chaha tha Gulaal,Janata hu yeh ghar teri jindagi hai,aur tu apni jindagi se kaise door ho sakti hai, bachpan main tere ghar chod ke jane ki dhamki se bhi kitna darta tha main,tab aur aaj maine farq bas itna hai ki ab teri chunar pakad ke tuje rok nahi sakta,yeh haq kab mujse chin gaya Gulaal aur kyun...

xx

Jzee

RES👏

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Aditi 🤗what is intensity-It is just way you feel it.How can something related to Kesar cannot be called intenseIt is mellowed down,but the passion oozes and bleeds through every single line of the letter.BEAUTIFUL! ⭐️

I just lubbed the part where he mentions that from his childhood he always had this fear looming over his head that she would leave the house.Ahhh He so loves her na😭

Awww The bacha misses her so much and asks her to come back.It is such a beautiful piece Aditi.👏.My haseen qatil.*Sigh* Will we ever get to see someone as passionate and intense as Kesar.I guess never.

Hats off Aditi for continuing the brilliance of the letters.I lubbed it.👏

P.S-ahhh My request -A letter after the confession where he is given a wholesome treat of the slapathon by the lafa -queen Gullu😆.I really want how Kesar would have wrote something about finally telling her how much he loved her and of course his vishesh tippani on her slapping spree.Is that too much to ask.🤔OK no asking.I WANT IT FROM YOU*Stomps feet and throws a tantrum ,then scratches the head changing strategy🤔 with hopeful muh⭐️*😍