Collection of unsent letters-update on page 10 - Page 3

👏Can't wait * rubs hands in glee*😳

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Haseen Qatil tu mujhe chain se jine kyun nahi deti.😭.ajkhir teri pareshani kya haiMujhe heaven se bhi bhagayegi kya..😭

I am just choked and emotionally charged right now after reading the letter 😭sach kahunI could hear NB's voice echoing in my ears while reading this.⭐️It was that lubbly and awesome.👍🏼

Awww the madir convo and the hostel basic life part was so beautifully written.I could feel his loneliness😭

and the pani mein pathar phenkna is just so Kesarish...Reminded me of the sarpanch fiasco after which Kesar ran away on his bike.😭

Beautifully written and perfectly conveyed the emotions so very well.⭐️

I want another letter like very very soon* throws a tantrum and bribes you with imlis*😍*kesuda ishtyle😎

Originally posted by: alanta

This was really touching... excellently exhibited Kesar's probable thoughts through this one...the dynamics in his and the way in his letters that were brought out by the show through his voice modulation while reading the letters, have brought out by u here through your writing skills..👏..you are outstandingly talented dear👏 and that u have proven in the last para through portraying his helplessness of not being able to hate her, nor part himself from her...Brilliant👏

Hope u will come up with another one soon.😊

Originally posted by: MR21

Aditi...me waiting now 😍

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Aditi 🤗...you made me very emotional yaar 😭

Ithna achcha kaise likh sakthi hai yaar...this is too good... loved the way he accepted that some things are changing with time but still he is waiting for some things to continue...ohhh that picnic part was very good...how he stated that he hated her all the time but still wants to hear her laugh...throwing stones in the pond is his trade mark...n the last bit blaming her for not returning to the house...n the last word kyun gulaal 😭

Aditi...this is amazing yaar 👏...waiting for the next letter 😍

Me missing this show like anything 😭

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

👏Can't wait * rubs hands in glee*😳

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Haseen Qatil tu mujhe chain se jine kyun nahi deti.😭.ajkhir teri pareshani kya haiMujhe heaven se bhi bhagayegi kya..😭

I am just choked and emotionally charged right now after reading the letter 😭sach kahunI could hear NB's voice echoing in my ears while reading this.⭐️It was that lubbly and awesome.👍🏼

Awww the madir convo and the hostel basic life part was so beautifully written.I could feel his loneliness😭

and the pani mein pathar phenkna is just so Kesarish...Reminded me of the sarpanch fiasco after which Kesar ran away on his bike.😭

Beautifully written and perfectly conveyed the emotions so very well.⭐️

I want another letter like very very soon* throws a tantrum and bribes you with imlis*😍*kesuda ishtyle😎

Meri Pareshani tu hai Piyu,ha Tu😆, har waqt har gadi GK ke bare main post kar kar ke is forum ko kabhi GK bubble se bahar nahi niklne deti😳,24 ghante tere FF,SS,Shayari aur comments mera dimag main ghumte rahte hai😕,main office ke meetings main bhi tere SS read karti hu aur koi question hone per chok jati hu, ab yeah duniya itni haseen hai ke main iss se bahar niklna nahi chahati hu,.isliye meri pareshani hai tu😊…per I bag of you not to take me out of this world ever…

I am so glad you liked it,I tried using situations from the show and then put Kesar's view on the same and how he would relate to particular situation in his late teens,where he would have better idea of what kept him away all these years and why he feels so alienated from all

I love imlis😳…and yes that's good enough to come out with another letter soonish…😊

Thanks for the lovely comments Piyu🤗,very much appreciated

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Aditi - forst of all a big HUG to you for continuing 🤗 I'm so happy to see you're going to do more of these. Kesar's letters are like content filling the silent moments of the show itself - the silent moments shown, and those hinted at.

And love even more, the fact that your letter this time comes out of the decade that was not "aired" on showtime - but only always "talked about". I like how you bring instances like Devki's marriage in there, to give indication of the timeline in which he has written the letter. And the alternating of his barrage of "kyun" questions with rants about dorm routine is such a mix of Kesar being Kesar as made by circumstance, and Kesar being but a homesick boy in his teens. Simple touches like "home food" featuring in his letter, in contrast to strict discipline meal times - so believable coming from a student away from home.

And aah - you bring in the pond, his losing count of time and stone throwing habits too!

Fantastic job putting it all together - please do write more, such a pleasure reading the letters!

xx

JZee