Originally posted by: enchanted23
mera bhi reswa😊
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Mini😡 6 and half paragraphs dedicated to Dushy and Talli😡'Mera warning bhul gayi tu'chalo but Dushy ke liye I will calm down😊'he is nice aur Talli bhi meri nazar main thodi sudhar gayi hai Dushy ke pyaar main pagal ho kar'.so unka closing accha laga'per I hope they are no where near GK in next 2/3 chappies or whatever is left now'.hey Aditi,maine pehle hi warning de di so.Anyways I think you will be happy with the new chapter.usme tho sirf Gullu Kesar ka bol baala hai😳
So to the convo I was eagerly awaiting ''I like how MB wants to entice truth out of Kesar by bringing in marriage proposal for Gulaal (guess guess I am allowed na) and I like Kesar's almost says it but not kind of stammer'a disturbed and aggressive Kesu is always more speedy in taking decisive action than calm and collected one'.👏 yep aggressive and disturbed Kesar is my fav.I am a twisted soul na but then I have company haina Aditi😆I am so happy that you liked this scene😊
And on to that parallel pareshani scene'what can I say'.Gulaal cannot hold her stand after that comments from Kesar na''She has yet to contemplate that life w/o him, even when he was away for few days she was so restless so walking away from him forever was never an option, one day of ignorance from Kesar had her questioning her decision, so sooner or later she had to accept it was impossible to even continue breathing w/o feeling his presence and now the same feeling comes from him'..beautifully written scene😍 where both of them realised each others position in their lives and how very unknowingly entwined their lives had become''.👏thank you so much yaar.I really wanted her to feel his pain.The previous confrontation was more about his anger and desire to make her realize the stupidity of her "just friends"theory but here he is truly desperate.Motaba's words really rattled him and so now he can no longer hide his pain in front of her.and Gullu,how could she not melt yaar.Thank you for understanding my view perfectly.
So the mere thought of loosing him forever made Gullu come out of her Galool mode and start considering where she's been wrong, good that she realised before the accident as it shouldn't have to resort to that, I was always against that accident in the second last episode just for the nail to finally hit her'why..oh why😡'she should have realised it when he was leaving her house😡'and that look OMG anyone would have given anything when someone looks at you with so much love, care, passion, longing that look was like I can do anything for you at this moment even give my life but she chose to cry and keep quiet instead'.back to my bak bak'sorry'.na Aditi,I am with you on this.I never liked that accident part.aah but that scene😳😭did you know Neil really cried in that scene😭
I understand the CVs needed the drama and wanted them to meet only in the finale. but I hated the accident idea from the moment I read about it in an article. I loved the way it was picturised in the show. lekin accident ka pehla side effect Kesar slept through the whole of the first half of the finale.I was like uth jaa Kesar dekh tera bhai bhi waapis aa gaya bhoot banke ab tho uth jaa😆Still I do love that confession scene.It was everything I hoped for and more bas thoda aur lamba hotha tho it would have been perfect and I so wanted to see their shaadi😭sorry for my bak-bak.and please your bak-bak is welcome always😃
Lovely chappie Mini🤗,Take your time for update as I really want to prolong the ending as much as possible'I know kind of sad'but I really love this FF so ending even though will be happy and cheerful should not come that early😊awww Aditi,that is so sweet of you.Thank you so much yaar.made me all emotional😭yeh le ek hug meri taraf se🤗
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