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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Mini 🤗 What a GK-some update that was. As my BFF from high school loved to say - tout est bien qui finit bien! Things are finally coming round full circle for these two, and everyone else for that matter. I strongly suspect - and I suppose you intended for readers to as much - that Revji and Motabha have a plan of jhat mangni patt byaah for our lovebirds 😆 But it's just as well that they sorted their differences beforehand, made peace, and most importantly, that Gulaal finally found it in herself and her love to take the leap of faith for and with Kesar in entirety!


Looking forward to the final climax before their happily ever after!

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JZee

Jzee,sorry for replying so late.I was caught up in some stuff last week.Thank you so much for the lovely comments.I am so happy that you liked the update and the GK scenes.well I have updated the final chapter.Hope you will get to read it when you get time.will be looking forward to your comments.Take care

Thanks a lot for sticking to this story from the beginning to the end.You have no idea how much it means to me🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

keep writing such big kesgul oriented chapter, i loved this chapter like anything😊 specially kes-- gul scene❤️.

and you know i find this dushyantji so adorable , talli is so lucky.
and🤗 for lovely chapter.


Shradha🤗Thank you so much yaar.I am happy that you liked it.yep Dushyantji is adorble,actually I liked him in the show too-Sushant portrayed the character brilliantly.Talliji is indeed lucky.she got such a wonderful life partner na😳

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

hi mini chapter end hogaya😭haan "The End" ho gaya😊lekin yeh best tha👍🏼dhanyavaad😳rewa kitni cute hai , i like the way she tease kes-gul😆I loved writing Rewa scenes.She is such a cutie-pie.aur humari pyaar ke do panchi are so daring men, direct bol diya woh bhi gulaal ne baat shuru ke. agar show ki gulaal hoti tho, jab kesu motaba ko batane ja raha hot aur yeh gaon chodne ki tayaari karti.😉arre tum thappad bhool gayi.Pehle Kesuda ki ache se dhulaayi hothi.10-12 thappad lagaane ke baad Galool gaon chodne ki tayyari karti😆 i loved betab keuda😳, aur accha hua suddhi sudhar gayi.

and best best part was shub vivah of kesgul😍
how much we longed for it in show na?haan,I wanted the show to end on that note yaar.instead we got a garba.I mean I enjoyed it but socho agar shaadi dikhaathe tho we could got to see so many cute scenes between them😭
thank you for writing such beautiful journey of kes-gul❤️

Shradha,your comments always inspired me a lot.I am so happy I got to meet you.will be looking forward to your fab creativity on the DEK forum.I would love it if you could come up with a GK ff cause you are a brilliant writer😃Do think about it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

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Mini 🤗...we all like to read long chapters...n more over when the chapters r full of kesar n gulaal...we just love them...so dont worry abt the length of the chapters...Ramya,you have always very sweet and generous yaar.thank you for that🤗
Gulaal worry for kesar is very well explained yaar...can feel the way she might have talked to doctor abt kesar n loved how doctor called him as her pati...how can she be at peace when her kesar is unconscious...yep wanted to show Gullu's complete acceptance.glad you noticed it
the dream scene was very good...just loved it...the fear of losing her kesar is so much...
MB n revji scene is good...they r comforting each other...well looks like MB, revji n Poonam had a very good talk abt kesar n gulaal...hopefully you might have guessed what it was about na😆
Gulaal in kesars room n loved the way she talked abt her mistake...loved the convo between them...kesar still teasing her in this situation...good that atlast gulaal is ready to accept abt her feelings for kesar in front of anyone...yes she is finally ready to accept her love for Kesar
loved dushy so much...he is very good n understanding...
Loved the convo between kesar n gulaal on phone...kesar toh vaada pe vaada leraha hai gulaal se...
loved kesar when he is there for gulaal in the whole marriage ceremony...the way he gave the emotional support for gulaal was really good...Kesar mauke pe chauka maar raha hai.Gullu ka bharosa nahi na isliye vaade pe vaada lene mein hi samajhdaari hai😆
scene in gulaals room is very romantic...loved the way gulaal is free from all the burdens n ready to surrender to kesar...good that they r now ready to face their family together...

Mini...this is an amazing chapter...full of kesar n gulaal...looking forward for their interaction with revji n MB...update the next chapter soon...


Originally posted by: MR21

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Mini 🤗...this FF is ending...me very emotional yaar ...but feeling happy that it has a very happy end😳 Ramya haan yaar smile and be happy😃

Coming to Reva n her teasing with kesar...as I always say...I love this bond between them..this is so amazing for me...n she is also mature friend to gulaal...when gulaal needs that support thank you so much for this.I loved writing her so much.she is my fav character here😳...coming to gulaal n her jhoot to poonam...she is excelling in this due to kesar...loved roopa as she is able to know that gulaal n kesar r in love n her clear mention of this love to both gulaal n kesar is too good...as roopa said...anyone would know what they feel for each other after the accident...well they were not exactly hiding it any more, were they😉
Now me coming to Mb n Revji prank on poor kesar n gulaal...how they both r teasing them...good that gulaal open up first abt her feelings n then its continued by kesar...and also kesar got the reason for gulaals behavior before accident...bechaare do no koh kithna sathaarahe hai...good that Pb came for their rescue...or else Mb n revji would have teased them in the same way...Pb said to Mb abt gulaal n kesar 😲...wow...PB sach mein sudhargayee hai 😲..I know kisiko yakeen hi nahi ho raha na.but yaar she is not that bad a person.Yes she was selfish but I think she finally realized the futility of caring what the society thinks when she lost Vasant.ab what can be worse than that😭.so that marriage talk was to know abt kesar's feelings...but kya kare ithna tension mein kesar tha ki bhina kuch bhathaaye bhagair hi MB koh patha chalgayaa...me happy that now every one is happy for this marriage...
Kesar's NAHI made me ROFL 😆...kya bechaini hai...hayeee...me with a wide smile now 😃...ab bhanda shaadi ke liye wait hi nahi karpaaraha hai...poor gulaal...she is all shy😳thank you for liking the NAHI😆
Mehndi day...good that roopa is here cancelling her honeymoon...gulaal would have really missed her if she is not here in the celebrations...roopa sasuraal people r good...happy for her...gulaal feeling that kesar is near her when doing all mehndi rituals was so cute...he has to be here na...wow...all the convo between them in her room after this is so romantic 😳...me loved it so much...
Marriage day...sudha talking abt her rude behavior to gulaal is good n i am happy that she wants to lead a new life from now..Thank God you liked it😊.bechaari gulaal...reva kham nahi hai kya...ab talli bhi uske saath mazaak karrahi hai...kesar has to be all dumb after seeing gulaal in her wedding dress na...wow...that scene doing pheras taking her in his arms was so good..very romantic indeed..me loved it...all the promises they did without even uttering a word I churaaofied from the show.but I did want to see something like this for Kesar and Gulaal-not this but somethin similar.awww just imagine it would have been so romantic.Srushti's "mangalyam"VM is a life saver 😃...bidaai scene..loved how kesar understood her n gave that support to her n its the best thing...her Fb of the same situation with vasant...what a contrast...the gruhpravesh was also very nice...the journey starts with this beautiful beginning...

Mini 🤗...this is an awesome FF yaar 👏...will miss waiting for the updates now...thank you so much for this...the main thing is do come up with a new story on our fav jodi soon😍

Ramya,you have supported me from Day 1 and I can't express in words how much your support and encouragement means to me.It has helped me so much.It helped me finish this story yaar.so yeh le badi si jhappi🤗Thank you so much for everything😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

res 😃 sorry for giving big chapi? 😲 aray chup !!! 😉 hugs for u for giving a big one 🤗 yeayyy new chapi is here 😃theek hai main chup rahungi😆

Kiran🤗

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wow wow mini superb chapi dear 👏 🤗thank you so much.I am so glad you liked it😃 u know i was smiling through out the chapi, loved the concern which gulaal showed for kesar 😳 n loved how she got worried, oh jab woh dream sequence aya i was like 😲 i didnt realize at first k woh dream tha, but well done yar, n then gulaal chupkay se sneaking into kesu's room n locking it to talk to him, aww so sweet, loved what she said to him n kesu hahaha aisi situation men bhi aise asking k manegi na meri baat 😆ab hamaara Kesar tho aise hi pesh aayega na.situation ka poora faayda uthana chahtha hai😉 n dushy knows everything aray wah 😃 haan woh apni blabbermouth,cute Talliji hain na.ab dono ke bonding session mein bak diya hoga😆u know i have a feeling that i know what revji, poonam ba n mota bha talked about 😉 then came the wedding aww so sweet n cute when kesu's jaw dropped hahaha 😆 loved their conversation n then the room scene n the way kesar supported her all through the wedding, so sweet 😃 n kesu ki gardan mat tor dena gulaal 😆 I don't think Kesar will mind😉bechara abhi bhi theek nahi hai n gulaal ji ko dekho ☺️ loved the scenes dear, n jaldi next update kar na, ab bas me waiting to know what the elders want to talk about 😃

Kiran,I have updated the final chapter.Hope you will read it when you get time.looking forward to your comments.Take care.Thank you so much for the support and all your sweet,lovely comments.It helped me so much🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

Mini🤗Thank u so much, it was really a great relief to know that both were alright and esp Kesar or else it might go a way too head for Gulaal and also the old Panba may again raise her head to blame Gulaal.Alanta😆now that would have become a tear-jerker and I would have got lot of chappals..happy for nothing of that sort happened..The most fav part of mine was the doctor addressing Kesar as her 'Pati'..oh I just loved it and even more liked that Gulaal was not at all amazed by it and it was almost like a silent acceptance.well that's what I wanted to show.glad you noticed it..it was just a small piece but conveyed a lot more..excellent👏..and her night mare, shall I call it an adorable dream😳...and Arey Gulaal, you promised him to agree with what ever he says...😲..aur dekh yeh brat ne instantly kya cheez maanga,...use tho hum jaanthe hein na,Kesar tho Kesar hai,how can he let go of such a golden opportunity😆 but Gulaal's reaction to it was really surprising, actually shockingly surprising😛...well she had always been quite honest about her feelings na and now there's nothing stopping her .she has finally stopped fighting so shocking tho hoga hi😉and he is not yet out from the cute brat mode😳...at least for just a millisecond I was reminded of the scene in the show where both of them literally show the mirror to each other, when Kesar asked her to look at the mirror and also later she too...awww...I do love that scene and yes I was thinking about it while writing this one.I just can't get over Gullu's smile in that scene.It was so cute😳

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The bit in between where u muted intentionally is almost coming to play, I guess...and am eagerly waiting for its unfolding which I hope to see in the next update for Gulsar has to meet MB and Rewji as Rewa told,at the end of the chapter..well now you know😃
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On a side note I am happy that u are indirectly showing the progress of Dulli,thank you.I love how you notice all these tiny things.It's as if you are reading my mind cause this is exactly what I wanted to show.I did not want to end the Dulli thing abruptly,so this was a way to remind the readers of their bond.thank you once again😊when he gives a knowing stance to Gulsar at the hospital and should I need say that I just loved the Gulsar scene in the hospital,😳 esp his questioning glance at her when a knock is heard at the door and her assuring reaction to him...beautiful...like I said before Mind reader😳
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update soon dear😊


Originally posted by: alanta

Mini🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 Probably my last set of comments here😭 awww Alanta kutty ithere emotional aavaalle.nyanum karanzhu povum😭


The starting session was so cute with Rewa's teasing and the following emotional convo between her and Gulaal, and Kesar witnessing all these in awe for his sister's matured air and the idea of showing Rewa as Gulaal's one of the greatest supports along with Kesar was just awesome; excellent characterization👏Thank you so much.Rewa is my fav.I enjoyed writing her scenes so much.It just came naturally.I am so happy that you liked her characterization😃
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The bidaai session was a bit emotional, but there too u managed to give Kesar a surprise in the form of Roopa😳Kesar ya Gulaal😆
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The haldi night was so romantic, Gulaal a little embarrassed even at the thought of he teasing her being filmy with her thoughts on him and here Kesar usse milne ke liye ladder se uski room tak climb karke aaya aur uski bed ke neeche khud ko chupaaya😲, mega filmy yaar😆..truly made for each other couple hein yeh😛 all his dialogues on haldi to her and esp that 'pyaar se haldi lagaana ' wala dialogue reminded me the scene in the show's haldi rasm, when he says similar words to her, while she hesitates in fear due to his revenge mode, though in a totally different context here.oh man those episodes were so much fun.I enjoyed every minute of it cause I knew that the shaadi was never going to happen.but watching the cat and mouse game between GK was a treat.and of course the pheras had to be like that itself na...😳..then here comes Gullu's Kesar, who knows her mind better than herself😍...and I just loved the last dialogue of him where he literally welcomes her in to his life..A perfect ENDthank you😃
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So a beautiful journey has reached its proper destination and was great throughout. Thank u so much dear for gifting us such a wonderful writing and see I wont cry again 😊..but hope u will bring another one soon😳

Alanta,Thank you so much for supporting me and encouraging me.Your kind words always helped me out so much.so yeh le a big jhappi🤗It's because of all you wonderful people that I was able to finish this FF😃so thank you once again.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: enchanted23

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Mini, I can't stop dancing and blushing☺️ after reading this'dil garden garden ho gaya'.yeh le big zappi🤗 yaar for making me so happy'thank you for the hug Aditi.bas this chapter was a compensation for the previous chapter.I hope now all your gussa has vanished😳

I like how Gulaal's thoughts before and after the accident only centred around her universe and that is Kesar, she is desperate for him to open his eyes and look at her, for that one chance, for that one moment where she can make amends for all her misdeed'.she can't see anything beyond this and in panic becomes completely oblivious to her physical pain'ahh love at it's best completely unconditional, totally devotional, wholly encompassing and utterly consuming''👏dekho now main kya comment maroon.you have described it perfectly😭thank you so much.

The holding of hand throughout the journey to the hospital so symbolic ,clinging on to the bond that connects two souls frantic for one eye contact to express everything that remained unsaid'.and that silent prayer to god to not punish him for all her mistakes and not to take away her only reason to live'😍once again,nothing left for me to say cause this is exactly what I wanted to convey😭

The night scene at hospital was so typical GK'I mean once Gulaal is determined and knows her mind she is ready to take on anyone and anything and if it happens to be for Kesar well yep now there's nothing holding her back na.even in the show I am sure that once she accepts Kesar whole heartedly, she will be as crazy for him as he is for her.They are quite similar na and we did see her pyaar mein deewani roop with Vasant.sometimes I wish I could see their dynamic as a couple(cause in my mind they will be this completely in love,totally passionate and khullam khulla pyaar type couple)but then I feel nahi,the show was like a movie and so it ended at the correct point.'just goes without saying they are so made for each other both have to immediately make other aware of this realisation they just cannot wait na'and of course she had to see him just to ensure he is ok, what trspires in that room for few minutes is amazingly well written'and yes trust Kesar to be conveniently conscious when it matters the most😉'..typical Kesu'he cannot believe that she is promising no fights with him😲'.even in that delirious state he cannot believe what he hears na'and is quick to pick on her''ahh these two'that's because he knows her better and Gullu,I don't think she will be able to keep that promise of never fighting with him.arre nok-jhok ke bina where's the spice😳

Gulaal's bedroom scene again blushing☺️'and some more😳'ok I give up'I loved it'I hope Gulaal just doesn't get carried away like this again'poor Kesu's neck'.chalo I am happy all of you liked the scene cause I was not very confident about it.I am quite bad at writing these scenes😆

Chalo let's see if elders have engagement in mind'.after all that's what they were discussing in hospital na'😃now you know😃

Lovely chappi Mini👏'..I am going to dance some more'Le aur ek big hug🤗'and so to the climax'.😍thank you🤗

Originally posted by: enchanted23

"'.. to have and to hold from this day forward, for better or for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish; from this day forward until death do us part''."I do love these lines especially the "till death do us part".The vows are quite romantic na😳

I am so emotiona😭l at the closure but at the same time can't stop blushing☺️, perfect and fitting end to a beautiful love story'..one can't expect any less from you Mini and you did justice to the story by tying up everything wonderfully.👏hai hai main bhi blush kar rahi hoon.Itne sweet compliments padhke😳 Aditi,thank you so much yaar🤗

Starting with Reva's entry to bring lovebirds back to reality from their romantic escapades to teasing of his bro, to her mature and caring monologue to Gulaal about Roopa's bidai you have given Reva's characters so many layers from a playful and mischievous lil sister to a caring, thoughtful and compassionate friend and sister-in-law(to be ofcourse)I love Rewa.She is my fav character.writing for her came so naturally.I never struggled with her.Thank you for appreciating her😃

I was equally amazed as Kesar how quickly Gulaal came up with a reasonable excuse when asked about her whereabouts by Poonam Ba, kitna jhoot bolti hai Gulaal chii'So I guess the accident has made everyone in the family about their relationship and everyone is hell bent on keeping it a secret'ahh well, haq banta hai unka after all these two also didn't reveal anything for a long time'Gullu,the jhooti😆yep the family is having some fun at the expense of these two.

I liked the way you finally made them confess in front of entire family even though all of them already knew and were just trying to entice the truth from both of them but that also provided opportunity for Gulaal to clear the reason behind her unreasonable behaviour towards Kesar in last few weeks thus tying up one of the thread there. I was surprised when MB told that it was PB who came up with suggestion about GK,I was not entirely convinced of her change of heart but indeed she wanted Kesar to be happy na, after all she did pay a very heavy price for her past behaviour so yeas another nicely tied up another thread thereI am sorry yaar but kya karein.She is a mother after all and she was not that bad a person na.bechari ne bete ko kho diya and what is worse than that.so now she is completely sudhaarofied.''and Kesu naturally can't wait for marriage so blurted out what was in his mind embarrassing poor Gullu'..I hope you liked that bit😛

So she can sense his presence around, usko to waha aana hi tha, perfect hiding place too and ofcourse Gulaal can't keep up her pretence for long so no point in being angry with him after all she so wanted him around too when the turmeric was being applied 'ahh these two sigh! I am so going to miss this FF Mini'.what followed in the room was utter bliss and really heart-warming''Aditi,I am going to miss your wonderful comments yaar but koi nahi I can enjoy your vishesh tipaanis in the EDT and on other FFs😃

So Roopa's family has no objections to Gulaal's impending wedding and they all seem to be really taking it well so another happy closure there am so glad you tied up this one as well just like CVs all scene linking perfectly and last but not least Sudha had to get rid of her guilt as well na, so she does and not only that tells her about the decision she has taken to face the reality and stop living a lie Yay way to go woman I for one am really happy that you mentioned about her decision to walk out of the relationship that had no future and was the point of loveless marriage anyways'.so another well executed tie up there'..what's the point.That idiot Raman is never going to change and Sudha,bechaari was turning into a bitter,frustrated woman so she needed to move out😭

The entire marriage ceremony scene was beautifully penned I liked how you drew parallel from the show for that glass piercing and subsequent pheras with her being in his arms'aww so so romantic'.I wish you could have penned down each pheras with meaning as well, I so wanted to see this in the show,I know all of us wanted to anyways'I have put bible version above but I am biased toward the Indian pheras and that's why I love Srush's vm which I just discovered today'..Aditi,this was the part I was getting stuck.The pheras and the vows-I tried yaar but kuch jam nahi raha tha.I was not able to write them properly isliye hataa diya.Sorry about that.I tried my level best😭

And so they lived happily ever after'.Thanks Mini 🤗for taking all of us to a lovely journey that was so beautiful ,amazing so enriching and heart-warming👏, it will keep us blissfully contented for long time to come and if you can restart this journey at some point then that contentment will only grow'..Thanks for a wonderful and joyful journey'..Please come back with another one if you can''😍

Aditi,thank you so much for being so supportive through out.Your thoughtful comments always brought a smile to my face and I am so glad that this story lived upto your expectations.I was quite nervous about the ending but your comments made me so happy and I felt quite relieved.
Thank you yaar for always being so generous and kind.You are very sweet.
yeh le ek badi si jhappi 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Mini late comments k liye my pitayi pakki..but ye long nahi tha.😳.I had this huge grin on my face while I was reading the chapter😃 and the dream sequence was very well written.👏.Awww she is so worried about Kesar na..Aur Dushy ko bhi pata chala.😛.Ab ye secret convo humein kab batayegi...

😛Piu,no pitaayi re.dekh main khud kitni late ho gayi with my replies.As I said earlier tu bas apne updates ke baare mein soch.That is good enough for me😃I am so happy that you liked the dream sequence.means a lot coming from you😳

I just lubbed the chappi Mini it was shooo cute and KGish and Gullu kesu ki har baat manegi😆hmmm patha nahi shayad har baat maan le😉 lekin jhagda karna kabhi nahi chodegi😆

pls update really soon yaar..And pls chotu comments se kaam chala le yaar🤗

Piu🤗Thank you so much yaar for the comments.Hopefully you will like the last chapter.your constant support encouraged me to finish this FF so thank you so much for that.looking forward to your updates😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mini - the grand finale is here at last, complete with tears and smiles and happy endings. There's no one thing I want to point out and talk about - only that the GK you characterized were full of credible emotions, and that their evolution as a couple was endearing to follow. I'm always going to have an extra soft corner for the Rewa in this story, cause she was a rockstar cupid out and out. Loved the transitions in ideologies for PB, Sudha... and even Gulaal and Kesar themselves!

Thanks for sharing a lovely FF for us, and hope to see you doing more of this 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Mini - the grand finale is here at last, complete with tears and smiles and happy endings. There's no one thing I want to point out and talk about - only that the GK you characterized were full of credible emotions, and that their evolution as a couple was endearing to follow. I'm always going to have an extra soft corner for the Rewa in this story, cause she was a rockstar cupid out and out. Loved the transitions in ideologies for PB, Sudha... and even Gulaal and Kesar themselves!


Thanks for sharing a lovely FF for us, and hope to see you doing more of this 🤗

Jzee,you have been so sweet and supportive yaar from the time I joined the forum.Thank you so much🤗I am so happy that you found the ending satisfactory.Rewa is a sweetheart.She is my fav too.writing her was such a joy.I always had a smile whenever I wrote her dialogues.I am glad that I was able to convey it to you guys.
Thank you so much for the encouragement.Take care.
and yes I am still waiting for the update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Mini,

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