Originally posted by: enchanted23
"'.. to have and to hold from this day forward, for better or for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish; from this day forward until death do us part''."I do love these lines especially the "till death do us part".The vows are quite romantic na😳
I am so emotiona😭l at the closure but at the same time can't stop blushing☺️, perfect and fitting end to a beautiful love story'..one can't expect any less from you Mini and you did justice to the story by tying up everything wonderfully.👏hai hai main bhi blush kar rahi hoon.Itne sweet compliments padhke😳 Aditi,thank you so much yaar🤗
Starting with Reva's entry to bring lovebirds back to reality from their romantic escapades to teasing of his bro, to her mature and caring monologue to Gulaal about Roopa's bidai you have given Reva's characters so many layers from a playful and mischievous lil sister to a caring, thoughtful and compassionate friend and sister-in-law(to be ofcourse)I love Rewa.She is my fav character.writing for her came so naturally.I never struggled with her.Thank you for appreciating her😃
I was equally amazed as Kesar how quickly Gulaal came up with a reasonable excuse when asked about her whereabouts by Poonam Ba, kitna jhoot bolti hai Gulaal chii'So I guess the accident has made everyone in the family about their relationship and everyone is hell bent on keeping it a secret'ahh well, haq banta hai unka after all these two also didn't reveal anything for a long time'Gullu,the jhooti😆yep the family is having some fun at the expense of these two.
I liked the way you finally made them confess in front of entire family even though all of them already knew and were just trying to entice the truth from both of them but that also provided opportunity for Gulaal to clear the reason behind her unreasonable behaviour towards Kesar in last few weeks thus tying up one of the thread there. I was surprised when MB told that it was PB who came up with suggestion about GK,I was not entirely convinced of her change of heart but indeed she wanted Kesar to be happy na, after all she did pay a very heavy price for her past behaviour so yeas another nicely tied up another thread thereI am sorry yaar but kya karein.She is a mother after all and she was not that bad a person na.bechari ne bete ko kho diya and what is worse than that.so now she is completely sudhaarofied.''and Kesu naturally can't wait for marriage so blurted out what was in his mind embarrassing poor Gullu'..I hope you liked that bit😛
So she can sense his presence around, usko to waha aana hi tha, perfect hiding place too and ofcourse Gulaal can't keep up her pretence for long so no point in being angry with him after all she so wanted him around too when the turmeric was being applied 'ahh these two sigh! I am so going to miss this FF Mini'.what followed in the room was utter bliss and really heart-warming''Aditi,I am going to miss your wonderful comments yaar but koi nahi I can enjoy your vishesh tipaanis in the EDT and on other FFs😃
So Roopa's family has no objections to Gulaal's impending wedding and they all seem to be really taking it well so another happy closure there am so glad you tied up this one as well just like CVs all scene linking perfectly and last but not least Sudha had to get rid of her guilt as well na, so she does and not only that tells her about the decision she has taken to face the reality and stop living a lie Yay way to go woman I for one am really happy that you mentioned about her decision to walk out of the relationship that had no future and was the point of loveless marriage anyways'.so another well executed tie up there'..what's the point.That idiot Raman is never going to change and Sudha,bechaari was turning into a bitter,frustrated woman so she needed to move out😭
The entire marriage ceremony scene was beautifully penned I liked how you drew parallel from the show for that glass piercing and subsequent pheras with her being in his arms'aww so so romantic'.I wish you could have penned down each pheras with meaning as well, I so wanted to see this in the show,I know all of us wanted to anyways'I have put bible version above but I am biased toward the Indian pheras and that's why I love Srush's vm which I just discovered today'..Aditi,this was the part I was getting stuck.The pheras and the vows-I tried yaar but kuch jam nahi raha tha.I was not able to write them properly isliye hataa diya.Sorry about that.I tried my level best😭
And so they lived happily ever after'.Thanks Mini 🤗for taking all of us to a lovely journey that was so beautiful ,amazing so enriching and heart-warming👏, it will keep us blissfully contented for long time to come and if you can restart this journey at some point then that contentment will only grow'..Thanks for a wonderful and joyful journey'..Please come back with another one if you can''😍