FF:Pyaar Ka Rishta Final Chapter updtd Pg 67

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SRJKiShraddha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Mini tum dabuloo hogayi ho kya?jo itne acche chappi ko boring keh rahi ho? And woh radio song kam kesu ke dil ka haal tha:-D
bahut smart hai ye banda , honewale saas sasur ko masaka marna acchi tarah se aata hai:-D
abb next update jaldi lana aur apni health ka khayal rakhana:-)

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minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: MR21
res

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Mini...galool is back with a bang in this chapter...ab keasr ka kya hoga😕Ramya🤗aah why the long face😭
the hug after his return has to be very intense na...even she cant resist after her promise to herself to stay away from kesar...how can she resist Kesar's jadoo😳
offo...kya kya stupid reasons de rahi hai..kesar se dhoor rehne ke liye...but he is still thinking those reasons as real problems...bechara Kesar,shoch mein tha na😕
ha ha..angry kesar is back..yeh kya he will not go after her...ab aisa tu sach mein kar sakthe ho kya😆yaa right as if he can stay away from her😆
gulaal...come out of that gallol mode jaldi..kesar koh mein aisa nahi dekhsakthi ...awww Ramya,don't worry
ha ha...he himself realized that he cant stay away from her na...maine bola tha na😃
i liked kesar n pb convo...reva n kesar convo is the best...she is such a good n lovely sister...she gave him a hope though she is thinking that there is some thing unusual abt gulaal these days...
duggu ki entry😲...aur woh bhi gullu ki childhood friend n neighbor..duggu still u r nikamma...kesar tujhe nahi chodega agar gullu ke saath aisa hi baath kiya toh...mere story mein Duggu kaafi shareef bandha hai.usko galat mat samajh Ramya😆
gullu expecting him to ask her the reason n manao her...she dont want to do it but she is expecting the same from kesar...human tendency na. she is still not gone into the Galool mode completely😳
jealous kesar...loving this...now he is determined to know the actual reason for her behavior towards him...

Mini...i really liked the chapter...but jaldi se yeh dhooriyaa khatham karde...looking forward to the next convo between them n i am expecting a very big confrontation too...update soon...thank you😃

Originally posted by: MR21
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Mini...just loved it yaar...especially the ending...thank you so much

I really liked how kesar is very much disappoint as he will not be able to talk to gulaal till evening...ab bechaare saare employee phas gaye na...kesar ke ghusse ke wajaai se...haan bechare.bhagwaan kare aisa boss kisi ko na mile😆
duggu😡...jaldi se yahaa se dhafaa hojaa...warna kesar will kick u out of this office...thank god he left...Duggu harmless hai.so don't worry😊
scene in kesars room is very nice...how much ever she tries to move away from him...she cant do it...yeh gulaal toh kesar koh confuse karrahi hai..aur khud bhi horahi hai...Gullu Kesar ke paas aate hi confusiyaa jaati hai bechaari😆
Gulaal ki jai ho...gulaal aise hug koh reciprocate karegi toh kesar tere baat kaise maanega...
kya logic bhataaya hai ki she was not in love..its only lagaav.,,n more over shaadi nahi karegi...kesar aise hi tujhe chodega kya...kabhi nahi...haan nahi tho😆
Loved kesar today...mein toh har chapter mein pasand karthi hoon...magar the way he turned the tables n the way he made gulaal to feel his love for her is too good...gulaal ki plan toh flop hogaayee...thank you so much Ramya

Mini...Well this is a very good chapter...Have a happy Journey n come back with a dhaansu chapter...

Ramya,thanks a lot for the detailed comments.They really are precious to me.Thanks for the unwavering support you have given me through out.so here's a big hug from me to you🤗

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: chweetu
res..😕

is res ka jawaab kaun dega😭

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: rimjhim1
Mini🤗, great, i love the way things are unfolding :).Rimjhim🤗thank you yaar.
So Gulaal's finding it hard to ignore him, kash aisa hota rahe and soon he finds out the truth. :)I hope so too😃

Durgesh bhi office mein kaam karta hai🤣, i found that so funny for some reason, its funny picturing him in office clothes😆, a bit like this..yaar I just wanted some guy to make Kesar jealous.koi naam nahi soojh raha tha so I named him Durgesh.

PWAHAHAHAHA

Sorry sorry mujhe ignore karo, main thodi si pagal hoon ;).that I know😉 but now even I am laughing looking at this picture.Hey bhagwaan bechara Duggu,mere story mein tho he is a simple guy but yahaan sab ne uski itni kichaayi ki hai,now I am feeling sorry for naming him Durgesh😆

Anyways i loved it, hope jaldi misunderstanding finish hoh jaye, arrey yeh saath mein hoh kar sabse lare, i dont mind, but aise separate :(...awww,don't worry😊

Good Good, lage raho😃..thank you

Rimjhim,thank you so much.I have updated the new chapter.do read it when you get time😊

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: sauris
Lo bahi gulaal ho gayi gulool & kesar ek angry young man.Ab toh sparks nikelenge,aagg lagegi aur dhuwa bhi uthega.Ab is push & pull main maaza aayega,jaldi se update kar ha..ha ha..sparks ka tho patha nahi lekin angry young man aaya aur chala bhi gaya bechara😆

Originally posted by: sauris
Minizz,superb chappi,ab gulaal ko gulool mode se nikalne keliye kesar jo karega,usme bahut maaza aanewala hai,bechari gulaal chaathi thi ki kesar usse dur chala jaye magar woh toh uske aur hi karib aajayega,ab jaldi se lautkar update kar

Sauris,thank you so much for liking it.haan yehi ho raha hai.the more she is trying to stay away from him the closer he is getting.update kar diya hai.hope you liked it.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
mini 🤗 lovely update dear, loved it, yeh kya gullu itna harshly baat karing kesu se that is Gullu trying to be Galooln kesu kitna pyar se came to her, he was dying to meet her oh kya guzri hogi gullu k dil pe i m feeling sad for them,awww I know😭 i wanna kill sudha, yar jaldi confusion clear ho, oho kesu jealous 😉 yeh hui na baat 😆 ab me so desperate to know what he vl do, n colleague is durgesh lol lol, wese gullu ko andaza ho jana chahiye that kesu ka jealousy se bura haal hai, n ohhh ab he will get the answers for his questions, me loving it, superb yar, jaldi next chapi update kar 😃thank you so much yaar

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
lovely chapi mini 🤗 loved it dear, gullu cant resist kesar na, loved their confrontation scene, aik baar kesu paas ajaye toh gullu even forgets her own self 😳 so true.she can make lot of plans but when he is in front of her saare plans ki vaat lag jaati hai😳this is so sweet 😊 i really liked it how he questions her n how she steps back n rebukes him, but kesar is kesar na, he came to know that gulaal has a reason for doing all this 😃 n gullu said she doesnt love him 😲 yeh kya keh diya yaar, kesar k dil pe kya guzri hogi, per i m not tensed as i know kesar vl never let her go away from him. they r meant to be together, update soon dear n enjoy ur holidays 😃

thank you so much Kiran.I had a great time-spent some quality time with my husband.it was good.I am so glad that you are liking the chapters.bas 2 yaa 3 aur chapters and then I think the story will be finished.Thanks for sticking with it.Here's a hug from me to you🤗

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: Kesarmania
kesu ka gussa bhi na uff. and yeh kya duggu villan hai kya?

Shradha,Kesar ka gussa tho kab ka ud gaya😆nahi yaar not a villian abhi aur villains nahi.bas ho gaya.

Originally posted by: Kesarmania
wow kesu - gullu confrontation superb tha , i loved it. par duggu mujhe pareshan kar raha hai . kya yeh gullu ko patana chata hai

so happy that you liked the scene.Duggu harmless hai yaar.us bechare ko chod do😆

thanks a lot for the comments😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: alanta
Mini, I couldnt come here properly for some days ..and so couldnt comment also...ithni dino ke baad waapas aakar acha lagraha hein...It will take some time for me to be regular here...was reading all your updates..whenever got time..and the story is going through a disheartened situation..and above all Durgesh's entry!! I cant bear all this dear...hope everything will be sort out soon...and I am happy to comment at last🤗

Alanta🤗It's ok yaar.I missed you too.I am trying not to make it too bleak by adding some light moments in between.don't worry everything will be sorted in the next 2 or 3 chapters.Take care and hope to see you regularly on the forum😊

I have updated the new one.do read it when you get time😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Res for 2 chappis 😛
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Mini pehle mujhe ,maar coz I have been really stuck up with work and could not comment earlier... Piu,its ok yaar.I see your like regularly so no worries😊 so no maar only jhappi🤗
Well Poor Gulaal fell into the trap of sudha's words and trying to put up the pretence of being just friends with him..just friends ha ha ha😆that's such a cliched expression for something else going on na😆
And I just lubbed jealous Kesuda...Awww duugu ko dekh kar ka soch raha hai lol.bechare Duggu ko isliye leke aayi taaki jealous Kesar dikh jaaye.so haapy you loved it.
And end ka to main kya kahoon..I just lubbed how Kesu made her realisze that there is a difference in being just frieds and lubbing someone ...Yeay three cheers for the brat...😆
Just lubbed it yaar...⭐️
When will you update...I wanna know agey Galool kya karegiGulaal kuch nahi karegi.waise agar kuch karne ka sochegi bhi tho Kesar hai na so no worries😳

Piyu,thank you so much for the lovely comments.I know taking time out from your busy schedule must be so difficult for you.so it means a lot to me that you take the effort.Thank you so much for that and yeh lo ek badi si jhappi for that🤗