FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143 - Page 96

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

99.9k

Users

31

Likes

2.3k

Frequent Posters

prachurya thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
ayyyee...dnt u dare call this crap! It was really gud. First tym we see Gulaal's feelings. She remembered all da moments and finally realised that he had made her feel special even before they were married. Loved it how the marriage incident was seen in a different light by her due to our sweet Kesuda! I loved the letter in which she expressed that she missed him...WOW😍!!! But sacchi, agar Kesar wud not hav thrown a tantrum den they cud hav had some quality time together...gadhaaa😡. Mucchad Choudhary ka kya karne waala hai apna Kesuda?????m really excited😃
kalika.j thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Dear piyu,next chapter jaldi post karnekeliye tumareliye,

with love kalika.

Incense thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

wow to bacha paan lekar aaya seriously yeh elaachi waali tofee se jyada acha tha and gulaal is feeling something something ahem ahem matlab chii moment will come soon and really curious to know muchi k kya hone waala hai lovely chapii piyu and bring the next chapter soon soon

Transference thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

Oye Piu🤗...nayaa chappie toh ek dum super hai yaara😃

Hi Ramya..

thanks Glad that you liked it .

I wrote the chappi in a very bad mood.

Angry kesuda😳...me like him a lot...good that he did not started a fight because of this...bacha love ke realisation se toh ek dum sudhargaya hai😉...hurt toh hua hai...toh false sleep...
LOved Loved this conflict of his mind and heart👏...arey dil ka sunna...biwi ithna pyaar se khana khane ke liye khehrahi hai...ithna bhaav kyun khatha hai...he is pretending that he doesnot missed her😳...oye usse toh patha hi hoga ke tu khana nahi khaaya hoga...ithna surprise hone ki kya zarooat thi...
Yes Ramya love can make you a better person and thats what exactly happened with Kesar.His temper tantrums have become milder because he now realises his love for Gulaal.And regarding the conflict of mind and heart it is the crux of every love story😳
haaye...bacha bhaav khara hai..aur biwi khana room mein laayi hai..ab toh khanaahi padega😉...
yeh gullu hamesha rothi kyun hai yaar😆...waise kesu koh raasthe mein laane kha achchi tharikha hai...loved the reasons she gave him of her being late😳...
Gullu is a big rondu.😆.acha hi hai na..bacha all gone mad after he sees his Gullu darling crying😉
Sweet paan...mujhe bhi chahiyee😭...loved how he stuffed the paan in her mouth...n then the conversation between them abt marriage...ohh loved it👏...
Oh Yes bhai ab koi Ramya k liye pan lao re😆
marriage ke bharemein sochkar gullu koh vassy yaad nahi aa raha hai...she is not sad abt remembering it...she is realising what kesar has done to her😍...
Yes Remember that Pb once told Kesu that it is very difficult to remove an image from a woman;s heart and it is even more difficult to fill new colours in it.But our Kesuda has finally managed this herculean task bas Gullu ko ehsaas hona baki hai😳
she is avoiding him to control her anxiety...loved the TV conversation😊...abt her parents (waise liked it more as even i see cricket matches with my father...even in my exams time we used to see and my mother used to scold me and my father...just you made me remember all those sweet memories😳)...but bheech mein dushy koh laane khi kya zaroorat thi😡...dekha bacha phir se gussa hogaya...
Yes We all lubb to watch matches with our Daddy dearest and Mummy's always fuss.We are all papa's darling daughters😳
Gullu is restless😳..she is remembering all the time she shared with kesar...oye hoye me liking it...
Yes Gullu ko kuch kuch ho raha hai😉
Coming to letter part...brilliant...loved it...me allafter reading it...she missed him😳...n she actually telling him that...ohh my goodness...
Thanx 😳...Gullu is more straightforward now😳

Kesar dekha agar gussa nahi hotha toh gulaal kal raat koh hi keh dethi na...magar tera gussa bhi na...Loved thisGulaal tum sirf meri ho..sirf meri'Tumse apne dil ki baat zarur kahunga main.Chalo achcha hai ke woh love confess karne ke liye ready toh hogaya...his determination to do some intezaam of muchchad dushy🤣...
Muchad dushy ko Kesu bawarchi se bhagwaan hi bachaye😆
Arre party toh bantha hai..iss chappie mein toh gullu darling toh kuch +ve sign dikha rahi hai🥳
Party to banta hi hai na..see me also dancing

Lovely chappie Piu🤗...me loved it...chal ab jaldi se next chappie update khar...

Thanx Ramya..😳lubb you for your bada wala comment.🤗I feel so elated now😳

Transference thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CertifiedBummer

'Kesar threw away the coffee mug in despair and ran towards his room ,quickly jumped into his bed and pretended to sleep.He did not even open the door as Gulaal kept on ringing the door bell.' So cute :')


Thanks Piu!! Loved this chapterrr! =D
Cant wait for the next one (:

Thanx Nirmohi.😳.will try and update soon

Transference thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: snehasri

i love this gulsar ko in dono ki nokjhoke bahut achha hai

kesar kyo uth gaya do minute ke bad uth jata shayad ho sakta hai ki vo apni man ki baat kah diya hoti 😉i love the gullu letter too😉college mat jana otherwise she going to miss u😉
lovely chapi👏👏👏

Thanx Sneha🤗 Glad that you liked it.😳.aur nok jhonk to pyar mein chalta hi hai na..Gullu ne itne pyaar se lubb letter likha batao kesu college kaise jayega😆

Transference thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nneeiill

wow ..wat a chappi re..even the last chappi was also too good..dushy ko ab gullu hug karegi na..toh😡...

Oye bache..tu itne dino baad..🤗

haila me all happy shappy..

aap aye bahar ayi..

Thanx



arey i was thinking when will kesar confess ..and elo apni Gullu tho ishmaart nikhli...she missed her Kesar and even conveyed it to him..thats was unexpected...loved it

tabhi gullu madam itni bechain thi raat bar...

Gullu madam to shmart nikli re..Kesu gussa hi karta reh gaya aur apne dil ki baat bhi keh di😳


btw loved the meeta paan scene too...yaar itne dinchak ideas kaha se laati ho

Yaar ainwayi jo man mein ata hai likh deti hun


u r superb writer...

and i loved these lines

His frustration grew manifold due to the cumulative effect of his uneasiness to blurt out his feelings and the ignorance on the part of his beloved.


Haila..me fainting shainting..

ab inni tareef bhi na karo

Lubb you and miss you too



Transference thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Piyu🤗

Jzee



You cannot call that chapter crappy! Dude! I loved the flow of events here... I like how Gulaal is growing into her share of restlessness trying to figure the enigma of Kesar's position in her life... Add brownie points to the fact, that she - being the character she is, and the so far circumstance induced upper hand she's managed to maintain - actually speaks, far more candidly, of her feelinsg to him, even if in a letter!
Oh Jzee I wrte this chappi in a very bad mood.
Thanx and Glad that you liked it.
Well now its Gulaal's turn to experience ,analyse and realise what Kesar and his love means to her.Now Gulllu is elder so does not feel shy to express .Its now time for Gullu love

I still doubt she can just absorb a confession from him - without reeling momentarily from the impact - but that she's already being forced into theseintrospectionshould help her find her heart easier and sooner!
Well Gulaal is Gulaal confession pe pata nahi kya karegi

Can only begin to imagine what muchad's plight will now be,at the hands of Kesar the not so benevolent bawarchee😆In the meanwhile, I'm just happy at the way they're gaining mutual comfort, yet fidgeting with the strains of a relationship which can be anything but platonic!
Well muchad ko to bhagwaan hi bachaye bawarchee se🤣.Jzee lubbed lines in bold👏

Waiting for the next chapter ALREADEEE!😍
Hey will try and update soon

ps: take it easy with work - kal to Sunday hai!

xx
JZee

Lubb you Jzee 🤗and thanx for the lubbly comment

Transference thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

loved the update.very nice
brilliant update.

Long Time Raunika..

thanx for the compliment

Transference thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: alanta

piu🤗you are just amazing what a fantastic chapter👏

Lekin yeh Kesar??? now what is he upto??? Dushyanth pls take care of ur self ab tuje piu bhi nahin bachaa saktha 😆
waiting for the next😳..

Alanta🤗

Thanx..😳Glad that you liked it

Dushy ko to ab bhagwaan hi bachaye🤣

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".