FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: vinolya
Piu, 😃
Iam here to comment 😳... pls dont hit me...
Vino aa gayi
jao main tumse nahi baat karti..
nah re
I LUBB YOU

I read all the chapters...hmmm... those which I didnt read. Iam very late in commenting... YehAarti se achcha aur kaun jaantha hoga, ab tumbhi jaan gayi... ab Kiran bhi jaan jaayegi... 😉... kya karun... am like that, and thats me 😎
Thanx ..🤗
meri late latif aa gayi

Really sorry for the late comment Piu.Well.. coming to your chapters, I feel as if am watching a movie... the way you describe... everything just flashes before my eyes... and I think many who read your FF will agree with me. I loved loved loved the bodyguard song wala part... OMG I too was laughing along with Gulaal... 😆I loved 29th chapter, it was very beautifully written... to me it was like a cinematic screenplay. And in the latest chapter.. as I was reading the pleats part... your narration did bring a smile to my face.. it was too cute.
Why sorry ..yaar😳
only hugs
Thanx for the lubbly compliment
haila.😲.Omg bole to cinematic screenplay
Vino that body guard song was a badla from chaitu

And this is for your poem... ⭐️👏👍🏼... very well written.
Thanx🤗

Again sorry Piu for the late comment... hereafter I shall try to be regular in commenting... 😳😃😕
Oye where is my danda now😡
Why sorry Vino..🤗
only hugs yaar❤️
Lubb you🤗

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snehasri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#942

i love this gulsar ko in dono ki nokjhoke bahut achha hai

kesar kyo uth gaya do minute ke bad uth jata shayad ho sakta hai ki vo apni man ki baat kah diya hoti 😉 i love the gullu letter too😉 college mat jana otherwise she going to miss u😉

lovely chapi👏👏👏

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#943

Originally posted by: arti07
oh wow yanha itna kuch ho gaya...gullu ko khana banana aa gaya 😃drive karna aa gaya👏 kesu ko love shove ho gaya 😳😳😳and gullu went for a date😡...this is so pinching 😭gullu dispensary jaakar eye check kara k aa.😡😡😡...us muchi man mein kya dekh liya🤢...
ok ab kesu blurt karega love it.😳...brilliant chapiis piyu 👏👏👏...now me back to studies😭

Oye arti aa gayi..meri chotu govinda aa gayi

haila.😲.inna gussa acha nahi

Bp high wy ho jayega...

Thanx chotu govinda🤗

ja padhai kar

all the best👍🏼

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#944

Res walon.😛.jaldi se unres karo😭

And kalika this is for you

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#945

Originally posted by: snehasri
i love this gulsar ko in dono ki nokjhoke bahut achha hai
kesar kyo uth gaya do minute ke bad uth jata shayad ho sakta hai ki vo apni man ki baat kah diya hoti 😉i love the gullu letter too😉college mat jana otherwise she going to miss u😉

lovely chapi👏👏👏

Thanx sneha🤗.I wrote this in a very bad mood as I was tired.Glad that you liked it..

Thanx me all dancing shancing now

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EXOL

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Posted: 14 years ago

#946

wow ..wat a chappi re..even the last chappi was also too good..dushy ko ab gullu hug karegi na..toh 😡...

arey i was thinking when will kesar confess ..and elo apni Gullu tho ishmaart nikhli...she missed her Kesar and even conveyed it to him..thats was unexpected...loved it
tabhi gullu madam itni bechain thi raat bar...

btw loved the meeta paan scene too...yaar itne dinchak ideas kaha se laati ho

u r superb writer...

and i loved these lines
His frustration grew manifold due to the cumulative effect of his uneasiness to blurt out his feelings and the ignorance on the part of his beloved.

Edited by nneeiill - 14 years ago

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without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#947

Piyu 🤗

You cannot call that chapter crappy! Dude! I loved the flow of events here... I like how Gulaal is growing into her share of restlessness trying to figure the enigma of Kesar's position in her life... Add brownie points to the fact, that she - being the character she is, and the so far circumstance induced upper hand she's managed to maintain - actually speaks, far more candidly, of her feelinsg to him, even if in a letter!

I still doubt she can just absorb a confession from him - without reeling momentarily from the impact - but that she's already being forced into these introspection should help her find her heart easier and sooner!

Can only begin to imagine what muchad's plight will now be, at the hands of Kesar the not so benevolent bawarchee 😆 In the meanwhile, I'm just happy at the way they're gaining mutual comfort, yet fidgeting with the strains of a relationship which can be anything but platonic!

Waiting for the next chapter ALREADEEE! 😍

ps: take it easy with work - kal to Sunday hai!

JZee