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Posted: 14 years ago
Piu mhaari o pyaari,
kyun sukoon dil paaye na
taras gaye hain hum naa
update to laavo na
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Posted: 14 years ago
Piu, 😃
Iam here to comment 😳... pls dont hit me...
I read all the chapters...hmmm... those which I didnt read. Iam very late in commenting... Yeh Aarti se achcha aur kaun jaantha hoga, ab tumbhi jaan gayi... ab Kiran bhi jaan jaayegi... 😉... kya karun... am like that, and thats me 😎
Really sorry for the late comment Piu. Well.. coming to your chapters, I feel as if am watching a movie... the way you describe... everything just flashes before my eyes... and I think many who read your FF will agree with me. I loved loved loved the bodyguard song wala part... OMG I too was laughing along with Gulaal... 😆 I loved 29th chapter, it was very beautifully written... to me it was like a cinematic screenplay. And in the latest chapter.. as I was reading the pleats part... your narration did bring a smile to my face.. it was too cute.
And this is for your poem... ⭐️ 👏 👍🏼... very well written.
Again sorry Piu for the late comment... hereafter I shall try to be regular in commenting... 😳 😃 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow yanha itna kuch ho gaya...gullu ko khana banana aa gaya 😃drive karna aa gaya👏 kesu ko love shove ho gaya 😳😳😳and gullu went for a date😡😡😡😡...this is so pinching 😭😭😭😭gullu dispensary jaakar eye check kara k aa.😡😡😡...us muchi man mein kya dekh liya🤢...
ok ab kesu blurt karega love it.😳...brilliant chapiis piyu 👏👏👏...now me back to studies😭
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PART 31

You are mine

Kesar fumed and was deeply hurt.He saw Gulaal still smiling as she waved Dushyant Good bye. "How can someone be so scornful and oblivious to his plight.He thought .His frustration grew manifold due to the cumulative effect of his uneasiness to blurt out his feelings and the ignorance on the part of his beloved.

Kesar threw away the coffee mug in despair and ran towards his room ,quickly jumped into his bed and pretended to sleep.He did not even open the door as Gulaal kept on ringing the door bell.Gulaal managed to come inside as she had a separate set of keys.Gulaal entered their room and saw Kesar sleeping.(or maybe trying to sleep)She came near him and observed him closely and smiled .She sat down near the edge of the bed and gently stroked his hair .Kesar suddenly opened his eyes and Gulaal withdrew her hands.She said softly, "Sorry tumhe jaga diya maine"

Kesar looked at her charming face .Though his mind was not at rest,but his heart had surrendered to her intoxicating smile and he tried to put up fascade that he was very sleepy and said snobbishly, "Haaan wo main thak gaya tha.Badi jaldi aa gayi tum"He taunted.

G: "Mujhe pata hai tu naraz hai na..main itni der se lauti",she said innocently.

K: Nahi main kyun naraz hounga ..waise bhi tum nahi thi to kitni shanty thi is ghar mein.",Kesar rebuked her.This was not a friendly rebuke.It was full of emotions as Kesar tried hard to avoid showing how terribly he missed her.

G: "Thik hai thik hai..jyada nahi bolungi .par please khana to kha le",Pleaded Gulaal

Kesar was surprised.It is never easy to fathom a woman's heart.

K:tumhe kaise pata ki maine khana nahi khaya..waise bhi jane do mujhe bhukh nahi hai"He replied in a complaining tone.

G:"Bas pata hai..chal ab nakhre band kar aur dining Table pe aa ja",Gulaal ordered him as she started taking out her earings and pearl necklace.

Kesar was not in the mood to give up so easily though his heart forced him to give up and follow her instructions.It was a battle of the heart and mind.His mind strugled hard and he said, "maine kaha na mujhe bhuk nahi hai"and he quickly pulled his blanket and closed his eyes .A prolonged silence followed .Only his heart beat raced quite audibly at night in anticipation of Gulaal's next step.Approximately 15 mins passed without any interruption.Kesar slowly opened his eyes .Gulaal was not there.He felt like killing himself for his stubborn behaviour as he had lost the opportunity of spending some time with her.He closed his eyes again and sighed when suddenly he felt Gulaal's touch on his shoulders.

G: chal uth main khana yahin le ayi..sorry baba ..chal ab to maan ja na please."

She stood there with a sad look in her eyes with a plate served wth Dinner.

Kesar was overwhelmed but still his mind made him rebel.

K: "Kyun mere piche padi ho ..jaao yahn se"

Gulaal was hurt as tears started rolling down her eyes and she started blabbering, "Tu humesha bas aise hi gussa hote rehna mujhse.Mujhe hi pata hai main kaise bhag k ayi us party se.Log mujhe jane hi nahi de rahe the aur phir ghar chhodne k liye Dushyant ko sabse last mein fursat mili ..main kya karti..tera mobile phone bhi nahi lag raha tha.par tujhe isse kya?tu bas humesha muh phula k baithe rehana"Gulaal started sobbing.

Kesar was taken aback .His heart melted as she sat near on the bed sobbing and fretting.

G: haan mujhse galti ho gayi ..sorry keh to rahi hun..par…"Gulaal's sentence was abruptly left incomplete as she could not speak any further .Kesar had stuffed her mouth with a huge meetha paan(sweet betel leaf) and said naughtily,"Bahut jyada bolti ho tum jab dekho chabar chabar"

Gulaal was shocked,surprised and ov erwhelmed as she looked at Kesar with a whole mix of emotions ranging from surprise to gratitude and then curiosity.

Kesar tried to fathom her feelings and said, "ab rona band karo nautanki .main khana kha rah hun."

Gulaal still looked at him with curiosity as she struggled to chew the huge paan .

K: "Ab aise kya tukur tukur dekh rahi ho .tun yahi soch rahi hogi ki mujhe kaise pata chala ki tumhe meetha paan pasand hai ?.Mujhe yaad tha humari shaadi ke din tum kitni upset thi ..ekdum devdas lag rahi thi.Itna tension bhara mahaul tha.tumhare gale se khana bhi nahi utar raha tha..Ye bade bade ansoo taapak rahe the par jaise hi meetha paan rakha gaya samne.tumne jhat se utha k kha liya.Phir maine socha ke itne dukh bhare mahaul mein bhi agar tumhe meetha paan khane ki yaad thi to iska matlab tumhe wakai wo cheez kitni pasand hogi.isliye le aya.Sach kya qayamat ka din tha wo.Kitna ro rahi thi tum ..puri nautanki aur paan ate hi sab kuch bhulkar gupp karne mein lag gayi thi."

Gulaal was speechless.Her eyes were filled with tears as she remembered the day of her marriage.Everytime she used to think of that doomed day,her eyes always welled up with tears and the face of Vasant flashed before her eyes,But for the first time she only recalled the moment described by Kesar.She could no longer see Vasant's face.She could only recall Kesar and his gloomy eyes.Strange she thought whenever any one talked about that Day , her mind became restless and the sordid marriage fiasco made her heart bleed and cry.Strange but today she could not feel any pain.The mention of that day had indeed brought tears in her eyes but these were tears of gratitude towards Kesar ,Gratitude for bringing a smile on her face everytime she lost all hope,for standing with her through thick and thin,for always trying to make her feel special,not only after their marriage but ever since she met him.Gulaal was clueless about how slowly and steadily Kesar had managed to wipe off all the painful memories and made her see the most horrible day in her life in a whole new light.Gulaal was lost in her thoughts as tears of sheer joy kept on rolling fromher eyes.

K: "Oh Miss Gulaal in wonderland..kahan kho gayi ..ab bhi ro rahi ho ..maine kaha na main khana kha raha hun .aj wo hotel mein lakhnawi cuisine tha .paan bhi tha.dekha to tumhari yaad aa gayi aur le aya..socha tumhe acha lagega par kisi ko fursat ho tab to"

Gulaal's trail of thoughts was broken by Kesar's sweet voice.She gently nodded her head and wiped off her tears.

G: "kuch nahi tu kha main paani lekar ati hun"Gulaal got up trying to mask her feelings.

Kesar had finished his dinner and Gulaal was still lost in her thoughts as she fumbled with the pages of a book she pretended to read to hide her anxiety.

Kesar sensed something was definitely wrong with her and he decided to talk to her and said, 'Gulaal"

Even before he could complete his statement Gulaal got up and switched on the TV and started flipping aimlessly through channels to avoid Kesar .

Suddenly she jumped with ecstacy and screamed.. "Oh Wow Football match..My My..kitne din ho gaye aise matches dekhe.'

Kesar was amused as he saw Gulaal bubbling with joy as if she was this young kid who just receivedhamper of chocolates and other goodies.

K: "Tumhe match dekhna pasand hai?

G:haan wo Papa humesha dekhte the ..to main bhi unke saath dekhne lagi thi.Mummy kitni naraz hoti thi .Hum dono unki ek bhi nahi sunte the aur late night world cup k matches mute karke dekhte the taki Mummy ko pata na chal jaye.,"Gulaal said enthusiastically as her eyes twinkled with joy.

Kesar was surprised as he thought that how impossible is to know what all a woman likes.He never thought a complete book worm like Gulaal could actually like football matches and used to watch them sneakingly with her Dad.

Kesar was elated to see her happy and cheerful face.

K: "Tumhe bahut yaad ati hogi na Gulaal apne gharwalon ki..specially your Papa"

Gulaal came out of her nostalgia and sighed and gently shook her head in approval as she really missed her family a lot specially her father who refused to talk to her after their marriage.

Gulaal still watched the game and Kesar was amused to see her anxiety and excitement simultaneously as someone missed a goal or scored it.

G: pata hai Kesar last world cup pe to Dushyant bhi tha humare saath.Hostel mein uska Tv bhi kharab ho gaya tha.Main papa aur Dushyant saath mein matches dekhte the.",Gulaal chirped

Kesar frowned at the mention of Dushyant's name.A sudden disappointment and rage engulfed him as he said rudely, "mujhe neend aa rahi hai..main sone ja rah hun"

G: par abhi to match baki hai

Kesar did not listen to her plea and pulled his blanket and went off to sleep in despair.

Gulaal looked at him and sulked as she switched off the Tv and lied down too.The disappointment on Kesar's cold reaction made her restless.She tried hard but she could not sleep.She was lost in her thoughts as she thought about all those little moments of joy they had together,all those intimacies,all those fights ,teasing and cuddlings.The warmth of his body during the camp night,the solace of his arms on the isolated highway,The heat of passion at Guchupani,the friendly chit chat in his adda ,the buransh juice,the garwali khana,the sour taste of imlis,the sweet juicy paan everything.The more she recalled those moments.the more lonely and restless she felt.Sleep overpowered both of them..

Kesar's room 9:30am

Kesar was startled by the noice of running water and washing of dishes coming from the Kitchen.He rubbed his eyes and saw that Gulaal was not in the bed.He quickly got up and ran towards the kitchen in anticipation of Seeing Gulaal .To hisDissapointment he saw Bindiya washing the dishes .Bindiya saw Kesar and smiled ,

Bin: Aap jag gaye bhaiya ji ?

Kesar was confused and asked, "Teri bhabhi kahan hai bindiya"

Bin: "Oh bhabhi to subah se hi bahar gayi hai..mujhse kah ki main aapko college k samay se pehle jaga dun..bhabhi nashta bhi bana gayi hai..aap ready ho jaiye main nashta laga deti hun"

Kesar slightly nodded his head and walked awy with disappointment..

He came near the dressing table in his room when suddenly his attention was drawn towards a small letter with his name mentioned on it..He opened it and started reading..

"Kesar,

Uth gaya tu..janti thi uthte hi sabse pehle mirror k paas akar apne baal sahi karega isliye yahin chithi rakhi.Tu itne pyar se so raha tha subah mujhe uthane ka man nahi kiya.Wo main market ja rahi hun ..Sab log dopahar tak aa jayenge.isliye sabzi aur phal lene ja rahi hun.Haan naha zarur lena aur college bunk karne ki sochna bhi mat ..main aaj ghar par hi rahungi.Tu nashta kar k chale jana.Aur haan tere kapde nikal diye hain aur pressbhi kar diye hain..

Ab khada khada muskurata hi rahega.kya.

ek baat kehna chati thi tujhe kal raat par tu itna ukhda ukhda hua tha ki..

Chal ab keh deti hun..kal main tere bina party mein bahut bore hui Kesar..Tujhe shayad meri yaad na aye..par maine tujhe bahut miss kiya Kesar..I really missed you..yun lagta hai teri adat si ho chuki hai mujhe

Aur haan ek baat aur..

Thanks for everything you've done for me..

Chal ab jyada bhaav mat khana ..jaldi ja ..aur haan naha kar hi jana college..warna..

-Gulaal"

Kesar couldn't stop smiling as he read the letter.His heart brimmed with joy and he cursed himself, "Tu bhi na Kesar gadha hi hai..Apne gusse mein apna hi nuksaan kar diya.Sahi kehti hai Gulaal gusse mein humesha nuksaan hi hota hai.Itna acha mauka ganwa diya tune apni faltu ki tashan k chakkar mein…Gulaal tum sirf meri ho..sirf meri…Tumse apne dil ki baat zarur kahunga main..par pehle us muchhad chowdhary ka intezaam kar lun"

Kesar thought with determination in his eyes.

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Posted: 14 years ago
piu..piu..what a beautiful chapter piu..🤗🤗🤗..just loved loved loved it..😳😳😳..n I don't know how many times I read this chapter...😆😆..bole tho..ek ek shabdh affective hai...👏👏👏😉...donno y I liked this chappie so much..😕I think..gullu's realization...is so beautifully portrayed piu..n kesu's narraz n jealousy n d hurt tho...so natural..😃😃.n agony from both sides...⭐️⭐️m loving it...😳😳..n what to say..I loved d sweet pan..awww..that's so sweet of him..😳..n d letter was just fab..d way she has written..d letter was so..so beautiful..😳😳n I guess u know my favorite part...kesu deciding to do some intezzam for d muchi man...😳😳😳n I lub u bhery bhery much...😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi everyone chappi updated.

I had a terribly busy day so this crap chappi..

pls bear

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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye Piu🤗...nayaa chappie toh ek dum super hai yaara😃
Angry kesuda😳...me like him a lot...good that he did not started a fight because of this...bacha love ke realisation se toh ek dum sudhargaya hai😉...hurt toh hua hai...toh false sleep...
LOved Loved this conflict of his mind and heart👏...arey dil ka sunna...biwi ithna pyaar se khana khane ke liye khehrahi hai...ithna bhaav kyun khatha hai...he is pretending that he doesnot missed her😳...oye usse toh patha hi hoga ke tu khana nahi khaaya hoga...ithna surprise hone ki kya zarooat thi...
haaye...bacha bhaav khara hai..aur biwi khana room mein laayi hai..ab toh khanaahi padega😉...
yeh gullu hamesha rothi kyun hai yaar😆...waise kesu koh raasthe mein laane kha achchi tharikha hai...loved the reasons she gave him of her being late😳...
Sweet paan...mujhe bhi chahiyee😭...loved how he stuffed the paan in her mouth...n then the conversation between them abt marriage...ohh loved it👏...
marriage ke bharemein sochkar gullu koh vassy yaad nahi aa raha hai...she is not sad abt remembering it...she is realising what kesar has done to her😍...
she is avoiding him to control her anxiety...loved the TV conversation😊...abt her parents (waise liked it more as even i see cricket matches with my father...even in my exams time we used to see and my mother used to scold me and my father...just you made me remember all those sweet memories😳)...but bheech mein dushy koh laane khi kya zaroorat thi😡...dekha bacha phir se gussa hogaya...
Gullu is restless😳..she is remembering all the time she shared with kesar...oye hoye me liking it...
Coming to letter part...brilliant...loved it...me all after reading it...she missed him😳...n she actually telling him that...ohh my goodness...

Kesar dekha agar gussa nahi hotha toh gulaal kal raat koh hi keh dethi na...magar tera gussa bhi na...Loved this Gulaal tum sirf meri ho..sirf meri…Tumse apne dil ki baat zarur kahunga main. Chalo achcha hai ke woh love confess karne ke liye ready toh hogaya...his determination to do some intezaam of muchchad dushy🤣...
Arre party toh bantha hai..iss chappie mein toh gullu darling toh kuch +ve sign dikha rahi hai🥳

Lovely chappie Piu🤗...me loved it...chal ab jaldi se next chappie update khar...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Thanx Minks..

I lubb you too🤗

I am on cloud nine now😳

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Originally posted by: JZephyr

Piu mhaari o pyaari,

kyun sukoon dil paaye na
taras gaye hain hum naa
update to laavo na

Jzee dear🤗

chappi updated

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Posted: 14 years ago

'Kesar threw away the coffee mug in despair and ran towards his room ,quickly jumped into his bed and pretended to sleep.He did not even open the door as Gulaal kept on ringing the door bell.' So cute :')


Thanks Piu!! Loved this chapterrr! =D
Cant wait for the next one (:

Edited by CertifiedBummer - 14 years ago

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