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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kreas


@Arti
Beautiful chappiii re...kya likha hai mindblowing...gullu n kesus chemistry awsome...!!!!
Luv u re...!!!!!❤️
Jaldi se next chappiii lao wait karne ka time nai hai...!!!!!!

thanks dear will update soon😳😳😳
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Originally posted by: alanta

👏 I doubt any word of appreciation would do justice.

Absolutely superb arti.

you really conveyed the whole message of the show in this chapter.

yup thanks dear...it should be justified..the blunt accusation that ppl put forward are abos**te crap need to incorporate in the FF thanks dear for liking
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nice chappi aarti re👏tu to hamari star hai⭐️aashirwaad do ur shargid touching ur ulte paav

After the engagment ceremony was over...diaba called gulaal...gulaal came and diaba introduced guruji from talsagra nayi entry wah wah wo bhi guruji😆first cupid

Diaba said gulaal" yeh humare guruji hain bahoot vidhvaan hain?.meine inhe talsagra se khaas tum sab logo k bulaya hai"specially hamare liye😆lol

Guruji said in between "achanak kuch nahi hota diaba sab kuch niyati pehle se hi tay (select) kar deti hai...samajh lijeye kesar aur gulaal ka milna niyati ne tay kar rakha hai...diaba gulaal aur kesar k bhgaya mein ek dusare ka saath likha hua hai"hein niyati ne likha hai, mai to samajh rahi thi aarti ne likha hai😲aarti sharam nahi aati kisi aur ka likha apne naam pe chapte hue😆...yeh niyati kaun hai pakkad kar lau ise😡

Gulaal didn't said a word she was just listened him

Diaba said "guruji kesar aur gulaal k kundli dekh lijeye"han han acche se dekho aur batao chii kab hone wala hai..original show mein chii karvau plz plz plz

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Guruji read kundli and said "kesar k jeevan mein safalta yash aur naam sab hai dil ka saaf hai...apne dil k baat ko saaf saaf kehna jaanta hai par saath mein zid aur gussa bhi hai"yup and we love him for that,koi aisa mantar karo ki gussa aur tantrum aur badh jaye😆..ban jayega sachi

He continued "jo kami kesar k ander hai us kami ko gulaal poora karti hai apki bahu kesar k liye bahoot bhagyashaali hai uske jeevan ko sahi disha dene waali and then he gave a tabeez to diaba and said yeh raksha kavach hai ise kesar ko pehna dijyega"lao mujhe de do mai pehna deti hun, bade pyaar se pehnaungi😆 u never leave the chance should i change the name of gulaal and write chaittu

Diaba asked in concern "raksha kavach kyu guruji kesar koi pareshaani hai kya"han han abhi uspe chii gang ki nazar padi hai kabhi bhi shirt utar sakti hai😆ye uski izzat bachane ke liye hai😆 banda thoda fat hai pehle ton up ho jaaye le phir shirtless hoga

Guruji remained silent an😉d said sukh dukh to chalta rehta hai aur grah apni disha badlete rehte hai bas aap ise taveez pehna dijyega aur chinta mat kijeye gulaal to hai hi..gulaal kesar k kavach hai jab tak kesar k saath uska kavach uske saath hai."aur chii hone ki umeed bhi zinda hai😆..kya pata even i finish it with shaadi paralled to show

Guruji said "thek hai yeh lo aur uske gale mein yeh saat bar baandh (seven knot) dena"saat bar😲hein😲aarti ye tabeez hai ya fansi ka phanda, saat bar bandne ke baad banda saans kaise lega😆phir to mouth to mouth dena padega na😉😆 doctor hai body heat bhi de sakti hai bole to bhej du kashmir😳

She quietly move towards him she sat on the floor near kesar' bed and put her hands around his neck and started tying the tabeez in his neck...wow imagine karke hi mai toEmbarrassed...me nahi😆

Kesar felt her touch and he opened his eyes and saw her infront of him...his heart skip the beat for a sec.he couldnt believe himself gulaal sitting beside him with her around her neck...gulaal looked at him... her heartbeat accerated too in candence of the his heartbeat...he looked at her and she was trapped in his brown passionate eyes he stood up and sat his bed...after a pause gulaal continued to tie the tabeez without looking into his eyes...he tilted his head and noticed and understood the purpose of her to come...he broke the silence and said "yeh kyu badh rahi ho meine kaha naa mujhe is par bilkul yakeen nahi hai"tera yakeen gaya bhad mein, humko acche scenes mil rahe hai na to chup chap pada reh bed pe😆 thanks god meine heroine gulaal ko hi rakha nahi to chaitu hoti to bacha would get a jhapad again

Gulaal said while tying "guruji bas ashirwaad de rahe the problem kya hai isme"

Kesar said "hai...mujhe problem hai mujhe yeh sab acha nahi lagta"kyun bhai tabeez hi to hai, kutte ka patta thodei jo itni chid machi hui hai😆...hain yaar itni allergy to doggy belt se bhi nahi hogi but tantrumy bacha what to do

But gulaal didn't listened

Kesar said "tumhe kya lagta hai tum ise baadhogi aur mein ise nahi nikalunga"han ji humein pata hai agar wo tabeez ki jagah gale pe snake bhi lipta deti to bhi tu nahi nikalta😆 omg i seriously can imagine putting the snake around him

Gulaal looked at him and innocently said "nahi"

Kesar didn't said he remained silent for a sec and then shy due to the physical proximity said "to kya yeh kaala dhaga aur yeh tabeez mujhe bachyega"...to lighten the situation waise to 100 army tanks bhi tujhe hamari paapi nazron se nahi bacha sakti par try karne mein kya harz hai😆..kuch nahi hoga bacha u have no rescue

gulaal while tying the final knot said "is dhage k saath meine apna vishwaas astha aur 'pyaar' bandha hai...devimaa iski raksha jarur karegi"chal bhag ,aisa kuch nahi hai😆 yeah

and then gulaal pasued unknowingly she had said the word "love" now she was shy...it was unintentional on her part...she withdrew her eyes quickly and there was a burning flash on her cheeks aye haye gullu is the new tamatarmukhi hamari tarah..nayalak show mein kyu nahi hoti

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for kesar the sound of this word was as soothing as the morning bells of the temple...as splendid as the beautiful ocean..as scared as the dewdrop on the rosepetal.. he looked at her and his eyes were filled with the deep tender love...he just looked at the her face that was as tender and shy as the first dawnlight wow aarti kya imagination hai, kya perception hai👏 thanku😉

gulaal stood in the arrested silence and then said hesistantly "mera matlab hai k tum parivar k sadyasa ho...isliye...tum...ek family member ho isliye mein..concerned thi"hein😕family member to raman bhi hai to jao uske gale mein tabeez bandho aur bolo mera pyaar bandh rahi hun😆 bahana nahi chalega madam😳

she strained every effort of her mind what should be said...but still his eyes rest on her full of love...probably they spoke to her.do u need to give explaination...y there was a need of clarification...cant u just stop being reasonable...omg ☺️ati utaam👏

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gulaal then quickly turned herself and was about to leave the room

kesar called her from back in the soft voice "gulaal"

gulaal turned back...kesar came near and said "gulaal tumne humara parivaar k liye...mere liye bahoot kuch kiya hai...par meine anjaane mein tumhare saath bahoot galat kiya hai.tumhare life mein shayyad jo toofan aaya hai woo meri wajah se aaya hai...kya tum kabhi mujhe maaf kar paaugi"nahi nahi maaf nahi kar sakti, mai to yunhi tere pyaar mein laal peeli ho rahi hun😆...he he he kabhi nahi

and gulaal looked at him he was aplogising her..but she wasn't sure why he was apologising? for bringing dreams to her life? For bringing her from the darkness to light? for kindling her heart with his heart;his soul?kya dhinchak likhti ho aarti baby👏

May be he apologised for filling her life with his color...filling the emptiness in her with his name...or probably fillling the sindoor that day without her consent...yes gulaal was unhapy she was angry at him she had promised panba never to accept this relationship...she had vowed never to accept him and but he took more love and passion from her than she could give to any person in her life...yes he should apologize...y did he engraved his name in her heart against her will...y did he step in her dreams without her consent...y he is slowly tying her in the unbreakable bond without her deisre...y he is making her helplessly fall for him..yes he should apologize for it yes yes he should and should hug each other in acceptance of each others apology😆 ya

Her eyes sparkled with tears she wanted to speak...but she remained silent and brushed her tears and said "so jao kesar raat bahoot ho gayi hai"

And she silently left the room

Next day kesar was in his office after his work he went to gulaal's hospital to pick her up...gulaal and kesar were in car they were on their way...kesar received talli's phone she asked him to pick her up from her office and talli also joined them...kesar and gulaal were sitting quitely talli interrupted kesar "bahoot bhuk lagi hai chalo kanhi khana khata hain..."

Kesar said ghar chal kar kha lena

Talli said nahi mujhe bahoot bhuk lagi hai abhi chalo

Kesar looked at said "bhukkad just sprinkle salt and pepper on u and eat urself"naho to if pe aaja hum aise hi kha jaenge tujhkoAngry...get lost talli we hate u

Gulaal looked at the menu card and she remebered something and said to waiter"how about Chilaquiles verdes con pollo, crepes and falafel"

Waiter looked at her in bewilderment and then looked at kesar...who was looking at amusement...these were same dishes he demanded in gulaal's rasoi rasm...he smiled aww kitna cute scene hai, bravo aarti👏 thanks dear

Waiter said "madam yeh to menu card mein nahi hai"

Gulaal looked at kesar and mischievously said "never mind"LOL😆

Gulaal and kesar shared a secret smile and then kesar ordered gulaal's favourite food...gulaal and kesar were looking naughtily at each other talli was present there but she was completely alienated pls send her back to her alien family Angry sure will do that

While kesar gulaal and talli was having a good time

Some of kesar's college mates were sitting in the next table.tiya was also sitting with them.with her new boyfriend "rocky"...kesar and the group didn't share good vibes.As the group was jealous of kesar's popularity e lo ji chiichore bhi aagaye, wah aarti kya masaledar chappi layi hai😆 yaa

Tiya looked at kesar and gulaal and out of jealousy said" wo dekho kya couple beitha hua hai.Meri mom ne bataya ek devar ne apni hi bhabhi se shaadi karli mujhe to sochte hue bhi sharam aa rahi hai"aacha jab khud kesar se lipta chipti karti thi tab sharam vacation pe tha kyaAngry

The clads still made their fun "kyu bhaag rahe ho sharam aa rahi hai aise rishte par...aarey aani hi chahiye so disgusting aur yeh doctor gulaal...ek doctor hote hue bhi aisi harqat aisi kya jarurat pad gayi thi k apne devar se hi shaadi kar li"nahi to kya tujhse karti Angry

Kesar felt a surge of anger...he ran to them and smashed them and beat the crap out of them...he was brutual wild and savage...he kept saying" how dare u gulaal k bare mein bolne k himmat kaise hue"yaeyi yaeyi aa gaya hamara ghussail kesu, oh i love himEmbarrassed

Vicky pulled kesar and said "bas kar kesar maar dega kya"...gulaal and talli also came running and hold kesar talli kyun hol bhaiAngry

Rocky shouted "inhone galat kaam kiya.hume to kehte hue bhi sharam aati hai"

Vicky said acha...tum log ko tab sharam nahi aati jab child marriage kar di jaati hai...tab nahi aati jab ek 16 saal k ladki shaadi 50 saal k bhudhe se kar di jaati hai tab sharam nahi aati jab aurat par samaj naa jaane kitne zulm karta hai par tab sharam aati hai jab ek ladka ek vidhwaa ko aage badh kar sweekarta hai tell me rocky kya tum kabhi aisa kaam kar pauge..kya tum kabhi ek widow phir se jeena seekhauge..nahi par jo aisa kar raha hai us par sharam aati hai"

Tiya said "par wo devar aur bhabhi the kam se kam is rishte k to maan rakhna chahiye tha"

Vicky replied "acha par shayyad tum bhul rahi ho yeh rishta unhe samja ne diya hai.is rishte mein unhe samaj ne bandha hai ...devar aur bhabhi k shaadi humare samaj mein sweekar kiya jaata hai.to phir tum logo ko kya problem hai...tum logo se jyada educated to talsagra k log hain jinhe pata hai ek vidhwaa ko dubara jeevan jeene ka mauka kam hi milta hai..Unke bacho ko dusara parivaar badi mushkil se accept karta hai..Isliye unhe aur unke bacho ko behtaar suruksha mile isliye unke parivaar ka koi member unka haath tham leta hai"

Rocky said "par gulaal kesar se umar mein badhi hai"

Vicky said "aur agar yahi baat ulti hoti agar kesar 25 saal ka hota aur gulaal 20 saal ki..Tu tumhe yeh couple weird nahi lagta...blissful lagta haina...agar aisa hai to mujhe sharam aati hai k mein aise hypocrite logo ko janata hun"

And the boys hung their head in shame

wah wah kya social awareness wala chappi hai👏but i really appreciate this kind of writing , sab kuch sahi likha hai👏

Kesar said angrily "Vicky un logo se kah dena agar woo gulaal k aas pass bhi nazar aa gaye to jaan se maar dunga...I will kill them"nahi nahi😕jail chala gaya to hamare armanon ka kya hoga😆 armaan nahi sid bol😳😳😳😳

And he ended the call

Gulaal entered kesar's room and kesar was still angry uff phir se suspense 😭 yup

very wonderful chapii dear and waiting for your next update, jaldi lana han😃


thanks mere ff ka kitna pyaar bhara kachara kiya 😳😳...i love loved loved itClap ...the snake and dogi belt is superhilarious...now i need a superlike button.CryCryCry.thanks dear me all rofling😆
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Vicky said acha...tum log ko tab sharam nahi aati jab child marriage kar di jaati hai...tab nahi aati jab ek 16 saal k ladki shaadi 50 saal k bhudhe se kar di jaati hai tab sharam nahi aati jab aurat par samaj naa jaane kitne zulm karta hai par tab sharam aati hai jab ek ladka ek vidhwaa ko aage badh kar sweekarta hai tell me rocky kya tum kabhi aisa kaam kar pauge..kya tum kabhi ek widow phir se jeena seekhauge..nahi par jo aisa kar raha hai us par sharam aati hai"

Tiya said "par wo devar aur bhabhi the kam se kam is rishte k to maan rakhna chahiye tha"

Vicky replied "acha par shayyad tum bhul rahi ho yeh rishta unhe samja ne diya hai.is rishte mein unhe samaj ne bandha hai ...devar aur bhabhi k shaadi humare samaj mein sweekar kiya jaata hai.to phir tum logo ko kya problem hai...tum logo se jyada educated to talsagra k log hain jinhe pata hai ek vidhwaa ko dubara jeevan jeene ka mauka kam hi milta hai..Unke bacho ko dusara parivaar badi mushkil se accept karta hai..Isliye unhe aur unke bacho ko behtaar suruksha mile isliye unke parivaar ka koi member unka haath tham leta hai"


arti meri arti 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 fantastic 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


n yar first of all tell me, har vamp k bf ka naam rocky kyun hota hai 😆?? n yeh falafel k sath jo dishes hen na mujhe bhi khaani hen, tell gullu n kesu to bring them to me 😆 n fantastic arti, yar u r superb 👏 have these lots of hufs from me 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 i just love this chappi, keep writing yar, girl u r amazing 👏

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Originally posted by: arti07

nice chappi aarti re👏tu to hamari star hai⭐️aashirwaad do ur shargid touching ur ulte paav

After the engagment ceremony was over...diaba called gulaal...gulaal came and diaba introduced guruji from talsagra nayi entry wah wah wo bhi guruji😆first cupid oye second bhi ayega/ ayegi 😲 😃


Gulaal didn't said a word she was just listened him

Diaba said "guruji kesar aur gulaal k kundli dekh lijeye"han han acche se dekho aur batao chii kab hone wala hai..original show mein chii karvau plz plz plz🤣

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Guruji remained silent an😉d said sukh dukh to chalta rehta hai aur grah apni disha badlete rehte hai bas aap ise taveez pehna dijyega aur chinta mat kijeye gulaal to hai hi..gulaal kesar k kavach hai jab tak kesar k saath uska kavach uske saath hai."aur chii hone ki umeed bhi zinda hai😆..kya pata even i finish it with shaadi paralled to show arti tujhe chi demanding gang boxes bhar bhar k mojri maare ga 😆

Guruji said "thek hai yeh lo aur uske gale mein yeh saat bar baandh (seven knot) dena"saat bar😲hein😲aarti ye tabeez hai ya fansi ka phanda, saat bar bandne ke baad banda saans kaise lega😆phir to mouth to mouth dena padega na😉😆 doctor hai body heat bhi de sakti hai bole to bhej du kashmir😳

hahahahahaha 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

n yar dogy belt 😆 kesudi belt pehni hai us ne wo kaafi nahi hai kya 😆

But gulaal didn't listened

Kesar said "tumhe kya lagta hai tum ise baadhogi aur mein ise nahi nikalunga"han ji humein pata hai agar wo tabeez ki jagah gale pe snake bhi lipta deti to bhi tu nahi nikalta😆 omg i seriously can imagine putting the snake around him n now i can imagine the main nagin tu sapera dance Snake😆



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ye tune kya kar diyaa arti

u have made me an addict to ur FF...
the moment i see the chappi updated mera dil bekhaabu ho jaata hai😆
i just want to read it asap...

btw very very nice chappi
awww i loved how she went to tie that taveeez and the lines she spoke was so sweet

loved ur taunt for the 50 yr old man marrying 16 yr old gal..hyprocrite society must say😕

and yea we had dishum dishum also..
i felt as if i was beating those guys
ab jaldi jadli de do naya chappi
chalo chalo chalo



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Kya dhamakedaar chapter tha! Romantic moments: Kesar looking at Gulaal with luv filled...ohhh...I am in dreamland. Vicky's dialogues were suuperrb- just hit the nail on its head-50yrs man marrying 16 yr grl is accepted but if the girl is older den zameen phhat jaati hai-double standard mindset! Kesar beating the crap out of everyone- ohhh I just luv wild Kesuda- I remember wen he blocked Gullu's path and said, "Mujhe bina matlab ka thappad khaana pasand nhi, apologise and go"- arey kitna change ho gya hai- I miss the bratty Kesuda!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

sachi mujhe laga phir katti hogi no hugs only gyaans and bhasans😉


Sachii...muchiii...😳n tujhe katti kyun chahiye...tu usse bhi pyaar karne lagi na..😆..Bahavana,hukka pani,CHII now..katti..wow...😳

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