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Posted: 14 years ago
Aarti...meri pyaari aarti...😳 kitna intezar kiya...
Kisne bola yeh chappi boring hai...uss gopi11 ko tu itni acchi chappi kyun dedicate kar rahi hai...
superb yaar...that tabeez tying part pe kesar ka hi nahi...mera bhi heart beat skip ho gaya...u've written it so well dear...
anjaane mein hue confession ke liye main tere liye bhajiya night organise karungi...too good yaar..😳
N last part..our angry young man...😳
Cant wait for the next chappi yaar...jaldi laana..ek aur confrontation...😳
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@Arti
I will be back after sometimes n then comment okies...!!!!
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Originally posted by: arti07

Chapter 27


Guruji said in between "achanak kuch nahi hota diaba sab kuch niyati pehle se hi tay (select) kar deti hai...samajh lijeye kesar aur gulaal ka milna niyati ne tay kar rakha hai...diaba gulaal aur kesar k bhgaya mein ek dusare ka saath likha hua hai"

Ye to kismat connection...nilkla re...Yipeee destiny...OMg..there is a saying in bengali..Jonmmo mrityu biye...Teenvidhata niye..that means..birth,death and marriage are in the hands of the three gods...Brahma,vishnu ,mahesh....


Guruji read kundli and said "kesar k jeevan mein safalta yash aur naam sab hai dil ka saaf hai...apne dil k baat ko saaf saaf kehna jaanta hai par saath mein zid aur gussa bhi hai"

He continued "jo kami kesar k ander hai us kami ko gulaal poora karti hai apki bahu kesar k liye bahoot bhagyashaali hai uske jeevan ko sahi disha dene waali and then he gave a tabeez to diaba and said yeh raksha kavach hai ise kesar ko pehna dijyega"

Oye hoye..arti..you introduced a new angle..kesu ko bole to koi khatara hai kya😕Ooo ye ek dusre k purak hain..so true incomplete without each other😳


Guruji remained silent and said sukh dukh to chalta rehta hai aur grah apni disha badlete rehte hai bas aap ise taveez pehna dijyega aur chinta mat kijeye gulaal to hai hi..gulaal kesar k kavach hai jab tak kesar k saath uska kavach uske saath hai."

OOOho ..to ye baat hai...Ye sati savitri nikli..satyawaan pe koi aanch nahi aane degi...Angels and fairies..wud lubb it..but its a secret..me too lubbed it😳


She quietly move towards him she sat on the floor near kesar' bed and put her hands around his neck and started tying the tabeez in his neck...

Kesar felt her touch and he opened his eyes and saw her infront of him...his heart skip the beat for a sec.he couldnt believe himself gulaal sitting beside him with her around her neck...gulaal looked at him... her heartbeat accerated tooin candence of the his heartbeat...he looked at her and she was trapped in his brown passionate eyes he stoodup and sathis bed...after a pause gulaal continued to tie the tabeez without looking into his eyes...he tilted his head and noticed and understood the purpose of her to come...he broke the silence and said "yeh kyu badh rahi ho meine kaha naa mujhe is par bilkul yakeen nahi hai"

Hain angels and fairies bhag jayengi arti...Wickedians will drool...oops.heart beat to badhni hi thi...Dhadkanein tez ho jane do...pyaar mein hosh kho jaane do


Kesar didn't said he remained silent for a sec and then shy due to the physical proximity said"to kya yeh kaala dhaga aur yeh tabeez mujhe bachyega"...to lighten the situation

gulaal while tying the final knot said "is dhage k saath meine apna vishwaas astha aur 'pyaar' bandha hai...devimaa iski raksha jarur karegi"

Yeh kya keh diya gullu..ne pyaar ..almost confession...Yeah kesu ki balle balle..Oh tune Gullu ko holier than thou nahi banaya..lubb you


and then gulaal pasued unknowingly she had said the word "love" now she was shy...it was unintentional on her part...she withdrew her eyes quickly and there was a burning flash on her cheeks

for kesar the sound of this word was as soothing as the morning bells of the temple...as splendid as the beautiful ocean..as scared as the dewdrop on the rosepetal.. he looked at her and his eyes were filled with the deep tender love...he just looked at the her face that was as tender and shy as the first dawnlight

Lubbed ..simply superb..beautifully described..⭐️.

gulaal stood in the arrested silence and then said hesistantly "mera matlab hai k tum parivar k sadyasa ho...isliye...tum...ek family member ho isliye mein..concerned thi"

Hain hain..ab kya fayda..jo kehna tha wo to keh hi diya na😉


gulaal turned back...kesar came near and said "gulaal tumne humara parivaar k liye...mere liye bahoot kuch kiya hai...par meine anjaane mein tumhare saath bahoot galat kiya hai.tumhare life mein shayyad jo toofan aaya hai woo meri wajah se aaya hai...kya tum kabhi mujhe maaf kar paaugi"

and gulaal looked at him he was aplogising her..but she wasn't sure why he was apologising? for bringing dreams to her life? For bringing her from the darkness to light? for kindling her heart with his heart;his soul?

May be he apologised for filling her life with his color...filling the emptiness in her with his name...or probably fillling the sindoor that day without her consent...yes gulaal was unhapy she was angry at him she had promised panba never to accept this relationship...she had vowed never to accept him and but he took more love and passion from her than she could give to any person in her life...yes he should apologize...y did he engraved his name in her heart against her will...y did he step in her dreams without her consent...y he is slowly tying her in the unbreakable bond without her deisre...y he is making her helplessly fall for him..yes he should apologize for it

Her eyes sparkled with tears she wanted to speak...but she remained silent and brushed her tears and said "so jao kesar raat bahoot ho gayi hai"

Just simply superb..scene I hate PB gullu ko stupid si kasam de di...warna..aaj kesu ka bhi confession pakka tha..OOO arti..we now want kesuda..madness..plllzzz.ye to kuch sweet nikla😆


Talli said nahi mujhe bahoot bhuk lagi hai abhi chalo

Kesar looked at said "bhukkad just sprinkle salt and pepper on u and eat urself"

Elo ji tujhe terrorist ko bhi lana tha..bhukkkad ko hamesha bhuk lagti hai...OMG kesu reply was super like...Bole to Talli..ki tain tain phish

Gulaal looked at the menu card and she remebered something and said to waiter"how about Chilaquiles verdes con pollo, crepes and falafel"

Hain bole to she actually remembered..I like

Gulaal and kesar shared a secret smile and then kesar ordered gulaal's favourite food...gulaal and kesar were looking naughtily at each other talli was present there but she was completely alienated

Bahut hi acha kiya tune..Lub you arti


Kesar felt a surge of anger...he ran to them and smashed them and beat the crap out of them...he was brutual wild and savage...he kept saying" how dare u gulaal k bare mein bolne k himmat kaise hue"

OOO hamara angry young man wapas aa gay...


Vicky pulled kesar and said "bas kar kesar maar dega kya"...gulaal and talli also came running and hold kesar

Vicky said "gulaal bhabhi aap sambhaliye kesar ko aur usko ghar le jaaiye"


Then he turned to rocky and his friend and said angrily" yeh kya kar rahe the tum log?kya jarurat hai kesar aur bhabhi k bare mein aisi ghatia baat karni k"

Rocky shouted "inhone galat kaam kiya.hume to kehte hue bhi sharam aati hai"

Vicky said acha...tum log ko tab sharam nahi aati jab child marriage kar di jaati hai...tab nahi aati jab ek 16 saal k ladki shaadi 50 saal k bhudhe se kar di jaati hai tab sharam nahi aati jab aurat par samaj naa jaane kitne zulm karta hai par tab sharam aati hai jab ek ladka ek vidhwaa ko aage badh kar sweekarta hai tell me rocky kya tum kabhi aisa kaam kar pauge..kya tum kabhi ek widow phir se jeena seekhauge..nahi par jo aisa kar raha hai us par sharam aati hai"

Tiya said "par wo devar aur bhabhi the kam se kam is rishte k to maan rakhna chahiye tha"

Vicky replied "acha par shayyad tum bhul rahi ho yeh rishta unhe samja ne diya hai.is rishte mein unhe samaj ne bandha hai ...devar aur bhabhi k shaadi humare samaj mein sweekar kiya jaata hai.to phir tum logo ko kya problem hai...tum logo se jyada educated to talsagra k log hain jinhe pata hai ek vidhwaa ko dubara jeevan jeene ka mauka kam hi milta hai..Unke bacho ko dusara parivaar badi mushkil se accept karta hai..Isliye unhe aur unke bacho ko behtaar suruksha mile isliye unke parivaar ka koi member unka haath tham leta hai"

Rocky said "par gulaal kesar se umar mein badhi hai"

Vicky said "aur agar yahi baat ulti hoti agar kesar 25 saal ka hota aur gulaal 20 saal ki..Tu tumhe yeh couple weird nahi lagta...blissful lagta haina...agar aisa hai to mujhe sharam aati hai k mein aise hypocrite logo ko janata hun"

And the boys hung their head in shame

Kesar was in his room he was boiling in anger he received Vicky's call

Vicky asked him "tum thek hona"

Kesar said angrily "Vicky un logo se kah dena agar woo gulaal k aas pass bhi nazar aa gaye to jaan se maar dunga...I will kill them"

And he ended the call

Gulaal entered kesar's room and kesar was still angry

Oye ye Vicky to hero nikla😲..Talli k liya rakha hai kya.😛..Are bacha is so angry na😆...Age kya hoga.😃..Arti just lubbed the confession👏..of gullu bole to ekdum arti ishtyle⭐️...Lubbed it..👏.O meri chotu govinda cum yash chopra..chappi next jaldi lana cant wait🤗


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Originally posted by: vinolya

Thanks for the new chapter Aarti..😊

pleasure all mine😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

@Arti
Beautiful chappiii re...kya likha hai mindblowing...gullu n kesus chemistry awsome...!!!!
Luv u re...!!!!!❤️
Jaldi se next chappiii lao wait karne ka time nai hai...!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: Keithuu

Aarti...meri pyaari aarti...😳 kitna intezar kiya...
Kisne bola yeh chappi boring hai...uss gopi11 ko tu itni acchi chappi kyun dedicate kar rahi hai...
superb yaar...that tabeez tying part pe kesar ka hi nahi...mera bhi heart beat skip ho gaya...u've written it so well dear...
anjaane mein hue confession ke liye main tere liye bhajiya night organise karungi...too good yaar..😳
N last part..our angry young man...😳
Cant wait for the next chappi yaar...jaldi laana..ek aur confrontation...😳

yeh i want bhajiya night ...u know i made some chilli pakoda today just remebered u...and angels and fairies ko reason dena jaruri hain incase someone invade it and do chii chii hereEmbarrassed
the confession was my wish of gullu's confession...usne stone heart se kiya tha..i just gave little emotions to herEmbarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice chapter Arti...Loved it...😊
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Originally posted by: chweetu

Loved loved loved d chappie...Arthiii...❤️😳

sachi mujhe laga phir katti hogi no hugs only gyaans and bhasans😉
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Originally posted by: arti07


Vicky said acha...tum log ko tab sharam nahi aati jab child marriage kar di jaati hai...tab nahi aati jab ek 16 saal k ladki shaadi 50 saal k bhudhe se kar di jaati hai tab sharam nahi aati jab aurat par samaj naa jaane kitne zulm karta hai par tab sharam aati hai jab ek ladka ek vidhwaa ko aage badh kar sweekarta hai tell me rocky kya tum kabhi aisa kaam kar pauge..kya tum kabhi ek widow phir se jeena seekhauge..nahi par jo aisa kar raha hai us par sharam aati hai"

Tiya said "par wo devar aur bhabhi the kam se kam is rishte k to maan rakhna chahiye tha"

Vicky replied "acha par shayyad tum bhul rahi ho yeh rishta unhe samja ne diya hai.is rishte mein unhe samaj ne bandha hai ...devar aur bhabhi k shaadi humare samaj mein sweekar kiya jaata hai.to phir tum logo ko kya problem hai...tum logo se jyada educated to talsagra k log hain jinhe pata hai ek vidhwaa ko dubara jeevan jeene ka mauka kam hi milta hai..Unke bacho ko dusara parivaar badi mushkil se accept karta hai..Isliye unhe aur unke bacho ko behtaar suruksha mile isliye unke parivaar ka koi member unka haath tham leta hai"

Rocky said "par gulaal kesar se umar mein badhi hai"

Vicky said "aur agar yahi baat ulti hoti agar kesar 25 saal ka hota aur gulaal 20 saal ki..Tu tumhe yeh couple weird nahi lagta...blissful lagta haina...agar aisa hai to mujhe sharam aati hai k mein aise hypocrite logo ko janata hun"

And the boys hung their head in shame

👏 I doubt any word of appreciation would do justice.

Absolutely superb arti.

you really conveyed the whole message of the show in this chapter.

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