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krea

@krea

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#821

@Arti
Beautiful Chappiii...!!!
I luved it very much...!!!!
But my fav.. Part is the discription of gulaals beauty in terms of colours...!!!Very beautifully written...!!!!!Luvly...!!!!
Keep writing...!!!!!
Luv u Arti...!!!!❤️
Now i will wait for next chappiii...!!!!

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

@Bioinfo_Chaitu

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#822

dearest aarti--------

piyu ne kar diya hai main serial ko bye bye,

tera ff padhe bina usse chain kahan aayee,

kyun tu pyaari piyu ke dil ko hai jalati,

ye to bata itna pakne ke baad bhi tu chappi 18 kyun nahi laati🥱

bhag piyu bhag le dekh dusre forum members jutte chappal le kar aa rahe hai...😲 😲

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Keithuu

@Keithuu

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#823

Aartii...gr8 chappie yaar...
Ur kesu serial waale kesu se kitna iishmart hai yaar...
kaash the real kesu..aise long stares karta...woh gullu ko dekhke dar jaata hai aajkal...
lekin yeh banda sahi track pe jaa raha hai...iski buddhi clear karne keliye thanx aarti...
kitne beautiful scenes the aaj ke chappie mein...thanx yaar...😊

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Geeshu

@Geeshu

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#824

Wow Arti ...can't wait for ur next chappi...😳

Love u yaar...🤗

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#825

arti arti arti 👏... lag ja galay k phir yahan wohi baaat ho na hooo, shayad phir is forum men wahi din raat hon na hon ... 🤗

wah wah wah arti kya baat hai...

arti laayi hai kya chapter pyaara,

gulaal k rang men rang diya forum yun saara,

kesu to mar mitta us pe bechara 😆

soche ga zaroor kyun raha main ab tak kanwara 😉

arti ko mile dhair saara pyaar hamara,

ab jaldi se likh de chapter number athaara

wow wow wow wow wow wow wow arti, tum men to saare rang hain, tumhara naam gulaal hi ho sakta hai, wah yaar superb, i love u arti, its another superb chapter yar, oye hoye what a kiteflying n staring n sardi n ice cream aha aha aha arti te vadi romantic si 😍 hahaha yar love u so much, i dont have words to express that how beautifully u have written this... 🤗

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EXOL

@EXOL

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#826

OMG..arti chapter 17 was breathtakingly beautiful..i wish it never ended...it just touched my heart and all along the chapter i was smiling...omg how i wish CV''s stole thischapter of urs...dont scold me now 😆...am in love with ur FF...the description of all the colors..wow..it was just wow...ab kesuda ko pata lagega 24 hr kisi ke baare mai kaise socha jata hai

and yea the beginning where gulaal stood still and thought " kisi nadi ke kismat mai sahil se milna nahi hota " OMG I bow to you for those lines...

and u inclded my fav guitar and swimming pool scnene..not to forget the duppatta line...haye

i cant wait for the next chapter..jaldi likh na arti😳

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#827

Chaitu😃 humari pyari subah ki sunehri kiran ne bhi hamare shayari competition klo join kiya hai👏...Thank you Kiran.😳*BTW hamari to pakao hai..par Kiran ki shayari sach mein achi hai*..is Arti ka dimag khane ki kasam li hai humne..tu bhi aja.Kiran🤗...

Acha to arz kiya hai😉

Arti..chaitu ,kiran aur mujhse bachkar kahan jaogi

Jahan jaogi humein age peeche hi paogi

agar chahti ho hum aur humari stupid shayari...ho jaye nau do gyarah😉

Jaldi se le aao chapter number atharah🤢

Chal Kiran,chaitu..shuru ho jao..ab phir se tumhari baari...*runs and ducks*🥳