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"Mere colour, unspoiled by meaning, and unallied with definite form, can speak to the soul in a thousand different ways" Oscar Wilde
chapter 1 ...page 1
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Posted: 14 years ago
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character sketch
Rahil Azam
Vasant Modi -28 years
he is rich sauve sphisticated kind hearted man...he owns Modi Pharmaceutical Pvt Ltd company in mumbai ...which is amoung top 10 company in india .he is millionaire but a simple and ordinary man he dotes his family
he is a trustee of modi hospital
Manasi Parkeh
Gulaal Banarjee - 25 years
A doctor by profession she is sweet innoncent intellegent girl next door kind of woman she live with her two friends in a rented apartment ...her family is in pune ...she is lively girl and in relationship with vasant since one and a half year
Neil Bhatt
kesar Modi- 20 years
he is a charmer he is stud hearthrob and spoiled brat he is a august child and a youngest family member he is 2 year B pharma student he loves dancng singing driving he has grlfrn but never been in love and is a happy go lucky guy
Sushant Singh
Dr dushyant singh 29 years
he is sophisticated doctor in modi hospital he is senior to dr gulaal banerjee and secrelty loves her
Aditi Tailang
Rewa Modi - 22 year
she is younger sister of vasant modi and in love with yogesh a scientist and researcher in Modi pharamaceuticals
other characters
panba -----widow and eldest member in modi family she is little orthodox and traditional woman ...loves her children deeply
ramanbha--- he is cousin of vasnatbha and after his parent deadth is raised by panba he is a good human being he is writer by profession
sudha bhabhi ---she is wife of ramanbha she is loud selfish and greedy woman she has her bad eye on modi's property
talli- sweet innocent sudhabhabhi's niece and childhood friend of kesar sudhabhabhi wants kesar to get married to her as soon as possible
diaba-grandmother of vasant and sarpanch of talsagra village she resides at talsagra with jamuna kaki and gigaka and occassionally pays visit to mumbai
poonam banerjee and revaji - gulaal's parent and live in pune
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh a fellow Wilde fan - that's one of my favorite quotes by him, is it ironic I have it up on my quote wall in my room?

Will look forward to your posts Arti (:

xx
JZee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ARTI BARTY IS HERE!!! THAT TOO WITH A BANG!!!😃

eh, noone can throw weird tomatoes and mojris on me okay! i never gave u the idea for FF!!!
and wickedeans can't be beauties!!! we're drop dead gorgeous people (plus JZee) 😳
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Chapter I

Today is the festival of joy today is the festival of color... Today is "holi" gulaal was sitting on her apartment balcony ...watching kids in the street playing colors ?.she was nostalgic she remembered her childhood how enthusiaclly she use to celebrate this festival after all it was not only a festival for her it was the day wen she was welcomed in this world and her proud dad called her gulaal?..she was remembering her childhood memories and suddenly phone rang she came out of her thoughts she picked up and person on the other end said " doctor gulaal u r needed immediately...pateint in ward no 42 is critical."

Gulaal said call " Dr dushyant and Sister Jenny I m reaching there in 20 minutes "

And she picks up her keys and rushes to the door suddenly mirya her room partner asks " where are u going in haste "

Gulaal " hospital I need to go its an emergency

Mirya " par aaj to holi hai bahar bheed hai log rang denge tumhe

Gulaal " don't worry I will manage

Gulaal was heading to the hospital suddenly she saw a small group of young boys and girls playing colors and dancing on the tune of drums in the middle of the road she blew horn continuously but it didn't helped?.gulaal was getting late and so she came out of the car ...she asked some of them to make way and let her go but no one was listened the group was busy dancing on the drum beats ...she tried to get away ...but then someone put color on her white kurta was all coloured she was highly disgusted ..and in anger she pulled the person who put color ... the boy turn around he face was coloured with all possible colors of nature...gulaal could only see a two eyes staring at her and rest of his face was difficult to recognize...

she said angrily " y are u playing color"

boy said smiling " well we are meant to play the colour though I wanted to burst crackers but noone listened "

his reply agitated gulaal more she said "but y me I don't know u .we are stranger"

he said "holi hai aaj to dushman bhi dost ban jaate hai hum to sirf ajnabi hain

and with that he throws red color on gulaal she close her eyes and turns her face and color spills on her forehead ?.he smiles and started dancing again...she is furious she says "plz let me go its an emergency"

boy looked back

gulaal said " plz "

.boy looked into her eyes and then whisteled and asked the man to stop playing drum and then he asked in his friend in raised voice... jaane do miss colourless ko inko colors or frnship mei koi interest nahi hai "..

the group parted and make way gulaal walked away ...she came near to her car she looked back to the boy... their eyes met for a sec...and then gulaal sat and drive away ... the boy was standing still watching the car slowly disappearing someone from the group shouted kesar and kesar looked back...

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in the hospital

after 2 hrs gulaaal came out of the operation theatre and console patient's wife " ab apko darne k jaruroot nahi hai who kahtre se bahar hai"

Dr dushyant came after her and said to gulaal it was very tough but u performed very well u always make me proud

Gulaal said "yeh sab aapki seekh aur aapke guidance k naatiza hai aapke bina mein itna bada operation kabhi nahi kar paati aur phir patient k saath duayein bhi to thi aaj laga sahyad kiski dua kaam aa gayi "

Dushyant " to coffee peene chale "

Gulaal phir kabhi abhi to mein pure colors mein rangi hui hu pehle ise saaf karlu

And then gulaal takes a leave

Duhsyant saw her and says mein "us kabhi ka hamesha intzaar karta hun "
gulaal reahes her cabin's washroom tries to clean the color from her face and forehead but all efforts are in vain

Suddenly there is knock at the door she comes out of her washroom and see a handsome guy in white kurta standing outside her cabin and similing at her

Gulaal see her and smile back and say "kya kaam hain aapko"

Vasant " ji doctor mujhe aajkal need nahi aati hai kiska chehra din raat pershan karta rehta hai har samay bus usi se baat karne ka man karta hai "

Gulaal said kaun hai woh

Vasant came close and said "tum

gulaal "kanhi aapko pyaar to nahi ho gaya

vasant " pyaar 1 saal pehle hua tha syptoms abhi bhi waise hi hai kuch improvement nahi hai "

Gulaal " bechare tum u need a hug she hugs him tightly and say happy holi

Vasant putcolour veryu gently on her face and say happy holi and happy bday "

She hugs him back and says yeh to indian calendar k hisab se hai u know mera bday nikal gaya hai

Vasant said to kya hua hum do baar celebrate karenge

She said tum yanha itni subah kaise

Vasant: aaj mein sabse pehle tumhare saath holi khelna chahta tha isliye subah se hi hospital mein hoon agar kesar ko mil jaata to phir to mere saath woh rang panchami tak holi khelta chodta hi nahi mujhe ... bilkul pagal hai

Gulaal smiles as she knows kesar is everything to vasant his eyes shines when he talks about him gulaal has heard his same talks alteast 100 times... how he and kesar are very close they are like one soul in two bodies he is his dream his desire his happiness...somehow gulaal is never bored with his topic she loves to hear more as vasant's happiness is widest wen he talks about kesar...

gulaal to kab milwa rahe ho apne bhai aur apni family se muhe

Vasant " bahut jaldi" and then looks at her forehead and says "yeh sindoor kanha se lagva liya "

Gulaal : yeh sindoor nahi gulaal k rang hai raaste mein kuch log holi khel rahe the unme se kissi ne yeh rang daal diya..itne baar saaf kiya hai par jaa hi nahi raha

Vasant smiled and said : kuch rang bahut pacche hote hai..hume itne asaani se nahi chodte

gulaal nods her head remembering the boy she met at morning
Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok i finished first chapter if u like it plz tell me
should i continue ????? or u want me to stop right now 😉
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arti arti arti arti arti, i loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it seriously my heart is jumping like this right nowHappy Dance oh love u sooo much arti, fantastic, extremely fantastic, superbly fantastic, mind blowingly fantastic, excellent FFLove Shower n dont u even dare to stop writing, i want to read more chapters, more more more 😆 artiii 🤗 n whr vr u yesterday haan? oh aj to i was also not able to come, sab comments vl give tomorrow but this FF, i m in love with this 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣🤣... what an awesome story... can't stop laughing... !!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arti..so finally...came up with a FF ha...every thing..was just enjoyable..re...n who are throwing tamatars...tell me...really..aartii..a very good start...please don't stop...enjoyed..ur safe age difference..n dushy's secret love..n all...do din se.....yahin..kar rahi..thi..now I have full time work..reading ur..FF..n spamming...very happy after reading.....this..thank u..re..good work..n dont stop..please...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arti..this FF is awsome,mind blowing...i loved it yaar...please please please be contined...i m waiting for the 2nd chapter, what will gona be happend in the 2nd chapter...!!!!!!

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