old FF till chapter 19 - Page 82

Originally posted by: sukriti19a

Awesome.. awesome... thats what i can say... whole night in car staring ... arti.. u r superb yaar... yes gulaal name well defined...

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Hey Arti... is it possible for you to PM me when you next update ??... I keep waiting for the next bit and when I come on the forum. I find that you have already updated 2 chapters... 😕

Originally posted by: arti07

and he turned around gulaal was sleeping'' '.he looked at her for a moment gulaal was beautiful; her beauty in the moonlight seemed more exquisite than ever;her lovely hairs;flushed cheeks; beautiful eyes and the innocent look of her face appeared in his eyes to render her more lovely then he has ever beheld her'.his heart accelerated as he gazed upon her''he came near and saw she was as pure as white, as scared as red, as sophisticated as black, as soothing as blue, as refreshing as green, as cheerful as yellow, as vibrant as ornage, as shy as pink''he looked and said "saare rang to hai tumme samaye hue hai''gulaal k alaawa tumhara aur kya naam ho sakta hai''."ahh where from where do u get these kind of marvelous thoughts yaar⭐️i am in love with your writting, sacchi👏

And he stared her without rest till the sunbreak and first rays of sun gently kissed gulaal's cheek she woke and looked at kesar'.kesar withdrew his eyes'.-issh, my cheeks went all red,this is chooo romantic😳

sometimes i wonder why me and piyu pakau you with our shayari re when you keep bringing such beautiful chappi's for us, i read chappi 16 for 4 times and i can guarantee you i am not going to read this chappi for less than 5 times, sooo freakingly romantic yaar👏 but beyond every guilt of pakauing you i think its my duty to paste such c-grade shayari on this link as u keep putting such stunning chappis here, love u aarti...and beware shyari is coming🤢

Chaitu ab hai meri baari😉

tu jan le main kabhi kisi se na hari

par arti k ff ne kiya hai mujhe majboor

dil to addicted hai ...isme dil ka kya kasoor

Arti mat karna meri ashaon ko choor-choor

mat jana humse door

Pls next chappi jaldi se lana zaroor

Ye le chaitu...haila kya bakwas likh sakti hun main😲..mujhe ab main serial se allergy ho gayi hain.😲..mujhe to bas Arti ka FF hi pasand hai😳

MAINE KEH DIYA AB TERI BAARI CHAITU

Hey very beautifully written,waiting for this romance to continue in the coming chapters