old FF till chapter 19 - Page 85

Originally posted by: truedecent

arti arti arti 👏... lag ja galay k phir yahan wohi baaat ho na hooo, shayad phir is forum men wahi din raat hon na hon ... 🤗

wah wah wah arti kya baat hai...

arti laayi hai kya chapter pyaara,

gulaal k rang men rang diya forum yun saara,

kesu to mar mitta us pe bechara 😆

soche ga zaroor kyun raha main ab tak kanwara 😉

arti ko mile dhair saara pyaar hamara,

ab jaldi se likh de chapter number athaara

wow wow wow wow wow wow wow arti, tum men to saare rang hain, tumhara naam gulaal hi ho sakta hai, wah yaar superb, i love u arti, its another superb chapter yar, oye hoye what a kiteflying n staring n sardi n ice cream aha aha aha arti te vadi romantic si 😍 hahaha yar love u so much, i dont have words to express that how beautifully u have written this... 🤗

Originally posted by: nneeiill

OMG..arti chapter 17 was breathtakingly beautiful..i wish it never ended...it just touched my heart and all along the chapter i was smiling...omg how i wish CV''s stole thischapter of urs...dont scold me now 😆...am in love with ur FF...the description of all the colors..wow..it was just wow...ab kesuda ko pata lagega 24 hr kisi ke baare mai kaise socha jata hai

and yea the beginning where gulaal stood still and thought " kisi nadi ke kismat mai sahil se milna nahi hota " OMG I bow to you for those lines...

and u inclded my fav guitar and swimming pool scnene..not to forget the duppatta line...haye

i cant wait for the next chapter..jaldi likh na arti😳

Thank you Kiran ..kya shayari hai

tu ab dekh ab meri baari hai🤢

Arti tere ff ki hai charcha charo or

Tere mere bich mein kaisi hai ye dor

karte rahenge tujhe yun hi bore

Jaldi chappi update kar de pyaari bhajiya chor😛

Haila ye wala to kamaal hai...itna pakao😲

aja kiran...chaitu ab teri baari😳

Arti bata kahan hai tu.😭..Chappi 18 kyun nahi lati😕...Fellow gulaalians need help...😭.Join us in ghatiya shayari se arti ko pakao mission..😆.Arti ko tab tak pakao..jab tak wo update nakare😳...

We want Chappi 18..Jaldi kar varna.😆...ghatiya shayari...ka zoo khol dungi...😆.Tu abhi janti nahi...hum kitne ghatiya shayari likh sakte hain...😆

Originally posted by: alanta

your ff is really getting amazing day by day. It is even becoming interesting than the show. And now I am confused. Is it because the show is getting dull these days or of the beauty of your ff. Yea I think it is both. Esp I liked your way describing those colors on Gulaal, it was just outstanding.

I wish your ff could have been pictursed.

Originally posted by: prachurya

Arti dear...seriously copyright Daiba's dialogues from chapter-16, it will definitely be stolen by other cvs...Chappie 16 was excellent...the beach walk...GK moment was seriously gud

Chapter-17 ism y current fav- Midnight icecream date- I Love it! I also loved the way where Kesar didn't even look back and knew dat Gullu was dere when he was playing the Guitar. Mera sabse fav scene- staring and the romantic line "Saare Rang..."- oh if Gullu had heard dat den she wud hav been surely swept away. I Love you and ur FF...romantic scenes kaise hote hain, yeh koi tumse seekhe *dreams abt the midnight icecream date*