Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 20

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Oho!!jindal saabs control slipped off☺️ek aur suspense..but i was amazing chapter. As usual⭐️.do continhe soon😃

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Amazing update👍🏼

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Amazing update👍🏼

Phir se suspense😒

Loved Jindal Saab's way to jagao wifey dear😉

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ye suspense next part mein khatam ho jayega😛

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Part-20

After Lunch they returned to their room and took a small nap. At evening they woke up Akshat insist guddan for visiting site seen at firstguddan was refusing bt atlast agreed . They started their journey all whileGuddu was suggesting the place as she knew the place very well.

After visiting and having dinner they returned to their roomand both slept at mid ni8 akshat woke up for water he couldn’t find guddanthere he was extremely worried for and call her name he immediately came outfrom the room and started looking for her he was repeatedly trying her number bt she was not picking up the callso he tracked her number and atlast found her near a beach and drinkingsomething wait not something she was consuming alcohol he immediately runedtowards her and snatched the bottle from her.

Aj- ye qa kr rhi ho dimag kharab ho gya hai qa aur aadhiraat ko koi aise bin bataye bahar nikalta hai do u have any idea how much I wasscared for u agr tumhe kuch ho jaata to….

Guddan (was tipsy not fully drunked)- Ho jata to ho jatajyada se jyada ham mar hi jate na aur waise v aap meri sacchai jan ne ke baadmjhse nafrat hi krne lgenge na aap hamara chehra v dekhna pasand nhi krengehame chor denge aap her eyes filled with tears.

AJ sushed her and hugged her tightly- chup ekdum chup mainkv tumse door nhi jaoonga aur na tumhe khud se door jaane doonga no matter whatdo u get that. Tum apne Jindal sahab pr trust krti ho na agar ha to qa baat haiplz mjhe bataon. Aur ham dost v haitumne is dost se promise v kiya tha ki tum mjhse kuch nhi chipaogi.

G- ham v aap se kuch chipana nhi cahahte Jindal sahab lekinhame darr hai agar hamne apko sacchai bta di to aap hamse nafrat krne lagengeaur ham apse door nhi jana chahte agar ham apko sach bta denge to aap hamsenafrat to nhi krenge na .

Aj- As if it is possible main tumse kv v nafrat kr hi nhisakta .

Guddan- Promise.

Aj took her hand into his and holded tightly- promise nowsay..

Guddan- Jindal sahab aapko pta hai ham is sahar mein pehlibaar nhi aye hai ham yha pr reh chuke hai yha pr kuch acchi yaadein hai aurkuch boori v pr acchi yaadon se jyada buri yaadein joodi hai is seher ne hamsebahut kuch cheen liya ham 3 saal pehle bahut si umeed aur sapne lekr aye theyha pr pr sb kuch bikhar gya hamara. 3 saal pehle hame yha ke one of the bestengeeniering collage mein admission mila tha ham bahut khush the yha pr ate hihamare dost v ban gye ham unke sath bahut masti krte the shooru shooru mein sbthik tha seniors ragging krte the bt uski aadat ho gyi thi hame hame aisa lagrha tha jaise hamare sare sapne pure ho gye ham har semester mein top krne lagehamara self confidence wapis ane laga hame aisa lagne laga ki hamse ho payega lekin jaise jaise month bit te gye hame sapneaur hakikat ke beech ka difference pta chalne laga vo sb ek dream tha jisepoora krna hamse na ho paya hamare top krne ke wajah se bahut log jealous v theaur mre dost bahut khush v the lekin jaise hamara first year complete hua bahutlog hamse nafrat krne lage wahi Taane sunane lage ki hamse kuch na ho payegahame samjh v nhi aa rha tha hamari galti qa hai fir jaise hi ham apne thirdyear ka exam dene wale the usi ek raat pehle ye afwah faila di ki maine paperleak krwai hai and mre pass paper hai aur isi liye university ki investing teamcheck krne hamare room pahunchi aur pta nhi kaise unhe hamare room mein papersmil gye sirf yhi nhi unhe hamare room se drugs v mile hame kuch v samjh nhi aarha tha fir hamara blood test hua ye dekhne ke liye ki hamare blood mein drugshai ya nhi aur result positive aya sab ne hamara sath chor diya tha professorstudents yha tk jinhe maine apna best frnds mana tha vo tk hamse nafrat krnelage aur hame saja ke taur pr rusticate aur ban kr diya gya ham bahut tut chukethe samjh hi nhi aa rha ham qa kre isliye ham wapis indore chale aye aur kisiko ye baat nhi batayi q ki ab sbki nafrat bardasht krne ki taqat nhi thi ham mekhas krke apke and after saying this she started crying and faints due to alcoholeffect.

Akshat was in tears and hugged her close to his heart hepick he in his arms and gently laid her on the bed caresses his hair and peckshis forhead and slept while engulfing her in his arm.

At morning guddu woke up with a headache though she had anheadache bt she was feeling light she don’t know the reason she look at theother side of the bed bt couldnt find anywhere bt as she turn her head onopposite side she saw Aj holding a glass her head was spinning.

G- are baapre sir chakra rha hai hamara upar se ajeebogareeb sapna v dekh rhe hai waise ye Jindal sahab glass lekr hamare sapne meinqa kr rhe hai peechli baar to chai lekr khare the sach mein hamara kuch nhi hoskta Aj chuckles on this A soon she stands up she slips along with Aj on bedthey had an intense eyelock Akshat gently tugged her hair behind his ears hewas caressing her cheek and rubbed his check with her all this while guddan washaving goose bumps and was lost in other world she come out of trence when Ajpeck on her check.

Aj- ab to yakeen ho gya ki main real mein hoon sapna nhi hai tumhara.

Guddan was blushing and looking downwords being embarrassed Aj smiled on that he make her look at him.

Aj- ab ye lo ye nimbu pani peelo q ki raat ko tumne bahut alcohal liya tha aur ye sir dard v hangover ka nateeja hai.

Waise itni boori chiz v nhi hai ye sharab accha qa hamnekuch galat kiya tha kal ya hamne apko pareshan kiya tha qa hame kuch v yaad nhiaa rha hai lekin pta nhi q bahut accha mehsoos kr rhe hai jaise dil ka bahutbada bojh utar gya ho.

Aj smiles on that – nhi tumne kl kuch bhi galat nhi kiya he remembers their last ni8 convo he gets into thinking Guddan snapped at him.

G- fir se kha kho gye aap.

Aj- khi nhi ab tum jaldi se fresh ho jaon ham breakfastkrenge fir mjhe jaroori kaam se khi jana v hai.

Guddan nodes and quickly runs to washroom while Aj called someone

Aj- kaam jald se jald ho jana chahiye understand

Caller- jee sir aap tension mat lijiye kaam jald poora hojayega.

Aftersometime Guddan came out from the washroom wearing apink color dress her wet hair enhanced her beauty more Akhshat was mesmerized byher. Guddan sat beside vanity table.

Aj wents to her and took the comb Guddan was confused at hisbehavior as she opened her mouth to say something Aj stop her by putiing fingeron her lips he removed his figure while tracing it. He parted her hairline andtook the vermillion box

Aj- may I to ehich guddan nodes at positive Aj smilingly fills it on her hairline then with her permission he ties Ms around her neck without breaking the intense eyelock they are having he puts the bangles on herhand caressed on it he reduces the distance between them they r close enough tofeel each other breath. Aj eyes on herleap and was reducing the distance .

Suddenly someone knocked at the door and they distanced themselves he opened the door it was hotel staff inviting for the breakfast.

They went for their breakfast while guddan was blushing unknowingly and Aj cursed himself for loosing his control …

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Part-21 pg-30

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awosome part

Guddu's past is soo painfull and she faces so mach humilatoin and rejaction

Aj may be find the real clurprint and real person who did with her pyaari gudiya and punished front of all

May be guddu relised about aj s fellings for her

Guddu done drunk and speak out herpain of heart who hide from the world guddu is so strong hide this pain

Aj fight for her justice ,give her back her honour dignity and light her dream again

Exited for next part cant wait

Edited by Bhumi1992 - 5 years ago
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Superb update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

Awosome part

Guddu's past is soo painfull and she faces so mach humilatoin and rejaction

Aj may be find the real clurprint and real person who did with her pyaari gudiya and punished front of all

May be guddu relised about aj s fellings for her

Guddu done drunk and speak out herpain of heart who hide from the world guddu is so strong hide this pain

Aj fight for her justice ,give her back her honour dignity and light her dream again

Exited for next part cant wait

Thanks for liking it😳

Will continue soon

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