Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 18

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Posted: 6 years ago

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its aweeome...🤗loved how aj stood fir his gudiya...and how he assured his gudiya..soooo sad past...but the chapter is fntastic as usual❤️

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Part-18

They reach to jindal bhawan it was dark guddan is aghast

G- jindal sahab aap chindi ho ye pta tha pr itne ki electricity bill nhi bhara ye nhi pta tha. Are baapre kitna andhera hai.

Then only light came everyone shout surprise Aj gestures durga and laxmi for something she understood and took guddan with them all while guddan is surprised and asking them where they r going.

Aftersometime Guddan is descending stairs along with laxmi and durga Aj's jaw drops seeing her she was looking breathtaking in beautiful white color barbie dress

Aj goes towards her and forword his hand guddu took it Aj then kissed on her knucles revti comes to her

Revti- happy birthday di aapko pta hai ye sab jiju ne arrange kiya hain aapke liye aur apko pta hai aaj hum jiju se shart haar gye bt aaj main shart harne ke baad v khush hu ham mein shart lagi thi ki aap apna bday celebrate krogi ya nhi aur dekho jiju jeet gye.

Guddu looks at him she was emotional and her eyes become moist.

Aj- maine ye sb tumhare chehre pr muskurahat dekhne ke liye kiya tha ankho mein ansu nhi

G- ham ro nhi rhe hai waise v agar ham royenge to hamara makeup kharab ho jayega aur ham chudail dikhenge. All chuckles at her talks.

Some servants brought a cake she cuts that and fed to everyone after that everyone dance chit chats and played some game guddan was enjoying all this very much and akshat was happy seeing her happy after that it was late ni8 so party ended everyone was too tired so went for sleep.

Akshat enters in the room he couldnt find guddan there he nodes his head he understood where she could be he enteres into kitchen and as expected guddan was eating cake she already had finished 1/4 of it as we all know guddu is foodie.

Aj- ye qa kr rhi ho itna meetha khaogi to bimar par jaogi.

G- aaj mat rokiye waise v aaj hamara bday hai to aaj to ham man bhar kr cake khayenge waise bhi ye itna tasty hai ki hamse control v nhi hoga.

Aj- vo mjhe v pta hai pr apna bday cake apne frnd ke sath share nhi krogi guddan looks at him then at cake then with heavy heart she agrees Aj took one bite and apply it on her face guddan angrily glares at him

G- ye aapne qa kiya mre muh pr cake laga diya

Aj pulled her cheeck as she was looking adorable in her anger mode in the process applying more cake on her face seeing her reaction Aj chuckles at her he only knows how he resisted himself from kissing her.

Aj- tum shayad bhool gyi ki tumne v hamari pehli mulakat mein mjhpr kaise cake lagaya oops maara tha aur fir tumne maafi mangne ke bajaye qa khs tha ki aajkl to face pr cake lagana tradition hai right so maine v wahi nibhaya hai. He was laughing.

G- to aapne hamse badla le rhe hai baat mat krna hamse she angrily goes towards her room.

Aj- lagta hai naraz ho gyi fir se mehnat krni paregi ise manane ke liye he enters in the room and could find her he then went to terrace and saw guddan was arranging bed. Ye tum qa kr rhi ho she didnt say anything. Kuch pooch rha hu tumse bataogi ya nhi he make her stand by holding her shoulder.

G- she push him little and says aapse mtlb.

AJ again pull her close to himself through her waist and lock her in his arms guddan resisted bt he was way more stronger than her. Aj by his one hand tracing her cheecks and shoulders he huskily whispers in her ears mtlb hai guddan q ki tum mri patni ho tumse judi hr ek chiz se mtlb hai mjhe he kiss her earlobe guddan was lost and her heart was beating faster due to this proximity she dont know the reason why this wierd feeling always grew inside her whenver she is close to him. She had closed her eyes Aj looks at her he was admiring her cuteness he pick her in his arms and went to the tent near poolside guddan was locked in her embrace first she struggled bt later she drifted into peaceful sleep.

At morning sun's ray fall over them which leads Akshat to open his eyes he remembers something and then he wake her up

Guddan- q itni subah subah jaga rhe hai hame aur sona hai

Aj- nhi aut nhi sona hai tumhe aaj hame khi jaana hai jaldi utho.

Guddan wakes up and asks kha jana hai hame.

Aj -vo tumhe pta chal jayega pehle ready ho jao tum aur jaldi taiyar hokr aon.

Aftersometime guddan came wearing a baby pink dress she was looking heavenly akshat as usual mesmerized by her look.

Guddan-chale

Aj- haa chalo

G-lekin aap batayenge kha jaa rhe hai ham

Aj- tumhe pta chal jayega

They come to hall dadi feds her curd and sugar eveyone hugs her and wisher her best of luck which make her confused before leaving dadi ask her to take blessing of kanha she does .

In car

Guddan -aap batoge ho qa rha hai hum bahut jyada confuse ho gye hai aur ham jaa kha rhe hai kuch samjh nhi aa rha

Akshat- thodi der ruko sb pta chal jayega aur apna muh band rakho let me concentrate on driving.

They reach to airport

G- ye ho qa rha hai aap tha pr q laye hame aur ham khi bahar jaa rhe hai qa aur agar jaa rhe hai to pehle batana tha na main packing v kr leti.

Aj- uski tension tum mat lo maine packing kr li hai he shows their luggage and after completing thier process they sit on the flight.

G-ab aap batayenge kha jaa rhe hai ham.

Aj- pta chal jayega. Aj in mind jha ham jaa rhe hai guddan main tumhe nhi bta skta warna tum kbhi nhi jana cahogi lekin ye tumhari ateet ka hissa hai aur tumhare ghav bharne ke liye hamara waha jana bahut jaroori hai i m sure waha se ane ke baad tum bahut khush hogi

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Part-19 pg-27

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update..loved it..guddu aur aj kaha jaa rhw h...plz uodate soon😃❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

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