Akshan ff- Tere bin(last part updated on pg32)*Completed* - Page 22

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

Loved it...its so painful to read that guddans had such and intense parr..she got soo much pain..jindal saab would surely eecover his gudiya fron her past❤️😃..

Cont soon😃

W8 krna humse naa ho paa rha h😛

Thanks for liking it 😳

will continue soon

plz u too continue ur stories waiting for it😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part-21

After they had their breakfast Akshan visited the place Guddan was happy and scare at the same time. Akshat noticed her dilemma. he had planned a surprise for her which will erase all her bad memories and he was sure about it. So he was driving the car to reach their destination.

G- Jindal sahab ye to hamare resort ka raasta nhi lag rha hai kha jaa rhe hai ham.

A- ham tumhare surprise ke pass jaa rhe hai.

G- surprise hamare liye qa hai surprise jaldi batayie na

Aj chuckled at her questions- have patience my cute wife we will reach soon

After half an hour they reach to a place Aj came out from his car and he opened the door for Guddan and she excitedly came out from the car but what she saw she became shocked and frightened she took her step backwards and then started running away Akshat shouted for her but she didnt stoped after lot of struggle Aj managed to catch her. But guddan was so panicked that she became hysterical and was still trying to run away so in order to calm her down Aj caught hold of her and claimed her lips Guddan calmed down after that Akshat leaves her.

Aj- I m sorry...actly tum chup hi nhi ho rhi thi so i found only this way to calm u down so i had to ki..kiss u

Guddan shyly looks at the ground Aj smiles on thathe holds her hand - ab chale andar

Guddan again remembers her past and started crying this time Aj took her into his embrace and caresses her hair

G (while sobbing)- aa...aap q..laye ...h..hame ..y..yha apko pt hai..y..ye ha..hamara

A- tumhara clg tha

G looked at him being shocked-a..aapko..pt.pta hai.

Aj nodes his head in positive

Guddan - a..apko..poora sach nhi pta hai

Aj- mjhe sab pta hai guddan mujhe tumhare past ke baare mein sb kuch pta hai

Guddan again started crying- ab aap v hamse nafrat krne lagenge na..

AJ engulf her in his arm and try to lessen her pain- ssh..guddan aisa kuch v nhi hai main tumse kv nafrat kr hi nhi skta tum kuch galat nhi kr skti as i trust u and my trust on u will remain intact forever ab tum v mjhpr bharosa rakho aur chalo andar he wiped her tears.

he took her into the college premises Guddan's heart was beating really fast as everyone was present there and was staring at her all those bitter memory flashes in her mind and was about to run away but Aj had cought her hand his smile and support was providing her enough strength though she was nervous and scared but she was sure nothing will go wrong as her jindal sahab is with her.

As soon as she entered there everyone including her seniors and professers folded her head seeking forgiveness guddan confusedly looking at them and then to akshat while he was smiling constantly. suddenly his smiling face chaged into an extremly anger one when a girl was crying and touched her feet and crying vigorously.

Guddan make her stand and hugged her- ali...alisha tu ro q rhi hai she was happy and was going to introduce her to him when he turned his face making guddan more confuse she looked at alisha.(alisha is one of the two best friend of guddan in the college)

G- koi hame batayega ye ho qa rha hai ...

"main batata hu" a person spoke Guddan turned to him and touched his feet

G- Sumit sir aap ...

S- baki baat baad mein krenge Guddan pehle tumhare sawalon ka jawab dena jyada jaroori hai ham sb yha isliye hai ki tumhare sath hue nainsafi ke liye ham tumse mafi mang ske us din ki sari sacchai pta chal gyi hai hame hame pta chal gya hai ki that u r not the culprit kisi ne tumhe fasaya tha and ur reports had been replaced too aur us din hue sadyantra ke sadyantrakari ka v sach samne aa gya hai.

G- kon hai vo insaan jo hamare sath aisa kiya jisne hamare dreams ko tod ke rakh diya she was sobbing while uttering this.

Everyone looked towards Alisha and she bowed her head in embarassement

Akshat- vo insaan koi aur nhi guddan balki Alisha hai.

Guddan was heartbroken she looked at everyone and all of them response in positive...

G- n..nhi ye sb jhut hai hai ai...aisa ..nhi ho skta tu ku..kuch bolti q nhi hai bta na tu aisa kv nhi kr skti ham best friend hi we r like sisters right t..tu..q kregi aisa she shook alisha by her shoulder.

Alisha- ha ye sb maine kiya tha sb sach bol rhe hai.

G-q...qa..kyu kiya aisa tune q ..

Alisha - because i was blinded because of my hatred towards u because of my misconception that u had snatched my everything becoz of my jealousy towards u guddu..

G- wha...what...r ...u saying ali.

Alisha- haa guddan main tujhse bahut jyada jealous ho gyi thi tujhe yaad hain na ki sirf academics hi nhi balki har jagah tu first ane lagi thi aur main hamesha second ane lagi thi and even my parents was fond of u more than me professiors students sb ke muh pr sirf ek hi naam rhta tha Guddan ...Guddan aur Guddan tb v maine ignore krne ki koshis ki thi lekin jb umesh jis se main pyaar krti thi vo v tumse pyaar krne laga aur i cant tolerate that isliye maine ye sb plan kiya tumhe is clg se bahar nikalne ke liye aur sath hi sbki nazron mein girane ke liye so that everyone starts praising me

And that was it Guddan slapps her and brokes down Aj holded her.

G- ye sb krne ki kya jaroorat thi tune ek..ek baar bola hota i myself would have left everything but what u did u didnt malign my name and distroyed my career but u also broke my self esteem and my dream. I didnt only considered u as my best friend bt i also considered u as my sister but what u did to me. With this she started crying

The college authority and the officers who had ousted and baned from the university now removed all the alligations against her as her innocence was now proved and everyone seeks for her forgiveness. As police officers were about to arrest alisha for defaming an innocent girl Guddan refrain them and everyone requested the officers not to do the same as it might destroy her career for forever though Guddan protected her from the arrest and other punishments but she made it clear to her that she doesnt consider her as her frnd and will never ever trust her. Alisha was ashamed and everyone left from there.

Guddan went to her sumit sir while Aj excuses himself for important work to do he. He will return very soon.

S- i m happy Guddan.

G- vo sb to thik hai sir pr ye sb hua kaise.

S- waise ye sb tumhare pati ke wajah se hua hai guddan unhone mjhe ye batane se mana kiya hai .

G- plz sir batayie na plz

Sumit- ok batata hoon bt corridor mein nhi baith kr baat krte hai waise v tumse koi baat chupana mushkil hai .

Guddan chukles- correct sir

So here is the next part sorry for being superlate but i was and am buzy hope u understand. Ignore the mistakes and plz do share ur views

Part-22 pg-31


Edited by Kammy02 - 5 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Viditian1

its totally ok dear..even my wxams are also approaching soon...so i understand...

ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS...😃❤️

Updated do check😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Love it❤️ so all this happens because of Mr. Akshat Jindal but how he did it...

Plz update next part soon kyuki ab aur wait krna humse na ho payega😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 22

Sumit and Guddan sat on a bench he narrated how akshat came to him and asked his help and proved her innocence.

Flashback

Akshat reached to the college premises and was asking about the case regarding Guddan everyone there denied to know about her as if "Guddan" name never exited Akshat was frustrated and this all was witnessed by sumit he was curious who was this strange men showing so much interest in this matter . Though Guddan was proven guilty but sumit's believe on her was still entact, he went near Aj.

S- Who r u?? and why u r asking about Guddan Gupta How you know her.

Aj- I m her husband but he was confused upon seeing him there and too he did take guddan's name as everyone denied even know this name.

S- i know u might be shocked and believe me i was also shocked when after so many years someone asked about this name let me introduce myself I m Sumit Dubey and Guddan was my student she was a brilliant and kindhearted student. She didnt deserved it she was too innocent.

Aj- I happy that someone is still here in college who believes that se is innocent i m here to prove the same as i m sure that my Guddan was never at fault she must be a victim of conspiracy. Though i need someone help and if u dont mind can....

S- No need to even ask about this i m ready to help u even myself was trying to find the truth bt someone from powerful background is involved in this..

From that day onwards they start haunting for the truth Aj through his sources track the drug dealers it was shocking that many youngsters are involved in this the dealers also involved in the paper leaking and thus destroying the future of many and they have become addictive to this harmful product. The main dealers who was boss of this business get caught by the police and after some beatings he spilled the beans that someone had taken his help to trapp the girl named Guddan years ago and he himself doesnt know about the name of the person but its was a girl she handed over a huge some of money to him he helped them in order to catch alisha as he called her and demanded a sum of money or he will blabber all her deeds and things gone well and their plan succeeded the main culprit alisha was cought red handed and later she herself admitted her crime and that's how Guddan proved innocent.

Flashback end

Tears was flowing from Guddan's eyes

S- Believe me Guddan sirf tumhe nhi kisi ko v is b aat pr vishwas hi nhi ho rha tha ki alisha aisa kuch kr skti hai jo ho gya so ho gya Guddan. But u r lucky ki tumhe akshat jaisa pati mila who loves u a lot.

G- aap aise kaise keh skte ha.

S- uske ankho mein dikhta hai Guddan tumhare liye beintehaa pyaar ab ye sb choro apna ansu pocho aur sare past guilt ko chod kr apni jindagi ki nayi shuruaat kro.

Guddan nodes her head then only akshat arrived.

Aj- I hope main aap dono ki important discussion ko disturb nhi kiya right both of them chuckles

S- Nhi nhi bilkul nhi bs Guddan ko sari kahani suna rha tha q ki bina jane ye chup rhti nhi.

Aj- vo mjhse behtar kon samjh skta hai.

G- qa bola aapne

Aj- kuch bhi nhi khair ye sb chodo I think ab hame chalna chahiye kal saam ko indrore wapis jane ka flight hai .

G-okk

AJ- dont worry jab bhi time milega ham aa skte hai yha

They took their leave from there Guddan was smiling

Aj- qa baat hai bahut khush lag rhi ho i thought u will miss this place

G- Ham is liye khush hai q ki saalo pehle is jagah se ham bahut krwi yadein lekr gye the lekin aaj ham bahut khush hai aur sb accha hona hi tha aap jo sath hai. waise flight kl ki hai s aaj ham ghum skte hai right.

Aj- haa bt us se pehle hame av hotel chalna chahiye fir aaj to celebrate v krna hai

They both drove towards the hotel room and freshen up suddenly someone knocked their door Aj opened the door it was hotel's manager who invited them for the Night's event i.e, a theme party AJ told hi, that he will be there with his wife the manager told them that dress will be provided to them he wish them and went from their. Guddan was very excited.

Aj- I think hame thora aaram kr lena chahiye .

Guddan nodes and they rest for sometime.

So, here is the next part i know it was too late and short i will try to write long next time do vote and share ur view



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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Next part updated😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Swati_20

Love it❤️ so all this happens because of Mr. Akshat Jindal but how he did it...

Plz update next part soon kyuki ab aur wait krna humse na ho payega😊

Next part updated do share ur views😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

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