Akshan FF - IS LOVE WON chapter 7 pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Awesome uodate..

Its always a treat to watch jallu jindal..

"Guddan ka best friend nhi meri sautan ho" Gosh this dialogue cracked me🤣

Loved it..update soon❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Amazing

I think this sam is with bhusanji to unite akshan

Jealous akshat is❤️

Continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

Awesome uodate..

Its always a treat to watch jallu jindal..

"Guddan ka best friend nhi meri sautan ho" Gosh this dialogue cracked me🤣

Loved it..update soon❤️

Thank you for liking it.

Always female lead talk about sautan. So i try to write something different .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 123ni

Thank you for liking it.

Always female lead talk about sautan. So i try to write something different .

yess..it was an awesome idea..loved it❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bechare AJ🤣

I think Sam was talking to Bhushan ji ya Angad Jindal aur Gupta parivaar going good with their plan😆😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 6

Aj call someone

Mr. Varma - hello mr. Jindal how may I help you.

Aj-mr. Varma mene apko ek photo send ki hai. Uska naam samar kapoor hai . Koi acting ka course krke aaya hai London se. Mujhe iski sari details chahiye.

Mr. Varma- ok Mr. Jindal aap mujhe 3,4 din ka time dijiye me samar ki information pata karke aapko call karta hu.

Aj- 3,4 din itna time nahi hai Mr. Varma mujhe samar ki info. Aaj shaam tk chahiye. No delay Mr. Varma. It's really important.

Mr. Varma- ok Mr. Jindal aap tension mat lijiye me apko shaam tk sari details deta hu. Have a nice day Mr. Jindal. And he cut the call.

Aj- aaj shaam tk mujhe samar ki sari details mil jayegi. Or ye v pata chal jayega ki vo yaha kyo aaya hai.

At Breakfast table

All are having breakfast. Guddan & sam continue their chit chat they share laughs & hifi.

Aj burn in jealousy seeing their closeness.

Guddan - ma aaj humein market jana hai kuch kaam hai. Thodi der me aa jayege.

Dadi- theek hai beta. Pr kiske saath ja rahi hai.

Guddan- ma vo sb busy hai to hum akele hi ja rahe hai.

Dadi- are ese kese beta tujhe lalla le jayega or uske baad vo restoration chala jayega. Sahi kaha na mene lalla.

Before aj should say something sam interrupt dadi iski jarurat nahi hai me le jaunga guddan ko market actually mujhe v shopping karni hai to mujhe v guddan ki company mil jayegi.

Right guddan vese v teri choice bahut aachi hai or tujhe mera taste v pata hai. Chal Tu jaldi se ready ho ja.

Guddan - ok him abhi aate hai.

Aj (in mind) -kya jarurat thi iss samar ko beeh me bolne ki itna aavu moka mila tha guddan k saath time spend karne ka pr iss ki vajah se vo v chala gya. smiley7

Pr koi baat ni bas aaj shaam ki baat hai phir to me ise apni guddan ke aas paas v nahi bhatakne dunga.

On akshan room.

Guddan get ready she is looking very pretty in yellow suit.

Akshat memorised seeing her just than Sam came there & says are waah guddan Tu to bahut sundar lag rahi hai.

Thank you. Guddan reply

Akshat look Sam in anger when he saw Sam tugged guddan's hair behind her ear & says guddan Tu na in khule balo me or v beautiful lagti hai.

Kuch v ha tu na bilkul ni badla college me v esi hi baate karta tha or ab v.. Guddan says.

To kya karu tu v to ni badli tu college me jitni beautiful thi aaj v utni hi hai or I say Tu or v jyada beautiful lag rahi hai.

Ab chale humein shopping pr jana hai. Guddan says. & both leave

Akshat wants to punch 👊 samar . But he control himself.

In kitchen

Saru - durga di aapko ni lagta guddan or samar kuch jyada hi close friend hai .mera ye kahne ka matlab hai ki jb se vo aaya hai guddan ka peecha hi ni chod raha. Use 1760 vajah mil jati hai guddan ki tareef karne ki.

Durga- vo to hai saru. Pata ni use iss galatiyon ki dukaan me kya dikhta hai. Jo itni tareef karta rahta hai. Par humein kya vese v ab kuch dino ki hi baat hai phir to humein chhutkara mil hi jayega iss guddan naam ki aafat se.

Tum kitni selfish hogi ho durga. Sirf apne baare me hi soch rhi ho.... Kishor says & enter in kitchen.

Durga -Ye aap kesi baate kar rahe hai. Me to bas iss ghar ka bhala chahti hu or vo guddan .....

Kishor - Guddan nahi guddan saasu ma bolo vo saas hai tumhari. Or kya tum iss ghar ki bhalai ki baate kr rahi ho. Agar iss ghar ka bhala chahti to sach janne k baad kabhi antra ji ka saath ni deti.

Or jaha tk baat rahi guddan ma ki to unse jyada parvaah iss ghar or papa k bare me koi ni kr sakta.

Or mujhe ek baat samjh nahi aati pahle tum sb chahti thi ki papa dusri shadi krke teeno k liye ek saas le kr aaye. Or jb guddan ma aa gyi hai or papa v unhein pasand karne lage hai to tum dono ko itni problem ho rahi hai.

Or Durga tum iss ghar me ek saas isliye lana chahti thi na ki unke aane k baad tum iss ghar ki responsibilities se free ho kar hamaare rishte pr dhyan de sako... .. Pr kya hua guddan ma k aane k baad to tum unhein neecha dikhne me lag gyi ... Vo v iss ghar me apni ahmiyat banaye rakhne ke liye.

Or tum or saru dono bhool rahi ho ki jis ghar or property ki tumlog baatein kar rahi ho vo sb papa ka hai or agar vo hum teeno ko nahi apnate or humein saharanpur nahi dete to pata nahi him sb ka kya hota

Kam se kam papa ki khushiyon ka to dhyaan rakhti. Tumhaari sacchai janne k baad v tum iss ghar me ho.... Ye sb bhool kr or apni galati sudhaarne ki jagah pr tum abhi v guddan ma k khilaaf planing kr rahi ho....

Vese tum se ye sb bolne ka koi fayda nahi hai.... And he leave from there...

Both saru & Durga can't believe ki kishor ne intha kuch kaha specially Durga.

Saru- dekha Durga di us guddan k karan aaj kishor bhaiya ne aapko 1760 baatein suna di... Pr apne unhein kuch bola kyo ni.

Durga lost in her own thoughts.....

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Please ignor typo errors or grammatical mistakes..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Awesome..lovwd it..aj toh jal bhen kr raakh hi jayebge😆

Kishore ne acha kia dayan ko suna k..loved the way how he stood for guddan❤️

Update soon😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Jindal sahab jal rhe hai😈accha hai accha hai😈

Loved it when kishore sunaoed dayan❤️

Plz plz continue asap dont make us.wait for long

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Superb update

Love it

Cont soon

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