Akshan FF - IS LOVE WON chapter 7 pg 7 - Page 3

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Sorry frnd late ho gya pr mere exams the. So thoda busy thi.

Chapter 4

Dadi & akshat came to Gupta house.

Akshat- ma aap mujhe yaha kyo layi hai aap janti hai na papa or guddan mujhe dekhkr gussa hongein.

Dadi- lalla bhushan ji ne hi humein yaha bulaya hai.

Bhushan ji - accha hua aap log yaha aa gye Mujhe kuch jaruri baat karni hai.

Guddan come down stairs & shocked to see akshat & dadi.

Guddan take blessing from dadi.

But she totally ignore akshat. Akshat feel hurt.

Guddan - aap log yaha. .

Just than a person come there.

Bhushan ji - Mr. Sharma ye hai Mr. Akshat jindal Or ye hai unki ma.

Mr. Sharma - hello Mr. Jindal me bhushan ka friend hu or ek lawyer v hu.

Akshat was shocked but greet him.

Bhushan ji - Mene tumhe bataya tha na apni beti k baare me.

Mr. Sharma- to aap dono divorce chahte hai.

Akshat & guddan both are shocked.

Guddan- papa iski kya jarurat thi.

Guddan jarurat thi tum divorce papers pr sign kr chuki ho na to bus ab sb sahi ho jayega. Bhushan reply

Mr. Sharma - dekhiye aap dono ke divorce me koi problem nahi hogi. Ha bus according to rule aap dono ko one month tk ek saath ek gher Or ek room me rahna hoga.

Uske baad vi aap logo ka decision change nahi hota to divorce ho jayega.

Akshat had miksed feeling he was upset ki yaha uske or guddan ke divorce ki baate ho rahi hai ( jo vo kabhi nahi chahta tha.) Pr guddan one month uske saath rahegi use iss baat ka sukoon tha.

Bhushan- iske alawa koi or rasta nahi hai sharma ji ye dono hi divorce chahte hai to ek saath rahne ka kya fayda. Ese hi divorce ho jata. Main nahi chata ki guddan uha fir se jaye.

Mr. Sharma - ek saath to inhein rahna ho hoga. Varna baad me problem ho sakti hai.

Bhushan - agar yahi ek rasta hai to yahi sahi.

Ja guddan beta apni parking kr le

Pr papa humein.. .

Are guddan beta mai nahi chata ki baad me koi problem ho or bus one month ki hi to baat hai. Phir sb theek ho jayga.

Revti jao guddan ki madad kro parking karne me.

In guddan room.

Di aap itni tension kyo le rahi ho jaha itne months nikla gye hai uha sirf ek month ki baat hi to hai.

Or aap hi to kahti ho ki aap ko koi fark nahi padha jeju se. Or aap v to yahi chahti thi na tabhi aapne divorce papers pr sign kiye the.

Guddan (in mind) - chhutki sahi kaha rahi hai humne hi divorce papers sign kiye the pr ab jb ye sb ho raha hai to hum khus kyo nahi hai.

Dadi, akshat & guddan came to jindal bhavan.

Angad & lakshmi are happy.

Lakshmi come forward & hug guddan.

Accha hua saasuma ho aap yaha vapas aa gyi.

Guddan- Lakshmi bahu hum yaha sirf ek month k liye aaye hai hamesa ke liye nahi.

Akshat feel hurt listing to guddan .

All are shocked.

Dadi narrate whole story. Ab guddan ek month tk yahi rahegi.

Dadi on phone - mai aapka dhanyavaad kese karu bhushan ji. Hamari itni badi galti k baad vi aapne guddan ko yaha vapas beja.

bhushan- Are aap ye kesi baatein kar rahi hai mai janta hu jo hua vo sahi ni tha pr use hum nahi sudhaar sakte . Pr ab future me sb sahi ho itna to kr hi sakte hai . Mai janta hu gudddn Or damaad ji ek dusre k bina nahi rah sakte. Bus yahi dua karte hai ki iss ek month me ye baat in dono ko samjh aa jaye .

Dadi thank him & cut the call.

In night akshan room

Akshat sat on bad just then guddan come & take Pillow and blanket and about to leave.

Akshat hold her hand & ask kaha jaa rahi ho tum.

Guddan release her hand and said sone jaa rahe hai ab aapko ismein vo koi problem hai kya .

Guddan tum yaha bad pr so jai mai.. .

Koi jarurat nahi hai ye room v aapka hai or ye bad v aapka hai or ab aapki kisi v cheej pr hamara koi haq nahi hai . & she leave.

In morning

Breakfast table guddan look for akshat but he was not there.

All are busy in there work. In evening sons came back but akshat was not with them.

Akshat come late in night. & check guddan was sleeping on her jhoola he goes near her & said mai janta hu ki tum mujhe naraz ho or tumhe hona v chahiye tumhara haq hai. Mene iss kadar bharosa thoda hai tumara ki ab mai tumaari maafi k v layak nahi hu. tears fall on guddan cheek . He left from there guddan open her eyes & touch her cheek. & feel bad.

Guddan come for breakfast but breakfast was not ready.

Guddan noticed the house fully changed. This is not same house which she left. Akshat not interfered in any matter .Bahus are totally free to do anything.

Guddan (in mind) - chal kya raha hai iss ghar me Jindal saab roj bina breakfast kiye restoration chale jate hai.late aate hai.Na kisi se kuch kahte hai .or to or bahuye v apne according hi sb kuch kar rahi hai .

In akshan room

Guddan come from washroom and slips but akshat hold her they share deep eyelock tum theek se chal nahi sakti abhi chot lag jati to...akshat said .Guddan standup & says chot lagti to humein lagti iss se apko kya vese v ye dard apke diye huye dard se kam hi hai and turn to go but akshat hold her wrist and says janta hu bahut dard diya hai tumhe pr iska ye matlab nahi ki tumhare dard se mujhe koi fark nahi padta. fark padta hai bahut fark padta hai chot tumhe lagti hai or dard mujhe hota hai.

Guddan- bas kijiye Jindal saab Or ye hamadardi apne paas hi rakhiye.

Akshat cups her face and says hamadardi nahi hai pyaar hai guddan beinteha pyaar.

guddan says Jaane dijiye humein .akshat answer nahi jaane dunga. Guddan says agar pyaar karte to bharosa v karte hum pr Or bina bharose ke pyaar kesa or vese v ab in baato ka koi fayda nahi hai hum yaha sirf ek month liye hai uske baad.....(she didn't complete )..and she leave .

Akshat & guddan both are sad & try to sleep.

In morning

Akshat remember what guddan said last night and think ab mai jyada se jyada time tumhare saath spend karunga guddan phir bhale hi mujhe tumhari nafrat Or gussa kyo na sahna pade .and after many days he goes to breakfast.

All are shocked but dadi is happy and think mai janti thi ki guddan k aane k baad sb theek ho jayega or uski suruaat ho gyi hai.

After that akshat come home early and try to spend time with guddan but she is in angry mood.

Next day

All are chit chat in hall just then someone close guddan eyes from behind.

Guddan - kon hai

Person- tera clg crime partner. Jisne tere saath teri punishment share ki.

Sam guddan says & hug him he hug her back.

( all look confused specially akshat)

Guddan - tum kb aye, kese ho, or yaha kese .. . ..

Sam- bus bus meri tufaan mail itne sare question ek saath. Saans to le le.

Guddan- sorry sorry vo itne dino baad tujhe dekha to. . ..

Sam - mai theek hu or aaj hi aaya hu. Tere ghar gya tha to revti ne bataya ki Tu yaha hai to tujhe milne chala aaya.

Or vese v naraz to mujhe hona chahiye tujhe tune saadi kr li or mujhe bulaya vo nahi.. . .

Guddan- vo na hum tujhe baad me batate hai. Pahle sb se mil to le

Ye hai hamari ma he take blessing

She introduced her Daughter in law.

Thae she turns to akshat & says ye hai AJ humare pati

Akshat smile

Or ye hai .. . .

Mai hu samar guddan ka best friend & shake hand with akshat.

Dadi- guddan beta ja apne dost ko apne room me le ja mai abhi chai nastha vejti hu.

Sam - ha guddan chal na mujhe tujhse bahut saari baate karni hai & he hold guddan's hand & leave

Akshat feels lil awkward..

Guddan & sam chit chat

Guddan laugh

Akshat - ye samar thoda ajeeb hai pr guddan itne dino baad hasi to sahi.

After some time

Sam good byee everyone

Chal ab mai chalta hu guddan sam says

Itni jaldi Tu kaha ruka hai or ab kb aayega guddan ask.

Akshat ( in mind itni jaldi 4 hours se to baate kr rahe hai)

Sam - vo abhi kuch confirm nahi hai mene jis hotel me booking ki thi vaha problem ho gyi hai to ab nayi hatel dekhni padegi.

Dadi - are pareshaan hone ki kya jarurat hai beta Tu yahi ruk ja guddan ka dost hai use v accha lagega. Mai guest room ready kara deti hu.

Are nahi iski koi jarurat nhi hai. . .

Guddan - jarurat kese nahi hai ma ne kaha na ki tu yahi ruk raha hai matlab tu yahi rukega. Apni guddan ki itni si baat nahi manega.

Akshat feel jealous & angry when guddan says apni guddan. & think tumhe apni meri guddan ho or kisi ki nahi. Or kya jarurat thi ma ko ise yaha rokne ki. Mujhe to ye bilkul pasand nahi .

Sam - ok ok tum kuch kaho Or mai na manu ye kese ho sakta hai.... Mai yahi ruk raha hu ab khus..

Guddan- kush bahut kush humein na abhi tumse bahut saari baate karni hai.

Akshat - Or kitni baate karni hai.

Dadi - kuch kaha tune lalla

Nahi ma kuch nahi. Akshat reply .

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Precap -Akshat angry with guddan & said why she told sam about their divorce.

Akshat feel sam like guddan from college days.

bhushan liked sam & ask guddan to marry him.


Ignor typo & grammatical errors.

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Amazing

Wah so we r going to see a jealous akshat

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Superb update

Love it

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Jealous angry AJ🤣🤣

Sahi toh kahe lalla aur kitne baat karege Guddan usse😂😂😂😂

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Oho😳..jindal saab jealous...i luv jealous jindal...part was awesome..loved it..cont soon..😃

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Next part update kab karoge

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Chapter 5

Dinner time.

Akshat look for guddan ye guddan kaha gyi abhi tk nahi aayi dinner k liye or uska vo stupid dost vo v dikhai nahi de raha.

Guddan & sam come to dinner

Guddan sits beside akshat & sam sits beside guddan .all are having dinner .

Laxmi- samar ji aap bhindi ki sabji lijiye na

Guddan- nahi nahi laxmi bahu sam ko bhindi bilkul pasand nahi hai. Tu na ye gobhi ki sabji le tujhe bahut pasand aayegi. And she served him.

Sam cough while eating. Guddan give him water and says theek se kha na.

Thank you Sam says. Ab Tu humein thanku bolega. Hum dono k beeh ye thanku kaha se aaya. Guddan reply.

( akshat is so much jealous seeing guddan attention toward Sam. )

Sam- guddan tujhe yaad hai college me jb hum dono ek saath perform karte the to kitna maja aata tha. Vese tujhe ab v acting m intrest hai ya. . .

Bilkul intrest hai. guddan reply.

All the time of dinner their chit chat continue.

And someone is burning seeing their closeness.

In anshan room

Akshat try talk to guddan but they hear someone knock .

Guddan - Sam Tu vaha kyo khada hai andar aa na.

Sam - guddan vo mujhe teri help chaiye thi chal na mere saath.

Guddan - ok tu chal hum abhi aate hai.

Nahi abhi chal & he hold her wrist and drag with him.

Seeing this Akshat's anger out of control .

Ye apne aap ko samjhta kya hai. Jb se aaya hai guddan se baat kiye ja raha hai. Use ek pal k liye v akele nahi chod raha.

Iss itni v samjh nahi ki vo kisi ki wife hai. Mai jb se try kr raha hu guddan k saath baat karne ka uske saath time spend karne ka. Pr ye peecha chode tb me apni wife k saath time spend karu.

Vese v guddan mujse naraz hai baat v nahi kr rahi Or iske aane k baat to vo mujhe bhool hi gyi hai. Bus Sam Sam karti rahti hai.

Akshat (in mind) - Kuch karna padega akshat kuch to karna padega vo v bahut jaldi.

After some time🕒 akshat was restless he was waiting for guddan but she didnt return.

Guddan back to her room. she takes her pillow but akshat hold pillow

Guddan - kya hai chhodiye hamara pillow hume bahut need aa rahi hai. Sone jana hai.

Akshat- ab need aa rahi hai . Or jb se us samar se baatein kr rahi thi tb need nahi aa rahi thi. and pull his side.

Guddan- dekhiye abhi humein koi ladai nahi karni hai. And she pull pillow her side.

Both pull pillow and guddan fall on akshat. Akshat smile and remove her hair from his face. They remains same condition for some time. Then guddan stand up & goes akshat hold her hand and says abhi meri baat complete nahi hui hai.

Guddan- humein koi dilchaspi nahi hai aapki baatein sunne me.

Sunna padega. Akshat says

Or ye samar kon hai tumne pahle to kabhi nahi bataya iss k bare me. Akshat ask.

Samar hamara best friend hai or hum use pyaar se Sam bulate hai. Abhi US se vapas aaya hai apni acting ka course complet krke. Bus ho gya aapka ab hum jaye yaha se she says in one breath.

Akshat says Irritatedly kya kaha tumne tum use pyaar se Sam bulati ho Kyo.

Guddan - haa to isme kya hai Vo humara special friend hai( she didnt even realize that akshat is jealous. Bcoz she is sleepy) ab ho gye aapke sabaal jabaab to hum sone jaye. Kal humein Sam ke rehearsal me help karni hai. And she leave.

Akshat- iss sam ko aaye abhi kuch hours v nahi huye or mujhe esa lag raha hai jese ye guddan ka best friend nahi meri sautan ho.

And he try to sleep but he couldn't . After some time he slept.

Next morning

Akshat wake up & think mujhe guddan se baat karni hi hogi & he goes to balcony but guddan is not there. He shocked.

Itni subha to kabhi nahi uthti guddan phir aaj kyo & he remember what guddan said last night . Ab samjha us sam ki help karne k liye ye itni subha jaag gyi. Had hai vese madam se jaldi utha nahi jata.

And he goes to guest room and he heard Sam talking someone on phone

Sam - ha hamara plan ka 1st part pura hua. Mai yahi jindal mention me ruka hu. Ab bus apne plan ka next part pr focus karna hai. Or sb ese hi chalta raha to mai jis kaam se yaha aaya hu vo v jald hi pura hoga.

Akshat ( in mind) ye kis plan ki baat kr raha hai. Or ye yaha kis kaam se aaya hai. Pata karna padega. Mujhe ye pahle se hi pasand nahi hai.

he goes to his room & here he heard angad & revti conversation which is second shock for him.

R- angad ji di kaha hai.

Angad - mujhe lagta hai bhabhi samar k saath hongi. Use Kuch help chahiye thi.

R- angad ji aapko pata hai di or Sam bahut acche friend hai. Or college time me to Sam guddan di ko like v karta tha. Pr di ko ye baat pata hi nahi thi or vo use sirf apna aacha dost hi samjhti hai. Phir Sam US chala gya. Or ab aaya hai.

Akshat- kahi Sam aaj v guddan se pyaar.. . .. Nahi nahi esa nahi ho sakta vo janta hai ki ab guddan married hai. . .. . . Pr vo kis plan ki baat kr raha tha.. . . Ab to pata karna padega sb kuch iss Sam k bare me.. . .

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Ab akshat kya karega

.

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Precap- bhushan ji ask guddan to marry Sam.

Kya hoga guddan ka jawab HA ya NA.


ignor all grammatical mistakes.

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Amazing

I think this sam is with bhusanji to unite akshan

Jealous akshat is❤️

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