Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey Guys, Hope you are all doing well. Its time for Part - 4!

Everyone turned to the source of the voice.It was Bhushan-ji ( You were right,Kajal!), along with his wife and daughter. Angad desperately tried to meet eyes with Revti but she was hesitant in making eye contact with him.

G: Papa.... Aap?

Bhushan (B): Ab aur nahi, meri bacchi! I can't see you in pain any longer. You have done so many good deeds but trouble never leaves you as long as you are in this house. Come on, let's leave this house.

Everyone was shocked at his declaration. They expected, mainly Dadi and Akshat that Guddan will oppose to it. But she just nodded her head in positive.

G: Ji Papa!

She was going to take her suitcase when Dadi stopped her.

D: B-beta... yeh tum kya kar rahi ho? T-tum apna ghar ko chod rahein ho? Jiss ghar tumne tutne se bachaya?

Guddan smiled sadly at Dadi.

G: Maaf karna Dadi par yeh ghar ab meri nahi hein.

D: B-beta Y-yeh tum kya----

That's when Guddan broke into tears.

G: Mujhse ab aur nahi saha jaa raha Dadi!

Everyone gasped but one soul's heart bled seeing her cry.

G: H-hum..... Hum ab a-aur nahi saha sakta.... I have forgiven everyone but I can't forget anything that happened. I'm sorry, Dadi but I'm fed up! From the day I came to this house only you had accepted me as a true family member. But I was keen on making everyone accept me....... but, b-but....

Guddan couldn't control her tears.

Revti (R) /L: Di!!/Sasu-maa!

Guddan tried to smile.

G: I- I'm sorry..... but this marriage was not meant to happen. I am not worth for being a member in this house.

V: Guddan-ji.... aap---

G: Nahi Raawat-ji.... ab aur nahi.... Mujhse na ho payega..... I have made this decision long back when you all accused me of killing an unborn child..... who was never there to begin with....

Everyone remained silent as they remembered the incident. Akshat closed his eyes remembering his hurtful words towards Guddan

G: P-pata hein.... pata hein ki aap Antara-ji se pyaar karthe the parek b-baar bhi nahi socha Guddan ke bare mein..... Nobody was there to believe me..... The man who told me he loves me didn't even had the audacity to believe me......

Guddan looked straightly at Akshat which made him bow down his head in shame.

D: G-guddan..... Humse bohat badi galati hui.... Pata hein kitni bhi maafi mange, kuch bhi nahi hota par....

G: Nahi Dadi....Please don't do that. I have already forgiven you..... Why should I hold grudges as I'm about to leave here forever ?

That's when Akshat broke his silence.

A: Guddan!

Guddan looked in his eyes. She then walked towards the area where her suitcase was already packed. She took some papers and went towards Akshat. She forwarded the papers.

G: Yeh lijiye....

Akshat stood still. Guddan sighed then took his hands and placed the papers.

G: These are your property papers. I have removed my name and all your money is safe. I didn't do anything to it!

D: L-lalla... Guddan se kaho na mat jao......

But Akshat stood still looking at Guddan, his eyes moist.

G: (smiles sadly) : No Dadi..... He knows that today he is the wrong one here.

Guddan turns towards Dadi.

G: Mujhe maaf karna Dadi.... par ab humse iss Jindal Parivaar ka Bahu hona na ho payega.... Now, whenever I see myself in this house I can just see all the bad memories here.... which is probably grater than a good memory.

Dadi too broke into tears. Guddan wiped her tears and moved to Lakshmi-bahu.

L: Sasu-maa......

G: Thank you for being by my side even if it was a short time. I really enjoyed spending my time with you....

Guddan then turned to Durga.

G: Thank you for supporting me though it was only for a little while.

Guddan then took her suitcase.

V: Hum aap sab chod dete hein...

Revti looked towards Angad and Angad hopefully looked back. They don't know what will happen next.Then,along with Vikram, The Gupta family was gone.

Akshat was watching her leave but she didn't turn back. He atleast expected a goodbye. Well, what would he expect after doing such a great sin? He then looked the papers and one specific one caught his eye. The papers fell down from his hand.

On the floor were several papers. One of which read, Divorce Papers.

And that's it for Part-4! Hope you guys like this Part. Be sure to like and comment if you do!

So Guddan finally left the house? What will happen now? Will she ever come back? Will Akshat and Guddan get Divorced? Stay tuned for more updates. Till then, this is Pooh signing off! Toodles!🤗






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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Both Parts Are Superb

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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

She should get divorce and move on from this mad house forever...

Btw it was good update...

Hope to see something like this on show...

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Each part of this story is incresing my curosity😛

Plz continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's really amazing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

Both Parts Are Superb

Thank you!

Update Soon

I'll try!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Shona1991

She should get divorce and move on from this mad house forever...

I agree but then we won't be able to see AkshAn Moments nor their kids in future!

Btw it was good update...

Thank you!

Hope to see something like this on show...

I'm sure the show will bring something even more better!

Continue soon

I'll try!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Each part of this story is incresing my curosity😛

And that's exactly what I want! 😉

Plz continue asap

I'll try!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Mrihika

It's really amazing

Thank you!

Continue soon

I'll try

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