Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

So gr8 plot .....wanted somewhat like this in show ...bahot ache the saare parts ...cont soon dear❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Viditian1

So gr8 plot .....wanted somewhat like this in show ...bahot ache the saare parts ...cont soon dear❤️

Thank you! Like I say the show will give something even more special... I will try to update soon!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Hey guys, Hope you are all ready for Part - 5!

The room was dark. But Akshat Jindal didn't care. Already,he has lost the light, the color of his life. He was holding the Divorce papers and her mangalsootra along with her kangan.. She had left it in their room.After Guddan left with her family and when he recognised the divorce papers, He immediately called Guddan. But she didn't pick his calls. On the 6th trial, she had answered but he could hear from her talks that she was not at all interested in talking with him.

* 30 minutes ago*

*AkshAn call*

A: Hello G-guddan???

G: ........................

There was no answer.

A: G-guddan? Are you t-there?

G: .....................

Still she was not responding.

A: G-guddan! Mu-mujhse p-please baat karo na.......

G: Ab baat karne se kya faida?

That one question made his mind a havoc. Ofcourse,what she was asking was true.

A: G-guddan..... mein maanta hu ki sab meri galati hein...... I didn't believe you.... and I'm truly sorry for that.

G: ............

A: Guddan?

G: Is that all?

A: Guddan...... mein......

G: kya mein phone rak sakte hu.... mujhe ab aur iski barein mein nahi baat karna..... jo huva woh huva.... bhul jayiye..... sab kuch!

A: Nahi bhul paraha hoon Guddan!

How can I forget everything? Even after we all left you, you still managed to save this family. How can I forget that so easily? Akshat thought with tears in his eyes.

G: If you could forget the so called love we both had, then you could forget this too very easily......

Ofcourse, That is also true. For a past love and guilt, he forgot the person who was on his side through thick and thin.

A: G-guddan.....

G: Dekhiye aap please humein aur pareshaan mat kijiye...... Jitni dedi hein utna hi kaafi hein.... bye!

A: E-ek m-minute Guddan.......

There was no answer but the call was still going.

A: Mein..... m-ein w-woh divorce papers ke baare-----

G: Bas aapka sign chahiye... Phir hum dono iss majboor rishtey se azad!

A: Guddan meri baat---

G: Ab aapka aur baat sunna humse na ho payega.......

With that she hanged up.

*Present*

What Guddan said was true. All of it was true. The truth was before his eyes the whole time but he still chose to ignore it. For what cost? A past love and guilt. Both of which were just an illusion.

Dadi entered the room and saw Akshat holding the Guddan's Mangalsootra and her Kangan. He was lifeless.

D: Lalla......

A: (without looking at her) Bohat badi gunah hogayi humse, Maa.... I have done a sin which cannot be forgiven. I always said to Guddan that I will always believe her and I will always stay by her side but now.... The great Akshat Jindal who hates lies and broken promises did just that. That to, to a beautiful person a man could ever have.

D: Lalla.... pata hein... aur ab humein iss gunah ki prayachit karni hein......

A: Kaise Maa?

D: Guddan ko wapas bulao!

Akshat smiled sadly.

A: How can I Maa? Kaise mein usse yahan bulao? Kis haq se? Pati ke haq se ya ek dost ke haq se... donon mein kho chuki hu.... The truth is that I don't deserve Guddan......

D: Lalla.... Don't say that.... You both deserve each other. Mistakes happen in relationships, Lalla... and we have to rectify that,before its too late........

A: She doesn't even want to talk to me and now this divorce......... What can I do?

D: Ask your heart, Lalla..... For a time, ask yourself what you should do? Jawab apne aap miljayege....

With that Dadi left her son alone. Here Akshat was thinking on how to get his wife and his right back? What he doesn't know is that he has a long way to go.

Finally Part - 5 completed! How was it? Hope you guys like it. Be sure to like and comment.

Now its time for Akshat Jindal to gain his wife back at any cost. The question is Will he succeed? What do you guys think?

Stay tuned for more updates and keep loving this FF. Till then,this is Pooh, signing off~ Toodles!🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#64

Superb update👏

Eagerly waiting to read to read how will Akshat maano his Guddan now

Thanks for giving back to back update😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

Superb

Now what will akshat do

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#66

Amazing

Next part ke liye wait nhi ho rha continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
#67

Awesome

Waiting to read more

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Posted: 6 years ago
#68

Nice update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#69

Awesome,

Akshan conversation are very good

Waiting for next part

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: srain10

Superb update👏

Thank you

Eagerly waiting to read to read how will Akshat maano his Guddan now

Akshat should try really hard for that

Thanks for giving back to back update😊

You're welcome but that's cause I have time now

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