JO DIL MAI HAI (SS) part 6(last part) updated 6 june 2019 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 123g

Most probably today itself

Waiting😒

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part:4

After leaving her at Gupta house…full day he was checking his phone after every five minutes…but there was no call or any message from her..

@Gupta House

Here guddan told everything to revti and she also joins her hand with guddan…

Gudd: chutki jra pta kr ki angad ji kha hai..aur agr wo resturant mai hai to bol ki jindal sahab ke office mai jakr bethe..

Rev: diii…..ab isse kya hoga…

Gudd: hum dikhate hai na kya hoga…

So she told angand to do so…

Ang: bhaii…

Aj: haa ayo..kya hua..

Ang: kch nahi bhai…..aap thk ho naa..

Aj(confused): haa mai thk hu….mujhe kya hoga..

Ang: haa.. aap thk hai……nahi wo bhabhi chali gyi naa aaj..

Aj: haa to kya hua…

Ang(pov): kha fsa diya mujhe..ye to bhabhi k jane ke baad aur dangerous ho gye hai..kese dekh rhe hai mujhe….

And then he received a video call from revti…

Rev: angad ji mai aur dii na shopping ja rhe hai…aap bhi aa jate to..wo kya hai na di hmari dresses colour coordinate karna chati hai..

Ang: haa haa kyu nahi….

Here akshat was so desperate to see in his phone so he can have atleast a glimpse of his wife…but to his annoyance angad was keeping it close to his face..

Aj: angadddd…..kya hai ye kese pakda hua hai phone…

Both angad and revti get shocked…

Ang: kya hua bhai..

Aj:(composes himself) I mean thoda dur se baat kro..phone ko itna pass nahi rakhte…

Here guddan was rolling on bed on listening this….she really have him on her tips…

Guddan signal revti..

Rev: jiju se baat karwaiye..

Rev: jiju…aap…

Aj: haa mai bhi..

Rev: aap angad ji ko permission de dijiye…aap to ayenge nahi..dii ne btaya ki aap nahi jate ese shopping pr…

At this aj was so frustrated that all was on it face ..he just noded…guddan who was watching him by hiding can see that…

As he was turning his face from screen guddan take phone from revti..

Gudd: wese agar aap chaho to aa sakte ho…hmara matlab hai ki hum bhi colour coordinate ho sakteee..haaii…..agar aap …

Aj: tumhe to sab pta hai na mere bare mai…fr mai kese aa sakta hu..nahi mai nahi aa rha Angad hi aa jyegaa..

And he cut the call and returned phone to angad..

Gudd: dekha chutki…humesa..humesa ese hi karte hai..humne bola na ane ke liye….lekin nahi khdoos kahi ke..

Rev: diii…aap bhi to pareshan kr rhi thin a unhe…

Guddan make faces..and they get ready for shopping..

Here,

As angad was going out ..and open the door AJ came from back and pass through it and without looking at him

Aj: gadi nikalo angad..der ho rahi hai..

Ang: bhaii aap to mna kar rhe…

Aj: meri patni guddan hai angad revti jesi seedhi sadi ladki nahi…to tumhari bhabhi ko ye tede tareeke hi samajh ate hai..

Angad noded his head …his bahi and bhabhi are playing their own games….

@At Mall:

Guddan's mood was off..but to cheer revti she was helping her with full enthusiasm..and then angad arrived...revti run towards him and bring him inside..both start selecting their dresses..

Ang: bhabhi aap bhi jyo naa kch dekh lo apne liye..

Guddan noded and went to select sarees...she saw a golden net saree...and start examine that...akshat came and stand behind her...

Aj: saree to bht sundar hai..lekin jab tum phnogi to aur b acchi lgegi..

Guddan being guddan thought she is dreaming about him..

Gudd: wese to aye nahi ..aur wese hume hr jagha dikhayi dete hai...ab to sunai bhi dene lge...

Aj was laughing at her talks..and then he look around and put his hand around her waist and pulled her to the corner...

Guddan was blinking her eyes due to sudden movements..

Gudd: aap....aap sach m aa gye...

Aj : tumne itne pyar se bola to mai kese nahi ata..

Guddan pushed him..

Gudd: subha to ese jhatt se...jhatt se mna kr diya...ye b nahi socha ki hme kesa lgega..

Aj again pulled her to him...

Aj : agr bta deta to ye jo khusi h tumhari ankho mai wo kese dekhta...

Gudd: khusi....wo..wo ..to hum phle se hi khus the....apke ane se kuch nahi hua .

Aj : haa tabhi to...muh latka tha tumhara...aur wo saree leni hai ya banani hai...kbse pakad ke khadi thi...

Gudd: wo to humne socha tha ki hum b color coordinate krke kapde phnege but aap to....aapko kya hai...bs hme preshan krna,hai..subha bola nahi ..to hume kesa..

She was looking cute while talking non-stop to him...Aj just lost in her and he lean down and slowly kissed her cheek...

Guddan stop talking and look at him in shock...she was red due to kiss and looking at him with wide eyes..

Aj : wo kya hai na subha ka udhar rh gya tha...socha abhi lauta du....

Guddan shyly looking at the floor...Aj was admiring her..

Two ladies came there...

Lady1: oohoo...ghar m romance karne ka time nahi milta to mall mai kr rhe hai..dekh dono ko...

Lady2: hayy kitna handsome pati hai iska...ese pati k sath to khi b romance ho jye..

Both guddan and Aj heard that and guddan pushed him and run from there...Aj then straight his blazer and clear his throat..first he walk slowly and then fastly to move out of their sight..

He spot other three and they buy their clothes..

As they finish shopping Aj signal Angad and he took revti to drop her home..

Guddan was unknown of this..

Gudd: hmari bhi puri shopping ho gyi..chutki aur angad ji kha h..

Aj was paying bills...and without looking at her..

Aj : wo ghr gye..papa ka call aya tha..

Gudd: To fir hum....hum kese jyenge..

Aj: shopping ho gyi naa ..tum ab ghr chlo..wha bhi kitni tayyariya karni hai...

(He was serious and not looking at her)

Looking at him..she thought..

Gudd: inhe kya hua..esi sakal bna rakhi hai mna bhi nahi kr sakte..

Gudd: thk h ..lekin hamara saman.

.Aj : wo angad le ayegaa..tum jakr gadi mai betho..

Guddan noded and left..

As she was out of the sight..

Aj: Acting to mai bhi buri nahi karta...ab subha tumne jo kiya ...jawab to mujhe b dena tha na...ab kese bhahogi mujhse...

He smriked and went to his wife who was waiting for him...


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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Akshan and their games

Loving it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Amazing. Eager to read more. Continue soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

AkshAn are so Adorbs

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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Bahut mast chapter hai

Loved it so so much

Next update v plz jaldi kr dena😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Amazing update

Akshan are playing own games on each other now let's see who wins this love game😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Dekha dekha Aj ne badla le liya...

Romance Karne ka tarika pasand Aya mujhe Aj ka...I so wish k kabhi mere yeh b Aisa kuch kare...

All the best guddan aj ne kuch to plan banaya hua hai....

Continue soon dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Superb update

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Amazing

Continue soon😊

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