Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed} - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
wow Akshat got scolded by his mother
plz update the next part today itself and plz make it a big one plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

EK CHOTU SA SUSPENSE UPDATE 😆


Chapter 8

Guddan enters and gets happy seeing her family. She puts all her things on the sofa and hugs her saasu maa.

Guddan: maa aap log aagaye. Kitna miss kiya aap sab ko

Maa: beta Tu theek hai. Kaisa hua exam. Aur tu kya bukhar se tap rahi hai.

Guddan: nai maa kuch bhi nai hai. Viva bahut acha hogaya ab bas jaldi se result aa jaye aur phir degree mil jaayegi.

Nimi: didi aapke liye chai lawun. Aur haan ye fridge main itna khana kaisa hai.

Guddan: nai mai nai piyungi chai. Wo khana mai ne kal banaya tha to thoda zyada ban gaya tha. Is kiye fridge main rakh diya.

Maa: acha baith jaa thak gayi hogi.

Guddan is about to sit and she feels dizzy. She holds her head and is about to fall but AJ catches her in time.

Akshat: guddan guddan (patting her cheek). Angad doctor ko jaldi phone kar.

He lays her down on the sofa and is rubbing her hand. The doctor arrived and AJ moved aside. Doctor checks her.

Doctor: Mr. Jindal inhe bukhar kabse hai

Akshat: kal se

Maa: lalla aur tune hume bataya bhi nai

Doctor: Mr. Jindal she is too stressed out. In ne khana b theek se nai khaya hai. She is too weak is liye chakar aagaya tha. Main dawaai likh rahi hun. Aap inhe wo time se de dena. Let her rest as much as she can.

Akshat: thankyou doctor. Angad inhe bahar chod k aa.

Maa leaves the room and calls someone.

Maa: theek main intezaar kar rahi hun. Aap jaldi se aa jaye. Then she goes back to the room.

Aarti: maa bhabhi ko achanak se kya hogaya. Wo theek to ho jayegi na.

Nimi: didi to is viva ko leke bahut zyada stressed thi. I hope Wo jaldi theek ho jayengi.

Maa: meri guddan jaldi theek ho jayegi. Aur uski sehat k liye maine ek faisla liya hai.
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SUSPENSE:
Who did Savitri Jindal call?
What has she decided?

Edited by Akshan5148 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
Both Parts Are Superb
Update Soon
Edited by nahtani88 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Loved it
Plz update next part soon and clear the suspense
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Loved it

Plz update next part soon and clear the suspense



Think and guess😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
Has she called her mother or someone whom Akshat would be jealous (seeing him and Guddan ) together with ?
Awesome continue soon 😆😃
Edited by DivyankaTD - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Akshan5148

EK CHOTU SA SUSPENSE UPDATE 😆


Chapter 8

Guddan enters and gets happy seeing her family. She puts all her things on the sofa and hugs her saasu maa.

Guddan: maa aap log aagaye. Kitna miss kiya aap sab ko

Maa: beta Tu theek hai. Kaisa hua exam. Aur tu kya bukhar se tap rahi hai.

Guddan: nai maa kuch bhi nai hai. Viva bahut acha hogaya ab bas jaldi se result aa jaye aur phir degree mil jaayegi.

Nimi: didi aapke liye chai lawun. Aur haan ye fridge main itna khana kaisa hai.

Guddan: nai mai nai piyungi chai. Wo khana mai ne kal banaya tha to thoda zyada ban gaya tha. Is kiye fridge main rakh diya.

Maa: acha baith jaa thak gayi hogi.

Guddan is about to sit and she feels dizzy. She holds her head and is about to fall but AJ catches her in time.

Akshat: guddan guddan (patting her cheek). Angad doctor ko jaldi phone kar.

He lays her down on the sofa and is rubbing her hand. The doctor arrived and AJ moved aside. Doctor checks her.

Doctor: Mr. Jindal inhe bukhar kabse hai

Akshat: kal se

Maa: lalla aur tune hume bataya bhi nai

Doctor: Mr. Jindal she is too stressed out. In ne khana b theek se nai khaya hai. She is too weak is liye chakar aagaya tha. Main dawaai likh rahi hun. Aap inhe wo time se de dena. Let her rest as much as she can.

Akshat: thankyou doctor. Angad inhe bahar chod k aa.

Maa leaves the room and calls someone.

Maa: theek main intezaar kar rahi hun. Aap jaldi se aa jaye. Then she goes back to the room.

Aarti: maa bhabhi ko achanak se kya hogaya. Wo theek to ho jayegi na.

Nimi: didi to is viva ko leke bahut zyada stressed thi. I hope Wo jaldi theek ho jayengi.

Maa: meri guddan jaldi theek ho jayegi. Aur uski sehat k liye maine ek faisla liya hai.
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.
.

SUSPENSE:
Who did Savitri Jindal call?
What has she decided?

Superr story...thank u dear...ye dil maange more 😆plzzz jaldi se next part update karna...by the way give a title to your story dear...it's amazing
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Nice chapter
I think akshat's mother will sent her to her father's house

So that akshat will realize guddan's value

Can't wait to read further

Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: vinlora

Superr story...thank u dear...ye dil maange more 😆plzzz jaldi se next part update karna...by the way give a title to your story dear...it's amazing


Title given. Check out and let me know how is it. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#70
awesome update dear
loved it
whom did she call is it anyone who will make aj jealous
please do continue soon

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