Akshan ff ek anokha rishta Chapter 16 Pg 22 - Page 13

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Chit15

Amazing update

Flashback scene was really good
Guddan was heart broken but waiting for Akshat pov for more clarity


Thanks dear😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: manali9796

Amazing ff dear

Continue soon


Thank you dear😊😊

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update

Love it
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Posted: 6 years ago
AJ is so naughty naughty even in this state
I wonder what will he do when he recovers šŸ˜‰

Flashback story was nice

lets see what Rawat uncle brings

excited for the next part šŸ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

AJ is so naughty naughty even in this state

I wonder what will he do when he recovers šŸ˜‰

Flashback story was nice

lets see what Rawat uncle brings

excited for the next part šŸ˜›


Thank you captain 😊😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
Part - 14
Everything going well in akshan life guddan was taking really good care of akshat due to which akshat was some how behave normally out side the house

Bhusan and ronak some time come to meet guddan they are happy seeing guddan living happily with her in laws

The little doubt they have towards akshat how will he treat guddan due to his mental state vanished after seeing how much he love guddan don't like tears in her eyes like him

Ronak and akshat form a very good bond whenever ronak come akshat was very happy and both will play cricket in garden as akshat love to play cricket

Guddan was getting ready as she and akshat have to go visit some of their relatives home as they doing a puja for their new home first guddan was reculant to go their but then she thought it will be a good idea as akshat will get a chance to mix with other people

So that he won't feel uncomfortable with outsiders as many time due to this akshat some times act violently

Akshat went to guddan and hug from behind

A- pari tum aaj kitni beautiful lag rahi ho

G- thank you babu vaise aap bhi handsome lag rahe ho

He was nuzzling her neck due to his Beard she feels tickles

G- akshat rukiye apka Beard tickle kar raha hai

She then look his face his Beard grow very much she decided to trim his Beard so that he will look good

She made him seat in front of the mirror then she take out the trimer from the drawer

A- pari tum kya karogi iska isse to boys istimal karte hai

G- pata hai yeh apka Beard trim karne ke liye hai kitna badh gya hai

She tuck a towel in his shirt start to trim his Beard after some time she finish it akshat now looking very good akshat happily thanks guddan

Then both went to their relatives home they welcome them Akshan settled down where other guests are seating

Puja over after some time all are having prasad some woman come to guddan and start to talking with her with fake sympathetic tone

W1- beta teri umar kitni hai

G- ji 23 years hai mujhe

W2- haye kitni choti umar hai tumhari vaise tumhre ma baba tumse pyar nahi karte kya

G- ji aunty wo mujhe apne jaan se bhi jyada pyar karte hai

W3- pyar karte na tumhri shadi aise pagal upar se 3 shadi shuda beton ka baap se shadi nahi kara dete

W1- jis umar main tumhe bahu bana chahiye uss umar main tum saas ban gayi

Guddan look towards akshat thank God he was busy in eating prasad otherwise he will be hurt before guddan can said anything

W2- beta tu akshat ki chod kyun nahi deti teri puri zindagi padi hai yeh tujhe wo sari khusi nahi de sakta jo ek patni ko chahiye

G- sorry aunty par main apki yeh advice nahi maan sakti yeh mera decision hai Akshat se shadi karna aur rahi baat khusi ki jo khusi yeh pagal ho kar mujhe de rahe hai koi normal insaan nahi de sakta I am proud of him so next time se aap logo ka free advice usse dijiye jisse iski jyada jaroorat ho

With that she take akshat after say goodbye to their relatives went to jindal mension

Jindal mension

Akshan enter inside guddan saw a man seating on the sofa talking to dadi akshat immediately went to him and hug him guddan get confused seeing this

S- guddan beta aa inse mil yeh antra ka hai hai vikram rawat cbi officer hai

As antra dide in cancer rawat don't have any hard feelings toward akshat after his accident vikram whenever possible come to visit him after saru and dadi akshat was close to vikram all these year

A- vikaram wo dekho meri pari aab wo meri biwi hai wo mujhe kabhi akela chod ke nahi jayegi

V- acha yeh baat hai

A- ha pari aao na vikram se milo vikaram tum pari se baat karo main apne kapde change kar leta hu

Akshat then went to his room guddan went to vikram and greet him

V- namste guddan ji to aap hai jinhone humari behen ki jaga li hai

G- hum ne antra ji ki jagha nahi li na kabhi le sakte hai hum iss ghar main khud ki ek alag jagha banayenge

S- vikram beta mujhe pata hai tujhe kaisa lag raha hoga antra ki jagha kiss aur ko dekh kar par guddan bahot achi ladki hai

V- nahi ma ji hume bura nahi lag raha bas hum antra ko miss kar rahe hai

G- to aap hume apni choti behen maan lijiye humara ek chota bhai hai to hume ek bada bhai ka pyar mil jayega kyun vikram bhaiya

Vikaram get emotional hearing bhai from guddan

G- humne koi galat kaha kya sorry apko bura laga ki humne apko bhai bulaya

V- nahi guddan ji antra ke jane ke baad aaj kisine hume pyar se bhai kaha sach ma ji ek dum sahi ladki chuna apne akshat ke liye guddan ji aap hume bhai bula sakti hai apke jaise behen pana humara soubhagya hoga

G- to apko bhi hume sirf guddan kehena hoga

V- thik hai hum tumhe choti bulayenge jaise antra ko bulate the
Both hug each other dadi was happy seeing them vikaram want to go as he was staying in hotel but guddan request him to leave with them so vikram call his assistant to come their with his luggage

Guddan then went to her room to change dadi call a servant and order him to clean guest room for vikaram

On the other hand durga was pacing to and fro in her room

D- yeh sab kya ho raha hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi arah hai iss guddan ko main layi thi apna kaam karwane ke liye par yeh hai ki aj ko thik karne main lagi hui hai mujhe kuch na kuch karna hoga nahi to mera sara plan kharab ho jayega

Durga then call the doctor of akshat

D- suno uss medicine ka ek higher dose bhej do

Do- par mam main ne kaha tha ki wo medicine aap high dose main mat dijiye aj ki jaan ko khatra hi sakta hai

D- issliye main ne high dose dena band kardi thi magar abhi uski jarrorat hai tumhe paise mil rahe hai na to apna kaam karo

She hung up the call and smirk evilly

D- kisiko nahi pata ki main aj ko galat medicine de rahi hoon taki wo thik na ho paye bas dekhte jao akshat jindal main kaise tumhae barbad karti hoon

She smile madly at it

That's it friends

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Durga ki evil plan ke bare main to apko thodi pata chal gayi jude rahi yeh ek anokha rishta ke saath chudail ki puri razz janne ke liye



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Posted: 6 years ago
I liked Guddan and Rawat's bonding here.
Uff these aunties, I loved how Guddan replied them and shut their mouth.
I so knew Durga was giving AJ wrong medicines, hope Guddan catches her
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update sanvi
I guess maybe Guddu will eat the medicine or will expose Durga
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved Rawat and guddan bonding
I dont understand y this mohalle wali aunty interferes in another person's life Guddu tackled them well
So durga is the reason behind Akshat's condition
hope Rawat and guddu together flops her plan
waiting for the next chapter
continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon

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