Akshan ff ek anokha rishta Chapter 16 Pg 22

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello friends thanks for your response it encourage me a lot

Prologue

A house was decorated beautiful a beautiful mandap also ready for a marriage the guests are gossiping around on the brides room some girls are getting her ready she is looking beautiful but their was sadness in her eyes but she is hiding it the barat arrived the girls went to see barat once the bride left alone she start to cry

B- lord krishna aapne aisa kyun kia jab maine unko chaha unse pyaar kia tab apne unhe mujhse chin liya jab mein unko bhulana chahti thi phir unhe mere same la diya o bhi iss tarha ye shadi mera sapna tha par iss tarha nahi

Soon the bride taken to mandap where the groom waiting for her when she come their with her friends the groom grab her hand literally pulled her to seat beside him

G- pari kanha thi itni der koi lagta hai kya jaldi betho phir hum shadi karenge aur tum aab humesha mere paas rahogi

The bride just look at him with teary eyes she can't see her dream man in this mental state

So please comment how it is

Index - prologue - page 1

Cs- page 1

Part 1 - page 2

Part 2- page 3

Part 3- page 4

Part 4- page 4

Part 5- page 5

Part 6-page 6

Part 7- page 7

Part 8- page 8

Part 9- page 8

Part 10- Page 9

Part 11- page 11

Part 12- page 13

Part 13- page 15

Part 14- page 17

Part 15- page 20

Part 16- page 22

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome prologue
Love it
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very interesting plot!
M looking forward to d next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fantastic prologue Sanvika👏
Can't wait for the next part😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello friends here is the character sketch
Jindal's

Akshat jindal- the famous and rich chef of indore owner of jindal restaurant in an accident he lost his mental balance

Savitri jindal- Akshat's mother a loving lady she is very much worried for akshat's health

Kishor jindal- Akshat's elder son he is an architect working in another company as he want to independent

Durga jindal- kishor's wife she always want to control everyone and the entire property for herself

Vardaan jindal - second son of akshat he is looking after the restaurant after akshat's condition a joru ka gulam types

Laxmi jindal- vardaan's wife very cunning only want money control her husband in every way she is durga's puppet

Saraswati jindal- Akshat's third daughter in law due to some fight her husband rahul leave the house after that akshat let her live in the house like his daughter she is positive in my ff

Gupta's

Guddan gupta- a bubbly chirpy girl she want to became a fashion designer but due to her step mother she leave her studies after her junior college

Kaushalya gupta- guddan's step mother don't like her but always pretend to love her

Bhusan gupta- guddan's father in an accident he lost his leg and now he is in wheel chair

Ronak gupta- guddan's step younger brother love guddan very much he is very protective towards guddan

Will soon update the first part

Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

Hello friends here is the character sketch

Jindal's

Akshat jindal- the famous and rich chef of indore owner of jindal restaurant in an accident he lost his mental balance

Savitri jindal- Akshat's mother a loving lady she is very much worried for akshat's health

Kishor jindal- Akshat's elder son he is an architect working in another company as he want to independent

Durga jindal- kishor's wife she always want to control everyone and the entire property for herself

Vardaan jindal - second son of akshat he is looking after the restaurant after akshat's condition a joru ka gulam types

Laxmi jindal- vardaan's wife very cunning only want money control her husband in every way she is durga's puppet

Saraswati jindal- Akshat's third daughter in law due to some fight her husband rahul leave the house after that akshat let her live in the house like his daughter she is positive in my ff

Gupta's

Guddan gupta- a bubbly chirpy girl she want to became a fashion designer but due to her step mother she leave her studies after her junior college

Kaushalya gupta- guddan's step mother don't like her but always pretend to love her

Bhusan gupta- guddan's father in an accident he lost his leg and now he is in wheel chair

Ronak gupta- guddan's step younger brother love guddan very much he is very protective towards guddan

Will soon update the first part


Continue soon 😛😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow interesting character sketch.
I m really curious to know how Akshan met each other and fell for each other, and how AJ met with accident. Btw is Antra AJ's first wife in this FF?
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome prologue

Love it
Update soon


Thanks will update soon
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Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Fantastic prologue Sanvika 👏

Can't wait for the next part😊


Thank you so much
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Originally posted by: randomfancrics

Wow interesting character sketch.
I m really curious to know how Akshan met each other and fell for each other, and how AJ met with accident. Btw is Antra AJ's first wife in this FF?


Thank you for your response will soon update the next part
And yes antar will be Akshat's first wife

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