Akshan ff ek anokha rishta Chapter 16 Pg 22 - Page 11

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Posted: 6 years ago
haila ! e ka kua ? 😲
excited for next part 😛

please update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hailaaa 😲😲😲
Eee Ka hui gawa. Or kaise to poochne tumne mana Kar Diya sanu😆😆😆




But that was really heartwarming finalllyyy...😳😳 they r one

Ab bus babu ki galat thik ho Jaye to sone pe suhaga hoga.




Or jahan tak sawaal h late update Ka I understand that kyonki hamara second year hai ...😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Chit15

Good update

Durga is defined behind the condition of Akshat
Guddan and AJ toh ek hogaya ab dekhe ab aage kya hota hai


Thank you dear

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: randomfancrics

Oh okay wow I didn't expect that at all
It was totally unexpected 😆
Akshat naughty naughty 😉
Akshat ki Pari bhi kam nahi 😛
Will be waiting for next update 😊


Thank you so much jo😆😆

Kya kare hume dono naughty naughty hi pasand hai😉😉

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Hailaaa 😲😲😲

Eee Ka hui gawa. Or kaise to poochne tumne mana Kar Diya sanu😆😆😆

😆


But that was really heartwarming finalllyyy...😳😳 they r one

Ab bus babu ki galat thik ho Jaye to sone pe suhaga hoga.

Dekhte jaiye madam picture abhi baki hai😆


Or jahan tak sawaal h late update Ka I understand that kyonki hamara second year hai ...😆
Ha yaar sahi kaha tumne phir bhi main jaldi update karne ki koshis karungi


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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: captainplus

haila ! e ka kua ? 😲

excited for next part 😛

please update soon...😳


Thank you captain

I am glad you like it
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Posted: 6 years ago

Will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Finally akshan become one
I honestly feel Durga tampered ajs medicine
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Part-13
Next morning

Sun ray peep through akshan bedroom both are sleeping cuddling to each other just then guddan's sleep broke

She saw akshat cuddling to her like a baby she smile then their moment of last night come to her mind she blush at it they are now husband wife in all sense

She kiss akshat's forehead lightly then remember the most beautiful yet painful memory of them in Delhi

Flash back

After the cooking compitition guddan start to have soft corner towards akshat she never tired of talking about him Elena and revati always tease her in name of akshat
Due to akshat's guidance guddan start to do work without mistake

One day akshat guddan went to some shopping for the restaurant after finishing it they start to look for a taxi but can't found one so they decide to walk for some distance then definitely they will find a taxi

They are walking while guddan start a conversation with akshat

G- sir love ko leke apka kya khayaal hai

A- aaj achanak aisa sawal

G- bas aise hi boliye na

A- pyar koi kehne ki cheez nahi hai pyar ko mehsos kiya jata hai words nahi hote usse describe karne ke liye ek heavenly feeling hoti hai yeh

Guddan was very impressed by his view

G- aap apne wife se bhot pyar krte the na

A- ha ussi ne mujhe pyar ka sahi matlab samjhaya tha aaj bhi jab love ki baat hoti hai usse miss karta hu vaise tumhara kya khyal hai kiss se pyar vyar hua hai kya

G- abhi tak to nahi par intizaar hai uss insaan ka jo hume apne aaap se jayada payar kare bahot romantic ho hume date pe le jaye

A- tum girl's aur thumare dreams

G- jindal sahab dreams dekhna women's rights nahi human rights hai

A- acha to jab aapko pyar ho jayega na guddan ji bata dijiyega ki apki yeh fairy tale love story puri hui ki nahi

Both laugh at it they get a taxi and went to restaurant

Later at night guddan again and again recalling about akshat and their conversation she close her eyes and saw akshat smiling at her she open her eyes she went near the window she start to recall her moment with akshat

G- yeh kya ho raha hai hume kyun bar bar unhike yaad aa raha hai kahi hum

She then put her hand on her heart

G- hume unse pyar ho gaya hai yes pyar karte hai hum sir nahi akshat hume akshat se pyar ho gaya hai

She slept smiling with her love realization next day she was just smiling like anything both her friends are amused seeing her

E- revati dekh rahi ho madam kitna chehk rahi hai

R- ha ha guddan madam hume bhi batao apka hasi ka raaj

E- kahni yeh hasi apke sir ji ke karan ti nahi

Guddan blush hearing his name her friend look at her teasingly

G- gyus I think

E R- you think

G- I am in love

Both shout and hug her tightly

R- so kya wo lucky guy kanhi apke jindal sir to nahi

G- ha

E-wow yaar congrats aur ha tu apni feelings unse jaldi share kar le

G- nahi agar unhe bura laga to wo humse dosti bhi tod denge

R- yaar dar mat apni feelings baata de unhe tu janti hai na dar ke aaage jeet hai so go for it

Guddan Decide to tell her feelings to akshat she went to restaurant start her work when akshat come she just staring at him Akshat went toher wave his hand infront of her she come out of her dream land

A- kanha kho gayi tum

G- aaap main

A- kya

G- kanhi nahi sir

A- good aab kam pe lago

Akshat went from their guddan just staring at his retiring figure in a dream look

G- haye jindal sahab kuch kuch hota hai aap nahi samjhoge

Guddan smile at his own thought she then went to akshat and invite him for dinner akshat agreed

Guddan went Early to her apartment Elena revati went out wishing her luck

She prepare dinner then get ready wearing a simple salwar kameez start to wait for akshat

At 8 pm akshat come their he gave her a rose bouquet guddan take it happily akshat settled down the sofa

Guddan come with drinks both have it while talking akshat praise about her apartment she thank him then both went

Guddan serv the dinner akshat surprise to see the dishes

A- wow itna sara item tumne banaya

G- ha aap khake bataiye kaise bana hai

Both sat down then guddan serve them akshat take a bite it was really good

A- umm bhaot hi acha khana banaya hai tumne mana padega bahot jaldi sikh gayi tum

G- thank you sir

After dinner guddan request akshat to dance with her akshat first hesitate the. Agree

Akshat hold her from waist guddan put her hand in his shoulder both start to dance on the rhythm of the song

Tu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar ja
Main khwab khwab sa teri
Aankhon mein jaagun re

Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss ore main bhaagun re

Na na...

Haath thaam le piya
Karte hain vaada
Ab se tu aarzu
Tu hi hai iraada

Mera naam le piya
Main teri rubaai
Teri hi tto piche piche
Barsaat aayi, barsaat aayi

Tu itrr itrr sa mere
Saanson mein bikhar jaa
Main faqeer tere qurbat ka
Tujhse tu maangun re

Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss ore main bhaagun re
They finished the dance both have a intes eye lock akshat then broke it when he about to turn

G- sir apne kaha tha na ki jab main kiss se pyar karu to apko batau

A- wow yeh to achi baat hai bolo kaun hai wo ladka

G- wo mere samne khade hai

A- guddan yeh tum

G- ha akshat ji hume aapse pyar ho gaya hai I love you

A- nahi guddan yeh pyar nahi bas tumhara teenage crush hai

G- nahi yeh koi crush nahi hai hum dil se aap se pyar karte hai

A- but main tumhare liye aisa kuch bhi feel nahi karta mera pyaar sirf antra thi aur antra hi rahegi

With this akshat went from their after he went guddan collapse on the floor cry her heart out after two hour Elena revati come their they are shocked to see guddan they immediately seat beside her hug her tightly she tell them everything they console her

Next day guddan woke up and went to restaurant she thought to apologize to akshat and tell him to be her friend like before but she get another shock their

Akshat left to indore early morning after appointed a new manager she shattered her last hope died their

After that she conectarte in her studies she some time cry remembering akshat she leave her job in jindal restaurant

Soon her final exam finished she didn't want to go home as akshat will be their and they will definitely meet being at same city

Soon her result come she secure very good mark she want to go to a fashion designing college but before she can do anything

She get a call that her papa meet with an accident she immediately went to indore then she come to know that her father can't able to walk kaushalya blackmail her so she left her dream and start to help her mom

She was thinking that what if she meet with akshat but to her surprise she didn't meet him

Flash back end

Guddan come out of her thought then she went to washroom after bathing she come out and saw akshat was up

G- good morning

A- good morning pari tum ne naha bhi liya chalo na kal jo kiya tha wo karte hai

Guddan blush

G- badmash abhi nahi subha yeh sab nahi hota aur ha aaj jo hua kiss ko mat kehena

A- main itna dumb nahi hoon mujhe pata hai yeh husband wife ka secret hai varna shame shame ho jayega

Guddan laugh then akshat get ready both went down stairs their family are back they greet them dadi and saru saw a different glow in guddan both understand what must have happen

Both are happy for Akshan now no one can separate them

That's it friend

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Flash back main Guddan ka point of view hai akshat ke side ka story jab wo thik hoga pata chalega

Aur han humare hindi bolne wale maha guru ki entry hone wali hai par don't worry wo positive honge yaha
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome amazing sanvi👏
Story reveal hui and Akshat's dialogue were😆

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