My Redemption- AkshAnSS (Part 7 Pg18 Updtd 15 Dec) *COMPLETED*

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Pratiksha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Omg ...how can i thank u for this ...i really want to read this type of stories thank u nish u r the best🤗

This is really amazing...

Plz plzplz update next part cant wait for it 😳

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nish_vir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan
Nishhh Diii ⭐️ This was such a wonderful plot and loved the emotions Guddan was engrossed with ...
As for AJ...that Dutta brutally injured him 😭😡
Please continue this beautiful piece of writing to three shots or even more ... I can't wait to read further 🥱
Guddan's love will bring her AJ back from the clutches of 😭
Had this been a vice-versa (Guddan in place of AJ) I would have loved it more 😆😛
But nevermind, I just want to know what happens further 😳
Update soon and thanks to whosoever had asked u for this writeup😃

Thanks Raglak. Its always a pleasure to read reader's views. It brings me absolute satisfaction😃

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Hi Nish

Fanstatic n beautifully written story

It was very heart wrenching to read about the state AJ is in & too see all the emotions & stats of Guddan

I love your version of the kidnapping track, Guddan realizes her mistake

Please update soon

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nish_vir

@nish_vir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: kayafever
Nishu yrrr 😳
Pls make it a two shot agar second update long Hoga to BHI chalega pls

Glad to know that you liked it @kaya😃

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nish_vir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Memorable_ERA
Hey Nish dear
It's such a realistic fantastically written peice of art absolutely Mind blowing. ..
I guess the Redemption you are talking here is of Guddan which is bound to happen in the show at some point of time
I want to kill that bloody Dutta...how dare he
The way u described AJ being attacked by Dutta was deeply painful
Guddan's helplessness looked every bit real
Please Continue this in as many shots as you can (The more the merrier )
Need some lengthier updates
Thanks for writing this
Please keep writing forever
I am actually an avid reader of all your Fantastic writings & a silent lurker in this lovely forum.
Just don't get the time to comment
ERA

Glad to know that you decided to break your silence😃 , either it was because this part was so damn good that you couldn't resist the temptation to comment ( wishful me😆) or you thought 'what if this arrogant writer discontinues the story just bcoz her demands weren't met (no offence😆), either way I am happy to read your views😃

Eveeytime I read views like yours, it fills me with the motivation to keep going on..

So thank you for your kind views😃 (and keep up with the good act of commenting😆)

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1154991

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Oh!I am too curious to know what happens ahead ...

Please update today Di🤗

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nish_vir

@nish_vir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Chit15
Ohho wow it's so good
You have beautifully written scenes of Guddan and the pain can be clearly be feeled
Please continue soon.

Thank you 🤗

I'll be updating tomorrow ;) so keep watching...