Missing Moment OS - Pain-dant aur IPS Grade Nakhre!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Coming up by 3pm.

Missing conversations OS.

Wohoooo!

The title itself seems interesting🤣

Waiting!!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yeh toh cheating hai 😒.

I thought I can read one now 😒. Will wait for it .

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waiting impatiently. Nakhre of raja babu, looking forward to it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome!!!

The innocence and selflessness of Sai can be noticed from the dialogues!👍🏼

Well written dear! Loved it😳

Such conversations make SaiRat more real!!

Great! Thank u for letting me know by the tag....🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing 😍😍😍

Love how they actually talked about it ❤️❤️

And Virat’s tantrums🤣🤣

The pillow fort is gone 🥳🥳

Loved it ❣️❣️

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Lovely OS 🥰🥰


“Chali gayi?!” he whispered, staring at the curtains in shock, unaware that he was mimicking the exact pose his wife did whenever he took her words at face value and left her alone.

Sangati ka asar h 🤣🤣

“Oh hello! Tum hoti kaun ho mujhe aise khilanewali? Mai ek IPS officer hu!” Virat snapped, getting up and trying to stare her down.

IPS officer hoga tu apne police station me Veeru par teri biwi Gadchiroli ki sherni h jiske samne tu bhegi billi h 🤪🤪

Seeing him watch her quietly, she went on, “Aapko pata hai, Aaba ne bhi muhe se seekh di hai bachpan se, ki humaari kisi bhi cheez se koi aur humse zyada khush ho jaaye, ya humse zyada woh cheez koi aur ke kaam aa jaaye, toh woh hume unko de dena chahiye...main bus woh hi kara, Virat Sir… Mai aapke tohfe se bohot, bohot khush thi! Lekin agar uss se aapke Kaku, jinko aap itne maante hai, unko khushi milti, toh mujhe bhi woh hi karna chahiye tha na?”

I just love her big heart and innocence 🤗🤗 she is just sooo sweet

And finally the Singarh Kila got demolished 😋 😋

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Great update! Love it. ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awwww. Just made my day.

I love how natural their conversation sounds in every OS of yours. I won't lie, though I enjoyed the complete OS but the moment when they were sitting on the bed and Virat said something sweet and Sai being Sai turned it into comedy and little nok jhonk amazed me. Just how much you understand them both, their characters and their bond❤️

Whenever I read your OS, it seems like I can picture everything before my eyes. I can visualise them talking and their love just flows through each and every word of your stories. And not just their characters, every little detail that adds to the realism of it 👏👏👏👏without giving it the monotonous feel that can be a side effect of too much realism. Your stories are like well-defined birds with wings of colourful fancy but sharp flight of reality. Simply wonderful ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Awwww. Just made my day.

I love how natural their conversation sounds in every OS of yours. I won't lie, though I enjoyed the complete OS but the moment when they were sitting on the bed and Virat said something sweet and Sai being Sai turned it into comedy and little nok jhonk amazed me. Just how much you understand them both, their characters and their bond❤️

Whenever I read your OS, it seems like I can picture everything before my eyes. I can visualise them talking and their love just flows through each and every word of your stories. And not just their characters, every little detail that adds to the realism of it 👏👏👏👏without giving it the monotonous feel that can be a side effect of too much realism. Your stories are like well-defined birds with wings of colourful fancy but sharp flight of reality. Simply wonderful ❤️


This comment made my day, truly, Cheeku!❤️

I admit, I picture them in my head when writing, and then they speak and I just take down the notes.. not sure if that makes sense. 😳

I love these two flawed human beings who as flawless together and love exploring their hidden depths... and so the stories flow! ☺️

Thanks dear... for these lovely words! And Cheeks, this is pure poetry "Your stories are like well-defined birds with wings of colourful fancy but sharp flight of reality. "


Thanks again!

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