Sairat Drabble: Aftermath - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful! The angst of an emotional separation while still being in close proximity, would actually love to see something similar on the show even if not during this track but at some point in the future too.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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so beautiful no words

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow,it was amazing yaar.

You made Sai stand, you made her calculative and hopeful here,and these are signs of trust,that Sai has here on her relationship. I loved that Sai didn't try to be impulsive.

Poor Virat,he might be in so much pain, with his vile family's deeds ,but he has a strong support now. Loved how you played with the emotions in a different way.

Pls write more❤❤🤗

P.S.:Sorry,wasn't able to check the tags,as I had said earlier ,was not available, aur mere phone ka battery bhi mar gaya tha do din se,sorry😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am amazed at how beautifully you portray their emotions. You know what in your drabble, Sairat seem lovelier than in the serial sometimes. It seems like they are never Sai and Virat but Sairat always❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is the first story I read on this forum since I never got much time to read the wonderful stories created by authors here.

I saw the title Aftermath and got curious thinking that it might be connected to separation.

Amazing write up. This is the way they should take the story ahead rather than blindly going KD way. I hope they chose to stick to this kind of track aftermath.

This is so simple yet brilliantly written. Awesome.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bana

This is way better than any separation track they could come up with. Her staying back is much more in keeping with the growth in Sai’s maturity (oops sorry for the foul lsnguage 🤣) and in the Sairat relationship. Wonderful!


Being greedy here but wish u could have developed this drabble into a more detailed FF 😃


If only he lets her to stay then it will work... But he is going to throw her out and even stopped from having food also only to regret for a life time... Becoz she is going to let him face worst than what he can bear...

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