Dhushman bhi dost banjatha hai(OS)Holi hai- final part- page 7 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Justasuperbgirl

Really enjoyed the sweet little ending👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼 Felt really nice seeing Sai pour out her feelings❤❤ and Virat turned out to be quite smart😁. Loved the fact that Pakhi wasn't eavesdropping or doing something creepy and SaiRat got to spend some time alone away from all the mess.

And at last, thankyou so much for keeping us entertained with this OS🥰🥰🥰

Thank you for lovely support... Pouring feeling is so needed for them.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Awwww,it was so damn amazing.

Itna khoobsurat aur amazing illogic ko koyi na kaise keh sakta hai. It was so wonderful.

Virat ko aapne kitttnnnnnaaaaaa intelligent banaaya,wow,I am amazed. Wonderful story.

Jija aur saale se bhi Viru tez nikla.

Pls,do write more❤❤

Thank... Waise virat is smart....humara CVS vusko dum banethe hai pakhi khe mamle mei

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aryamavaishnava

Mast ha mast..❤️❤️lovely update..the ending was very beautiful

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Nice update

So it was Virat’s plan😆

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

What a twist...!!! Loved the idea...viru is faster then mohit...hijacked the bhaang idea...!!! Thank you so much for update...please update the next part soon...want to know what is Sai’s reaction after bhaang effect gone...👍🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely story'. Please write more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Hi friends my plan is to complete this os in 3 parts but surprisingly last part came out to be so long, so divided into 2 chapters, so here is chapter 3

Chapter 3:

Virat crosses sai and is about to leave, when out of no where little harini comes and stands in front of virat crossing her hands across her chest, with a serious look.

Harini: mamu kaha jharahe ho mujhe chodke

Virat: kneel-downs on his knees, haru mujhe na thodasa kaam hai, jana padhega.

Harini: nahi mamu, aap ne muhje kal promise kiya hai na ki ,holi ke pura din aap mujhse keloge, tho phir kyu jharahe ho. Jhav cutiff hai apse.

Virat: haru, please aise maath bolo, tumko pata haina, tummamu ka favorite ho, plz mei yu gaya yu aaya..

Virat tries to convince her but she is like no no no with her head moving from left to right.

Sai: comes over to virat, virat sir aap ko jhane ki koi jarurath nahi hai, mei nahi chahthi meri vajhase koi bhi family member vudhasho, aap ruk sakthe hai mujhe koi problem nahi hai…..

Saying this she goes and stands side by aai. virat and Harini are so happy that her mamu is not leaving and gives hi-fi to virat. Both virat and haru applies colors on cheeks

Virat pov: sai is standing by aai. In her white dress(similar to the show dress but she has a cut similar to her yellow dress during alta episode, her waist is visible) she is looking like an angel. It's been one month last I saw her. Touching the pyaal (beautiful gold payal) he brought for her which are in his pocket, he thought to himself. Kya kya socha tha hamari pehali holi khaliye,kya hogaya, it's ok if not like husband, I will give these to her like a friend.

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Thinking this he walks towards sai with red color in his righthand and payal in his left hand. But before he could talk to her, Aniket applies yellow color on sai’s cheeks from behind shouting happy holi. Seeing this virat’sface turns red as if someone put a full bucket of red color water on him.

At some distance

Mohit: jiju yeh kya hogaya, yeh Aniket kaha se agaya beech mei

Pulkit: Aniket, Mr. obroi ka beta hai, vusine tho hume bulaya iss party mei.

Mohit: kuchtho karna padega, yes idea…. Bang, jiju bang pilathe hai

Saying this Mohit takes bang glass from table by his side, to sai, and sai drinks it thinking it is just lassi, he takes one glass to virat, and virat do bottoms up in frustration. After a while sai comes in bang ka naasha and starts to dance along with some of her friends and Aniket… Aniket about to apply more color on sai…looking all this virat gets even more frustrated and goes towards sai, pulls her even before Aniket applies color on her….

Virat pulls sai out of the crowd but he sees pakhi is about to come towards them, so in order to escape from her, he pulls sai to behind the stall…. And to stop sai from shouting he closes sai’s mouth with his hand, after looking around for few seconds, making sure pakhi or Aniket is not around he looks at sai and he realizes what he did….

Virat held sai by the waist so close that they can feel each other breath, one hand on her waist and one hand on her mouth which is separating his lips from her lips…and they lost in each other eyes (gusthak nazaromne dheka hai tum ko.... playing in background).... after few seconds sai distracts from the gaze and she sighs with her eyes to remove the hand on mouth and virat follows

Sai: virat sir aap yeh kya kar rahe hai , mei ithne ache se dance kar rahi thi Aniket ke saath (still in her intoxicated state)

Virat: haa haa dekha maine, uss Aniket ki himath kise hue thumhe color lagane ki, vho bhi mere hote huve…

Even in an intoxicated state, her heart is not able to handle this proximity and running like crazy, so she is trying to free herself from his grip but his grip is getting tighter.

Sai: aap bhi na virat sir , kuch bhi bolthe hai, color hetho lagaya….. saying this she frees herself from virat and is about to leave but virat holds her hand and pulls her towards him. Now her back is touching virat’s chest. Sai’s heart missed a beat with a sudden change in virat’s behavior.Sai felt virat’s breath on her neck which sent shivers in her spine……

Sai: virat sir?

Virat: shhh, sai agar thumhe color lagane ka hak kisiko hai vho sirf mujhe hai vho bhi aise… saying this virat rubs his cheeks to sai’s cheeks applying pink color, slowly he applies the red color which is in his hand on sai’s neck and slowly he caress sai’s hand from shoulder to elbow sending shivers to her, he puts his hand in sai’s dress slit and slowly applies red color on her bare waist, sai bites her under lip while Virat buries his face in her neck…slowly he turns sai to face him, sai is closing her eyes, seeing this virat couldn’t control himself and touched her eyes gently with his lips, and a small smile occurred on sai’s face, still gluing her to his body by holding her waist with one hand, he slowly raised her chin with other hand and when he is about to kiss her, both sai and virat hear pakhi’s voice calling for virat and gets shocked.


Precap: sairat in someplace (please image your favorite typical itv romatic decoration full of cloths hanging , mirrors hanging for lead pairs)

Virat: plz, sai aajav mere paas.

sai: crying, nahi virat sir, hamara safar yahi tak hai.

Done, i tried a lot to create a romantic scene but ise jhada nahi huva.... plz do leave your lovely comments and suggestions

Wow.......superb......

Romantic......

Virat is full on possessive and jealous mode

Full on passion filled.....

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