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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Love it❤ love it❤ love it❤


Continue the story cant wait anymore🙈😍☺️

thank you so much, updating the story, plz enjoy.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Justasuperbgirl

Loved it❤🔥👏🏼👏🏼 please do update the next part as soon as possible... I am waiting with high hopes

updating next part, plz enjoy. I hope i meet your hopes.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Waah! Finally some hot romance. Virat needs to work hard to convince Sai...

i will try to get genuine expressions.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Ninabarbie

Loved it sooooo much ❤❤❤❤. It was 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥. Please do continue soon. Eagerly waiting for the next update 🤩🤩🤩


Happy Writing ❤❤

Thank you so much

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Wwwoooooowwwww,read the last two chapters on one go. It was so damn fab.

Waise kya dhoya hai aapne didi ko, pehle reject karvaake phir live romance dikhaake,aur mujhe itni khushi hui pehli baar didi ko scene mein dekhkar,jalo didi,jalo.🤣

Awww,loved Harini. Aue jiju aur saale ne kya plan banaya hai. Mast .

So,posh people do not play holi. Rehne do,kise padi hai. Bechari kaku,Paku ship ko didi duba rahi hai.😭

Chalo,kisi ne toh Sairat ko bhaang pilayi,aur uske baad ka holi ,kamaal ai☺️

Loved each and everything.

Pls continue soon.❤❤

Thank you, thank you...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

Wow...what a romantic chapter...loved it so much...but do something about Pakhi...she is being irritating now..😒...can’t do anything about serial...but you can surely take care of her...😜...thank you so much for amazing update...please update the next part soon...👍🏻

i want to do something to pakhi, but really don't want to waste energy on didi, waise vho sudharne wali nahi huu.... but i will try

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Aryamavaishnava

Show se jayada acchi to aapki story h..👏just can't describe...loved it ❤️❤️

Ye pakhi hmesha galt time me hi kyu aati h.😡

that's a huge compliment... thank you.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Awesome update

Virat is so jealous 😊

Their drunken confession was about to happen but pakhi spoiled everything

Please update soon

don't worry, she can't spoil anything... thank you.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Guys, this is the final chapter. thank you so much for your support and your lovely comments.

Chapter 4:

Virat: are yaar aab yeh kyu agaye , yeh pakhi kyu picha nahichodthi.

Sai: virat sir, apko nahi pata hai kya, says mischievously…aap hi tho vho vadhaa ki…

Virat immediately closes her mouth and says sai plz, aab nahi, today I just want to talk about only you and me

Within seconds they communicate with eyes and twinkle comes in both of their eyes showing consent , next second they hold their hands and runs from there, after 15 min of running and hide&seek finally they are able to escape from didi and stops at one place, panting looks around to find themselves in a secluded place on another side of the house which was beautifully decorated with white cloths hanging around and decorated with flowers.

(you guys can ask me, how come this place is decorated because I want some peaceful place for our sairat, so logic ko maro goli and enjoy)

At once sai’s attention falls on colors nearby and looks at virat mischievously, virat understands her tricks and runs from there, she grabs some red color and runs after virat…. They run one after another enjoying the time of their life. Suddenly virat trips and falls on the ground with sai on him. Both lost in each other eyes, virat holds sai with one hand on her waist and with another hand he adjusts her hair which was blocking her face for him. Sai tries to get up but due to baang she fumbles and again fall on Virat. again she tries to get up but this time virat won’t let her.

Virat: looking into sai’s eyes, with deep voice asks sai kya tum sach mei mujhse ithni nafrath karthi ho ki, mera saath nahi rehna chahthiho. Kya thum muhje maaf nahi kar sakthi.

Sai: virat sir , mei apse naraz nahi hoo, saying this shegets up and sits crossing her legs..

Virat: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho sai. (he also sits in front of sai crossing his legs)

Sai: (still in the intoxicated state) haa virat sir , mei aap se naraz nahi hoo…waise naraz hone wali baath bhi nahi hai, aapne jaan bhuj kar kuch nahi kiya, vus vakth aap ko jho sabhuth mile, aap vuske hisab se react kiya… agar mei aap ki jhaga hoti mei bhi aise hi karthi shayadh.

Virat: tho mujhse kyu nahi milrahe ho

Sai: naraz nahi huu mei, lekin upset huu…. Bahuth upset….

(she started complaining like a small child who lost her lollipop)

Jab aap ko pulkit jiju ke kilaf sabooth mila, maine boli bhithi khud document ,meine khud document mei tai ka naam dheka , lekin aap ekbaar bhi mera vishvas nahi kiya jabki aap ko pata hai ki mei joot nahi bolthi….Vuske baadh bhi meine sache sabith karneki koshish kiya, lekin kaku aur pakhi didi ne aisa game khela mujhe devi tai kishaadi karni padi ajanak , mei manthihuuuu, aise apko bina bhataye shaadi karvana galath hai, mei vapus akar aap kosab kuch bathane vali bhi thi , lekin aap tho mujhe explain karne ki chance bhinahi diya, seeda saja suna diya and ghar se nikhal diya….


Jab dekho mei tumara family hu kehthe hai , koi apne familyko aise ghar se nikalthe hai ?…. Kaku, baba, omi kaka and pakhi didi jab galthikiya tho , aap ne vunhe ghar se nikhala hai kya ?, nahi na?? kyu ki vho apkafamily hai, mei tho sirf zimmadhari, isliye mujhe ek dum se ghar se nikhaldiya.

Agar aap mujhe danthe hai, ya chilathe hai mujhe ithna dhook nahi hota lekin app mujhe apne apse alag kardhiya…ekdum se, aasani se boldiya hamara rishtha katham.


on this last sentence, a lone tear left from the corner of her right eye….

Virat: listening to all this, tear left Virat's eyes, his heart ached for misunderstanding his wife…… after seeing tears in her eyes and he hugged her and poured out his feelings,

Aise nahi hai sai, thum meri zimmadhari nahi hoo, balki tumtho meri life mei sab se jhadha important ho… saying this he comes back to his sitting position and cups her face.

Meri ankhom mei dheko sai, kya thume sach mei lagtha hai,tumse dhur rehkar mei kush hoo???

Haa mujhe bahut gussa aya jab mujhe pata chala thum tai ki shadhi karvadhi, kyu ki mujhe laga pulkit acha adhmi nahi hai… mei gusse may khabhu nahi karpaya, lekin tum ko ghar se nikalne ka koi excuse nahi dhe saktha aur dhena bhi nahi chatha, mei mantha hoo meri galthi hai….lekin meri yakin mano sai, jab se tum mujhse dhur gaye mujhe aise laga ki meri jindhagi dhur chali gaye, please sai, Mujhe mafkardho aur mera pass vapas aajav,

Saying this he touches her forehead with his forehead, both starts to cry

Sai: mei nahi aavungi

Virat: par kyu sai, kya tum mujhe maaf nahi kar sakthi, holi pe tho dushman bhi dosth ban jathe hai, kya tum mujhe ek mavka nahi dhe sakthi.…

Sai: aise nahi hai virat sir, mei aapko maaf kiya.

Virat : tho kya problem hai.

Sai: pata hai, virat sir mere aaba meri jindhagi the, vunke baadh mujhe laga mera koi nahi hai (virat feels hurt listening to this) but tab meri life mei aap aye…. Aur path a nahi kab mei aapse ithna attach hogai thi jithna mei apna abba se hoo…..(virat is surprised at this declaration)… jab aap mujhse dhur gaye the na, maine bahuth mushkil se apne aap ko sambhala, lekin aab pirse mei apke paas agaya aur pirse aise sab huva tho, mei apne aap ko sambhal nahi pavungi….

Virat: aisa kuch nahi hoga sai, ek bhaar thumhe khodiya meine dubhara khokar ji nahi pavunga…

Sai: sachi (says sai tilting her head cutely)

Virat: muchi.

Sai: pinky promise?

Virat: pinky promise

Sai: playfully, tho mera promise gift kaha hai?

Virat: doubtfully, promise gift?

Sai: haa, GC mei hum promise karthe time gift dhethe hai

Virat: disappointingly, oho mujhe thon ahi patha

Sai: pouts and shows mock anger

Virat: laughing at his wife’s childish acts, take out the payal which he brought for her.

Sai gets really happy and about to take them but virat stops her. He makes her wear payal one by one himself and plants a kiss on each foot.

Somewhere in holi party:

Mohit: jiju dheka mera plan kise kaam kiya, bang ka asar virat dada and vahini ko ekkardhiya.

Shivani : who was crossing by asks, bang kisa bang, kya huva virat aur sai ko?

Mohit:kuch nahi bhuva, vundhono ko paas lane kheliya, meine vunko baang pilaya (pointing towards the table from where he got baang)

Shivani: ek minute, tum vus table se bang lehkar gaya? Aare idiot vho baang nahi hai,lassi hai.

Mohith: tensed , yeh aap kya key rahehai bhuva, vaha board mei bhi likha hai baang karke..

Shivani: koi galthi se lagaya hoga, meine khud Aniket ko lassi refill karthe huva dheka tha, agar chahe tho taste karo.

Mohit: tastes it, haa yeh tho lassi hai, lakin agar meine vunko lassi dhiya tho, vunko chad kaise gaye..

Back to sairat:

Both sai and virat are laying side by side on a small beach bench,

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While sai is sleeping peacefully on his left hand with a small smile on her lips, virat is admiring sai and caressing her face and thinks to himself.

Virat: sorry sai, muhje aisa nahi karna chahiye tha, lekin kya kartha, tum mujhse dhur jhane ke baadh mujhse milna bhi nahi chahthi thi. Meine bhi socha tum mujhse dhur rehkar kush the… lekin jab aaj meine tumhe dheka,mujhe samaj agaya tha ki, tum bhi meri tarah tadap rahi ho, iss liye thumara maan mei kya hai patha karne kheliye aise karna pada.

Flashback:

Virat gives baang glass to waiter and asks him to give it to sai.

I am really sorry once again…. Sayad thumhe kaal subha yeh sab yaadh nahi hoga, lekin mujhe yeh pata chal gaya ki tum bhi mujhse dhur nahi rehsakthi…. So kaal se mission sai shuru, aab koi hume ek hone se nahi rok saktha kudh thum bhi nahi… saying this he plants a kiss on her forehead and smiles.


once again, thank you. please leave your comments.

Edited by Saichintalli - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

thank you so much, updating the story, plz enjoy.

Plz.update next part💜

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