SAIRAT FF - GHKKPM another version chap 9 - page 21 - Page 12

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Finally Sai is starting to kinda settle...shes found aai/sunny/shivani/mohit that can match her wavelength....look forward to reading more!

Thank you 😊

Haan, they do match her wavelength and will be a pleasant interaction between them because of the vibes they carry 😆

Basanti...!!!😂Yeah it was as always fabulous just like we're watching it live😄...Now don't dare to make us wait for next update... Sry for that but plz update soon💜 ur both ff 😃😃...Waiting for Sunny and Sai duo to tease Virat

Woh amrakhand kha rahi thi na ,use khaate khaate padh rahi thi, toh abhi abhi khatam kiya😆

An amazing chapter as always. Loved all of it.

Aaj beizzati nahi dikhi(dining table par thi,par maine ignore maari),chalo accha hai 🤣

Sonali aunty,aap apna kutiya sambhaaliye na,doosro ka mehel cement ka hai,itne aasani se nahi udne denge🤣

And the beginning was nice,CN aur khaana,ek saath na dekhe toh hamara kya hoga. Loved Aai ,Sai and everything. Chalo kaku ko ignore karte hai, bechari iss umar mein shanti ko chahegi na😆

Ou,so we have a trio over here, ShiMoSa(I know its terrible ,Shivani ,Mohith and Sai). I'm looking up for more from them.

Ahhh,then comes the power house of today,Sunny. Oh,and I really loved the circumstances in which you made SB and basanti meet here.(Shayad ghum ka national movie Sholay hai🤣). And I loved them over here. Cuz ,yaha pe dost lagta hai,waha Virat ka dost lagta hai(I hope you get it🤣). And clearly he understands her over here and development is pretty nice to read. You know ,meeting with a swag is really good compared to meeting with a unexpected dhamaka. So,SB wants basanti to be BB(arre,basanti bhabhi).

Waise,kya mast hai nahi, jay,veeru and basanti(kaalia ke bina). And also loved Aai in all this . Cutie as always.

I clearly love how you are presenting characters and connecting them around Sai. Cuz ,here ,the best part I feel is ,Sai is coming out of her bubble, yes,the little bits and pieces of her aaba are very necessary ,as I said I love that Sai grieves here. And slowly ,you are turning them into memories ,beautiful ones which she shared with her aaba. That is why sometimes grief is necessary. Cuz today,she shared a memory of her aaba, a piece of her heart which was special to her. And this is where I feel she is coming out of her bubble,cuz she did it willingly. But ,in the show,she is guarded ,has a wall,not a delicate bubble and only situations play out that way that it makes things come out from her,but that too in a wrong way.

Usha mavshi,aap kya ,aap ka damaad bhi intezaar kar rahe hai shaadi ka, bechara chance pe dance karna chahta hai,par partner interested hi nahi hai. Aap hi samjhaado mavshi.

Hawww,Sai, you mean now Virat is your everything.(know it was a spur of the moment,cuz Sai is a 'LKG graduate ' in love) .Viru,mann me ladoo phoota. Aur Usha mavshi se unke damaad ke baare mein baat kar rahi hai Sai. Viru ,mann mein doosra ladoo phoota😆. Bechaara,mithaas bardaasht nahi kar paaya, isi liye chala gaya. I like this, 'not the Pati but still confused over Sai' Virat over here.

And the conversation with mavshi showed a lot of Sai's personality over here. Jolly,loving,caring ,fun. It was nice.

Ninad uncle ka cameo bhi accha tha waise, irritate nahi kiya😆

Amazing.

Update soon.

P.S.: For Viru

"kya yahi pyaar hai,

Haan yahi pyaar hai"🤣

(Acche se samjho iss time Viru,baar baar forum waale nahi aayenge samjhaane)

And I wanted to know ki kya aap Samrat ke photo pe itna meherbaan hai ki uski entry karvaana chahte ho. Just a bit curious ,thats it. Not a demand or a compulsion.😊

Originally posted by: sairat07

Basanti...!!!😂Yeah it was as always fabulous just like we're watching it live😄...Now don't dare to make us wait for next update... Sry for that but plz update soon💜 ur both ff 😃😃...Waiting for Sunny and Sai duo to tease Virat

Thank you 😂

Ha ha, I know, been a long time since I have updated, will do it. Was typing in the next chapter but have an idea for OS in my head aur soch rahi hoon woh pehle likh doon. It has to be written when it is on my head 😆

Sunny Sai teasing aayega aayega 😆😆

Doosra ff will try this weekend 😊

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Woh amrakhand kha rahi thi na ,use khaate khaate padh rahi thi, toh abhi abhi khatam kiya😆

Ha ha, ghum dekhthe waqt screen mein bhi khaana hamaare haath mein bhi khaana 😂😂

An amazing chapter as always. Loved all of it.

Thank you dear ❤

Aaj beizzati nahi dikhi(dining table par thi,par maine ignore maari),chalo accha hai 🤣

Lol, u can't get rid of her this soon...hv already started my next chapter, not going to give u spoiler 😉

Sonali aunty,aap apna kutiya sambhaaliye na,doosro ka mehel cement ka hai,itne aasani se nahi udne denge🤣

Lol lol u r just amazing...how do u come up with these words and stmts? I am always amazed with ur sense of humor

And the beginning was nice,CN aur khaana,ek saath na dekhe toh hamara kya hoga.

🤣🤣

Loved Aai ,Sai and everything. Chalo kaku ko ignore karte hai, bechari iss umar mein shanti ko chahegi na😆

Ou,so we have a trio over here, ShiMoSa(I know its terrible ,Shivani ,Mohith and Sai). I'm looking up for more from them.

Yeah, I feel they make a good trio 😆

Ahhh,then comes the power house of today,Sunny. Oh,and I really loved the circumstances in which you made SB and basanti meet here.(Shayad ghum ka national movie Sholay hai🤣).

🤣🤣Viru asked Sai in GC tumne Sholay ke alawa koi aur movie nahi dekhi hai kya 😂😂😂. Toh Sai hai tho Sholay bhi saath saath chalega 😂😂

And I loved them over here. Cuz ,yaha pe dost lagta hai,waha Virat ka dost lagta hai(I hope you get it🤣).

Ha ha 🤣woh toh hai

And clearly he understands her over here and development is pretty nice to read. You know ,meeting with a swag is really good compared to meeting with a unexpected dhamaka. So,SB wants basanti to be BB(arre,basanti bhabhi).

🤣🤣 Hmm, yeah Sunny and Sai donon milane ke liye, aisa kuch toh chahiye. I didn't even have to think 😂😂. Waise bhi as and when we start writing, sab ek flow mein aa jatha hai. But there is one thing, I take a break in writing toh woh ruk sa jaatha, though i know what to write, don't feel like writing

Waise,kya mast hai nahi, jay,veeru and basanti(kaalia ke bina). And also loved Aai in all this . Cutie as always.

Ha ha, Sai used to name from Sholay toh socha Jay daal doon, though I wasn't sure if anyone would like it or not.

I clearly love how you are presenting characters and connecting them around Sai.

Thank you ❤ and I love you are noticing every single detail. Thanks yaar.

Cuz ,here ,the best part I feel is ,Sai is coming out of her bubble, yes,the little bits and pieces of her aaba are very necessary ,as I said I love that Sai grieves here. And slowly ,you are turning them into memories ,beautiful ones which she shared with her aaba. That is why sometimes grief is necessary. Cuz today,she shared a memory of her aaba, a piece of her heart which was special to her. And this is where I feel she is coming out of her bubble,cuz she did it willingly.

Right, it is needed.

But ,in the show,she is guarded ,has a wall,not a delicate bubble and only situations play out that way that it makes things come out from her,but that too in a wrong way.

Hmm sadly. She faces a lot in the show because her entry in the house was that way. It is very sad.

Usha mavshi,aap kya ,aap ka damaad bhi intezaar kar rahe hai shaadi ka, bechara chance pe dance karna chahta hai,par partner interested hi nahi hai. Aap hi samjhaado mavshi.

🤣🤣he is not there yet though. Aa jayega 😂

Hawww,Sai, you mean now Virat is your everything.(know it was a spur of the moment,cuz Sai is a 'LKG graduate ' in love) .Viru,mann me ladoo phoota.

Lol, i love how it comes from her 😂😂

Aur Usha mavshi se unke damaad ke baare mein baat kar rahi hai Sai. Viru ,mann mein doosra ladoo phoota😆.

🤣🤣Nahi abhi tak nahi, samajh nahi paa raha hai, kuch toh ho raha hai

Bechaara,mithaas bardaasht nahi kar paaya, isi liye chala gaya. I like this, 'not the Pati but still confused over Sai' Virat over here.

Haaye, you stole my heart. Hmm, you are right, got it, confused 😂😂. Ab Pati hua toh sochtha ki biwi hai meri, ab 😉?

And the conversation with mavshi showed a lot of Sai's personality over here. Jolly,loving,caring ,fun. It was nice.

Hmm, thanks.

Ninad uncle ka cameo bhi accha tha waise, irritate nahi kiya😆

Ha ha ha

Amazing.

Update soon.

P.S.: For Viru

"kya yahi pyaar hai,

Haan yahi pyaar hai"🤣

(Acche se samjho iss time Viru,baar baar forum waale nahi aayenge samjhaane)

And I wanted to know ki kya aap Samrat ke photo pe itna meherbaan hai ki uski entry karvaana chahte ho. Just a bit curious ,thats it. Not a demand or a compulsion.😊

Entry nahi, but I thought it is only natural for Virat to check about him. In the show, a lot of things were ignored and I somehow couldn't understand. Ghar aaya hai, toh uske baare mein kuch toh karna chahiye. Na ki Ladakh se khat aane tak wait kare.

🤣🤣🤣

I couldn't stop laughing after I read your comment 😂😂

"(Acche se samjho iss time Viru,baar baar forum waale nahi aayenge samjhaane)"

Will update soon. I have idea for an OS in mind. Better to first jot it down 😂😂

Originally posted by: laksh

Thank you 😊 for your comments.

Next part is in page 10.

I was typing in the reply to your comments abd ny phone got switched off 🙈🙈

Have replied in green.

Awesome updates again. I read next 3 parts in one go.

Love that Sai has already made friendships with few people esp Sunny. I miss that bit in show, feels like Virat keeps her away from intereacting with Sai much. Maybe scared if he will say something about Pakhi?

I love how you bring Sai's behaviour out with everyone in your story. Hope she manages to even build a relationship with kaku by the time she decides to move out and brings up Sairat marriage on her own without knowing they are already a thing behind her back 😆

Hope you can give another update on Sunday.

Originally posted by: sukri

Awesome updates again. I read next 3 parts in one go.

Oh wow ❤❤

Love that Sai has already made friendships with few people esp Sunny. I miss that bit in show, feels like Virat keeps her away from intereacting with Sai much. Maybe scared if he will say something about Pakhi?

I don't think so, I think makers are not adding such scenes. Sunny and Virat interaction weren't there in other shows, so as is, these addition itself was more than what it was and so they are not thinking of such things. Also, Sunny in other version will turn out to be his bua's son (Devi in Ghum). Pakhi in the other version will try to create misunderstanding between Sai and Sunny but it will all get sorted and he will turn into Sai's well wisher and will strongly support Sai during her tough times.

So I think the makers might be planning to do something to first create misunderstanding and then strengthen Sai Sunny's relationship.

I love how you bring Sai's behaviour out with everyone in your story. Hope she manages to even build a relationship with kaku by the time she decides to move out and brings up Sairat marriage on her own without knowing they are already a thing behind her back 😆

Thank you. Ha ha 😆😆, I am planning to build to Kaku and Sai's relationship. Their interaction at the end of reception was so funny in the show.

Hope you can give another update on Sunday.

Thank you 😍

I am planning to, started to write the next chapter but have now posted an OS now.

Hi all,

Have updated the next chapter.

Jealous Virat !!!😬😬😬 I also think that why she has problem wyd Virat only..😄😄 Acha hai Sunny is trying to make Pakhi understand !!! But don't think so that she'll move on easily,will she?

But yeah the update was much fun to read...!!!Looking forward for more ... continue soon💜