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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: laksh

Hi all,

Have updated the next chapter.


Yay, thanks for the tag. I loved this chapter as well.


Sunny is really 'mature' in your story. He gave good advice to both Virat and Pakhi, which is what friend do. Hopefully Virat stops feeling too guilty for seeing Pakhi in that situation. She brought it on herself and Samrat in a way by calling Virat on her wedding night. She should have given a chance to Samrat or quietly thought about what to do next.


I also like how you continued Sai-Sunny bonding. I think he is like a brother she never had. Poor Virat, itna soch soch ke Sai se ab bhi baat karta hain. Until he lets go of that stiff upper lip thing and be himself, Sai us ke saath aise hi rahegi.


Nice that Sai-Devi-Virat are building the bond. Are they going to see some photos in your next chapter? Maybe chota Virat and Sai saying how cute ❤️, but ab aise gabbar kaise ban gaye.


Curious to see what Pakhi will do in your next chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sairat07

Jealous Virat !!!😬😬😬 I also think that why she has problem wyd Virat only..😄😄 Acha hai Sunny is trying to make Pakhi understand !!! But don't think so that she'll move on easily,will she?


But yeah the update was much fun to read...!!!Looking forward for more ... continue soon💜


Thanks dear ❤❤

😂😂😂


Sai doesn't have problem with Virat. They started on a wrong note. Also, she doesn't sometimes understand how to be around Virat, she gets a little conscious but sometimes she completely forgets it and loosens up.


Nah, Pakhi won't move on that easily 🤭🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow!!!! Sunny and sai are great togather... Hope the show also shows bits of them bonding and pulling leg of virat .... That will be soo much fun..


Sunny is soo smart and observant here.... He is understanding that virat has feelings for sai but wants to be sure of the depth of it before moving forward....


He nicely tried to make Pakhi see sense and move forward... Hopefully she does the same soon!!!


Happy writing!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sukri


Yay, thanks for the tag. I loved this chapter as well.

😊

Sunny is really 'mature' in your story. He gave good advice to both Virat and Pakhi, which is what friend do. Hopefully Virat stops feeling too guilty for seeing Pakhi in that situation.

Yeah, I really want him to have a role and he is his only friend and the only person who knows what happened.


She brought it on herself and Samrat in a way by calling Virat on her wedding night. She should have given a chance to Samrat or quietly thought about what to do next.

I know, it was awful and the way she was shouting, what was she even thinking 🤷‍♀️🤦‍♀️


I also like how you continued Sai-Sunny bonding. I think he is like a brother she never had. Poor Virat, itna soch soch ke Sai se ab bhi baat karta hain. Until he lets go of that stiff upper lip thing and be himself, Sai us ke saath aise hi rahegi.

I know. She will also be conscious around him. As we have all discussed in our other posts, she did feel something for him,may be an infatuation and that is why Sai acts conscious around him. But sometimes she forgets everything and loosens up.


Nice that Sai-Devi-Virat are building the bond. Are they going to see some photos in your next chapter? Maybe chota Virat and Sai saying how cute ❤️, but ab aise gabbar kaise ban gaye.

Ha ha ha, you guessed it right 😆❤


I would have written it right away, but have been writing an OS since yesterday which is quite lengthy, so plan to post it as two chapters together. Writing the next chapter now.


Curious to see what Pakhi will do in your next chapter.

Hmm, if you want to know then, I want to make Sai and Pakhi interact. That is still pending, they haven't spoken at all.



Thanks for the comments. I know, I said I will update on Sunday, but I couldn't finish it, sorry.


This ff follows the same as the show until the part where Sai and Virat would talk at his house about their wedding.

I wanted to confirm a few things from few of the old episodes where Sunny and Pakhi and Sunny and Virat interact, had to get details of the information that were exchanged between them in the past before I finished this chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Wow!!!! Sunny and sai are great togather... Hope the show also shows bits of them bonding and pulling leg of virat .... That will be soo much fun..

Yeah, would be nice and fun isn't it 😆


Sunny is soo smart and observant here.... He is understanding that virat has feelings for sai but wants to be sure of the depth of it before moving forward....

You are right


He nicely tried to make Pakhi see sense and move forward... Hopefully she does the same soon!!!

😊 I watched an old episode and found how clear he was. I am surprised how they never brought him back into picture. He was the only one who knew the whole truth and so I felt, he is the right person to guide both.


Happy writing!!!

😊thanks



Thanks for the comments ❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Poor Virat is jealous of sunny! Lol. I hope that Sairat also find a wavelength soon! ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks for tagging me😇🤗

Hehe i love the bonding between Sai and Sunny☺️

And Veeru is jealous😂🤣

Sunny ne Pakhi didi ko kitne ache se samjhaya👌par mujhe nahi lagta Pakhi didi samajne wali hai aur move on kadegi🧐🤔

Aur hame bhi chulbuli, mazaaki, bindaas Sai bohat pasand hai😚☺️

Waiting for next chapter🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

jealous Virat lol poor Virat feeling left out!


Nice Update!

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Posted: 4 years ago
[QUOTE=Tasu06]

Thanks for tagging me😇🤗

Pleasure 😊


Hehe i love the bonding between Sai and Sunny☺️

❤️Nice isn't it 😆


And Veeru is jealous😂🤣

😂😂


Sunny ne Pakhi didi ko kitne ache se samjhaya👌par mujhe nahi lagta Pakhi didi samajne wali hai aur move on kadegi🧐🤔

Abhi nahi


Aur hame bhi chulbuli, mazaaki, bindaas Sai bohat pasand hai😚☺️

Ha ha, so sweet, you have got the exact words

Waiting for next chapter🤗

Sure, writing an OS, will be able to update only after that is done 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Thanks for tagging me😇🤗

Pleasure 😊


Hehe i love the bonding between Sai and Sunny☺️

smiley27Nice isn't it 😆

And Veeru is jealous😂🤣

😂😂

Sunny ne Pakhi didi ko kitne ache se samjhaya👌par mujhe nahi lagta Pakhi didi samajne wali hai aur move on kadegi🧐🤔

Abhi nahi


Aur hame bhi chulbuli, mazaaki, bindaas Sai bohat pasand hai😚☺️

Ha ha, so sweet, you have got the exact words

Waiting for next chapter🤗

Sure, writing an OS, will be able to update only after that is done 😆



Thanks for the comments ❤

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