Sairat SS : transfer a new life ( ch - 3 , page 10 ) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Bibliophile68

Just finished all the chapters till now

Pakhi didi is still delusional and uski harkate thoo..🤬

I am loving the progression in sairat's love story.

Virat made it clear to sai that he has no feelings for pakhi now...( I badly wants a scene like this in the show)

Can't wait for the next update..

😊

Thnk u

Hey, just a small suggestion

Can u alter the name of the fiction as in not mention " chapter updated"

Or specify the chapter no or page no..

Gets lil confusing on which chapter is up or if we missed it.

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Hey, just a small suggestion

Can u alter the name of the fiction as in not mention " chapter updated"

Or specify the chapter no or page no..

Gets lil confusing on which chapter is up or if we missed it.

Sure , thanks

Wonderful update......sweet...cute.....😍

Loved it a lot....

Finally Virat cleared to Sai what he feel for Pakhi.....

Conversation between them was nice....

They are going to nashik...why???...we will know in next update na😛😃😉

Please give next update soon....

Very nice update...the way both realized their mistakes is very nice ..... I like sai alot but also I want her to apologise to virat in couple of situations.... But it never happened in serial but thanks for giving this.... Candles thing is very new... When sai mentioned " aur kon bathayega" for a moment I thought she called to DSP again ... Lol

Hmmm where do I start? There are so many beautiful things about this story. What I love the most is you have kept Sai's and Virat's charcters intact. So even if Sai is not at that stage yet I can easily see her behaving in this way in future. Virat too. You have kept his character just like the serial. Where he knows his responsibilities. Only Patralekha is a bigger pervert here😆at least she doesn't hide behind maturity like in the serial.

The twist in the beginning was nice. No vada.👍🏼

Another thing I simply loved is how open Virat was to Sai and how he kept away from Patralekha.

When Virat was working out here, I actually imagined him working out in his sleeveless tee in the balcony😆that was such a cute scene. That girl looking at him. Ok. But looking at him through telescope🤣

When Virat was blowing off the candles my mind imagined the scene taking place. Virat blowing off the candles one by one, the room getting darker and then that whisper in her ears. I actually thought of something else 🙈. But you gave it such an innocent twist😳it was beautiful to read. Excited for the trip to Nashik.🥳

You write beautifully⭐️

P.S. thanks for the message.👍🏼

Aaj hi sare chapters ek sath padh daale

Sundar sundar ati sundar

Wo sorry wala part to bahut hi beautiful tha.

Chalo finally virat and sai will go to nashik away from chakram niwas

Update soon

Read rest of the updates now

Pakhi didi toh hai ki ajeeb 😂

Virat is nice here

I love SaiRat's interactions❤️

Amazing Work 👍🏼

Heyyyy

Thanks for the PM!!!!

Love the updates!!!!

Sai be Virat ko mana liyaaaa❤️

Vo bhi Kitna pyaar se

Virat’s sweet dish chaiye!! Kyaaa chaiyaaa haaaa😆

Nashikkkk??? I can’t wait for moree

Love your story ❤️

Ani

Beautiful update. Loved the way both Virat and Sayi apologised to each other and Sayi's idea of lighting the candles. Waiting for the next update.