MG-The Matchmaker’s Mistake-Ch-1-14-(Completed)-23.5.25 - Page 2

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hello.... how are you?

Congrats on another story

thank you for posting

Glad to be back as writer on the forum.

Yes, it was pre-written so posted it.

Hope you will enjoy reading it.

Originally posted by: aparna3011

1 - 14

brilliant n wonderful story

enjoyed reading very much

both are adorable

both give space to each other before stepping in any confession n relation

I am really glad you enjoyed reading it.

Yes, it was a refreshing change for me from the usual heart wrenching concepts I write.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 4

oh no Geet looked at Maan and Mohan's profile

finally she realised that Maan is Mohan

her anger was reasonable

of cos she confronted Maan

great that Maan was calm

he did have a valid point

her question was justified

appreciate that he was honest

as expected she felt betrayed

but whatever he told her was the truth

now she wants to cancel his profile

not surprised he was there for her and not to be matched

well he did not stop her

pleased that he gave her time and space

so she was unable to delete his profile

glad that she could not ignore the truth buried beneath his lies

liked that she saw the man behind the mask

hmm she was sure if she was ready to walk away from him yet

It was a pleasure to read your detailed feedback on this story.

It a very light hearted story. I am glad you are enjoying it.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 3

of cos Mohan aka Maan intrigued Geet

he is indeed enigma

so Mohan aka texted Geet as he wanted to meet her

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

well Mohan aka Maan just wanted to have a convo with Geet about finding her a match

she was amazed that he was on time

great that Geet was upfront with Maan

oh he proposed a limited engagement

as expected Maan he had a condition - three dates with the people she chose and the fourth with her

her question was anticipated

Maan clearly wants to prove that her algorithm does not work

not surprised that she agreed

Gosh Maan laughed

Geet certainly felt that something was off

Aditya's curiosity was expected

oh its personal for Maan

It means a lot.

And it’s a pleasure to read your review.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 2

finally they met

of cos Maan aka Mohan Kapoor was direct to the point

Geet was indeed astounded

enjoyed their banter

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

as expected she noticed that he was far too good looking

this did naturally made her suspicious

her question was justified

Maan's response was anticipated

she had a valid point

admire how Maan handled the situation

she was really amazed

Gosh Maan's non-negotiables

Maan was brutally upfront

at least Geet laughed

ha ha Maan and his remarks

interview... good investments....

is this a business deal or a marriage?

well Maan was pushing her buttons

glad that he liked that she fiercely fought back

so he challenged Geet

great that she is up to it

not surprised that Geet was confused

Pinky was correct that Geet was attracted to Maan aka Mohan

Geet's thoughts were understandable

I am glad to read your thoughts on this.

It means a lot.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 1

so Geet runs a matchmaking agency

well she thought that Maan was a perfect match for her client Neha

now she sent his profile to Neha

of cos Maan was shocked when the agency sent him his own bio data

but he was also amused

Gosh Maan sent a client inquiry to her company

finally they met

as expected Geet did not recognise him and completely unaware of her mistake

Geet is indeed vivacious

not surprised that Maan decided not to tell her what she did

his interest was justified

It was a pleasure to read your feedback.

I am glad you enjoyed it.

So maan is his one of old client

But come with different name

Interesting start

And geet anger is also justified

But bhav bhut khaya

I don't get one thing

How she start working with maan in his company

.

I loved everything cute talks

Tea pe charcha

Wo uske ghar aana

.

Board meeting me geet kyun thi

.

Awesome ending with cute daughter

Originally posted by: priya_21

So maan is his one of old client

But come with different name

Interesting start

And geet anger is also justified

But bhav bhut khaya

I don't get one thing

How she start working with maan in his company

.

I loved everything cute talks

Tea pe charcha

Wo uske ghar aana

.

Board meeting me geet kyun thi

.

Awesome ending with cute daughter

Well, I did not get into details about that plot as how behind the scenes Geet was a part of the Khurana constructions.

It was just random stuff. As assumed stuff & so…

Basically to keep Maaneet closer.

Chapters 1 - 4

Hilarious and yet Charming Chapters

Geet made a mistake by sending Maan Khurana his own bio data

and thus it led to a game for Maan .

Maan coming for an appointment to Geet by the name of Mohan Kapoor

as he wanted to see if she catches on with her fault but instead

Geet more serious to match Mohan did not consider Maan Khurana

while she is also intrigued by him

but it also seems like with Maan's game he too is intrigued by Geet

Geet now finds that both Maan Khurana and Mohan Kapoor have similar profiles

oh finally Geet caught onto Maan

she truly was furious and yet Maan allowed her to be

maybe just maybe he was seeing the real Geet which he admires more

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapters 1 - 4

Hilarious and yet Charming Chapters

Geet made a mistake by sending Maan Khurana his own bio data

and thus it led to a game for Maan .

Maan coming for an appointment to Geet by the name of Mohan Kapoor

as he wanted to see if she catches on with her fault but instead

Geet more serious to match Mohan did not consider Maan Khurana

while she is also intrigued by him

but it also seems like with Maan's game he too is intrigued by Geet

Geet now finds that both Maan Khurana and Mohan Kapoor have similar profiles

oh finally Geet caught onto Maan

she truly was furious and yet Maan allowed her to be

maybe just maybe he was seeing the real Geet which he admires more

I am glad you are loving the concept.

I just wrote it long back to ease my mind out of such heart wrenching serious stories of mine.

Just a fun story. Adding random stuff to make it feel lighter.