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Posted: 2 months ago
#21

Chapters 5 - 7


Geet is rather hurt by the fact that Maan (Mohan) had lied to her

as she was slowly developing feelings for him

yet when she approached Maan , he never denied he was wrong

but he wanted to know the real woman Geet Handa

I really liked the fact that Maan himself came to Geet's apartment

that in itself shows he regrets playing with her and trying to make matters better between them

Geet inviting Maan for tea and yes this is their first true conversation

been themselves and honest .

perhaps Maan is seeing something real in Geet

while she seems to slowly understand Maan

oh wow he actually washed the dishes at her office now that really calls for forgiveness

and a second chance.


taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#22

Chapters 8 - 10

Beautiful and Soft Chapters

Maan and Geet both comfortable with the silence between them

because it's not an awkward silence rather it's a beautiful and understanding

silence.

Maan knowing that Geet fears darkness with the storm , Maan decides

to spend his time with Geet which is thoughtful and kind

Geet speaking about her parents death and Maan just there as a silent support

these two are surely falling for each other but in such a beautiful way

Maan preparing breakfast and seems like it's Geet's favorite too

so Vikrant is Geet's past he must have messed up and now wants a second chance

but Geet learning truly about Maan admire him in every way possible



Pixiepixel11 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#23

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapters 5 - 7


Geet is rather hurt by the fact that Maan (Mohan) had lied to her

as she was slowly developing feelings for him

yet when she approached Maan , he never denied he was wrong

but he wanted to know the real woman Geet Handa

I really liked the fact that Maan himself came to Geet's apartment

that in itself shows he regrets playing with her and trying to make matters better between them

Geet inviting Maan for tea and yes this is their first true conversation

been themselves and honest .

perhaps Maan is seeing something real in Geet

while she seems to slowly understand Maan

oh wow he actually washed the dishes at her office now that really calls for forgiveness

and a second chance.


Thanks a lot for loving the updates.

Yes, it was written with that intention of a light hearted scenario between the main couple.

I am glad you are loving it.

It was a pleasure to read your detailed feedback.

Pixiepixel11 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#24

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapters 8 - 10

Beautiful and Soft Chapters

Maan and Geet both comfortable with the silence between them

because it's not an awkward silence rather it's a beautiful and understanding

silence.

Maan knowing that Geet fears darkness with the storm , Maan decides

to spend his time with Geet which is thoughtful and kind

Geet speaking about her parents death and Maan just there as a silent support

these two are surely falling for each other but in such a beautiful way

Maan preparing breakfast and seems like it's Geet's favorite too

so Vikrant is Geet's past he must have messed up and now wants a second chance

but Geet learning truly about Maan admire him in every way possible



Thanks a lot for loving the updates.

Yes, the thought process behind this story was a simple & straightforward storyline.

No, such complications whatsoever.

It means a lot reading your precious comments.

taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#25

Chapters 11 - 12

Excellent Updates

At the moment Geet is confused with her feelings

yet at the same time she does not want to be alone away from Maan

on the other hand Maan is just giving Geet space so she can decide without pressure

but his absence sure creates emptiness within Geet

Pixiepixel11 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#26

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapters 11 - 12

Excellent Updates

At the moment Geet is confused with her feelings

yet at the same time she does not want to be alone away from Maan

on the other hand Maan is just giving Geet space so she can decide without pressure

but his absence sure creates emptiness within Geet

Thanks a lot for taking out time & commenting on the chapters.

I am glad you love this short concept as well.

Yes, finally she will realise her love for him.

And he is giving her the space & time not overburdening her with his feelings.

taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#27

Chapters 12- 13

Sasha also notices when Geet walks into a room Maan's eyes soften

while Geet's face would light up bright when Maan walks into a room

surely these two are in love

the people around can see it yet Maan and Geet have not named their relation

both are using words but not directly talking about they feel

Oh hell no a photo has been found of Maan and Geet which means

the media was always around Maan

now at the office everyone stares at Geet but Pinky shows her the post

and Geet is all geared up to be strong and stand with Maan

but I liked that she also says that the photo only exposes what both already knew

while in the boardroom Maan is defending him and Geet and he is right

he wants to stand by her side the shareholders need to comply with that

but I admire both Maan and Geet as both confess to been scared yet at the same time

they do not wish to throw away what they have between them.


taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#28

Chapter 14

Beautiful Chapter

Finally both confessed and it felt real

so was Geet really in the matchmaking business and that is how she met Maan

well they mistake certainly is a heavenly one brought two people that understand each other

and trust each other also respects each other.

Wow two years later Maan and Geet marries and have a child

so the program did work after all


Pixiepixel11 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#29

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapters 12- 13

Sasha also notices when Geet walks into a room Maan's eyes soften

while Geet's face would light up bright when Maan walks into a room

surely these two are in love

the people around can see it yet Maan and Geet have not named their relation

both are using words but not directly talking about they feel

Oh hell no a photo has been found of Maan and Geet which means

the media was always around Maan

now at the office everyone stares at Geet but Pinky shows her the post

and Geet is all geared up to be strong and stand with Maan

but I liked that she also says that the photo only exposes what both already knew

while in the boardroom Maan is defending him and Geet and he is right

he wants to stand by her side the shareholders need to comply with that

but I admire both Maan and Geet as both confess to been scared yet at the same time

they do not wish to throw away what they have between them.


Thanks a lot for sharing your detailed feedback on the updates. It means a lot.

It’s a pleasure reading your detailed comments on the chapters.

Pixiepixel11 thumbnail
Posted: 2 months ago
#30

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 14

Beautiful Chapter

Finally both confessed and it felt real

so was Geet really in the matchmaking business and that is how she met Maan

well they mistake certainly is a heavenly one brought two people that understand each other

and trust each other also respects each other.

Wow two years later Maan and Geet marries and have a child

so the program did work after all


Thanks a lot for your input & detailed comments on this story. I am glad you enjoyed it.

It means a lot.

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