Battered Hearts|| Chapt 3 page 3 Updated 08/03 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 months ago
#21

Chapter 2

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

Gosh she fell into the pool and she cannot swim

Thank God Maan saved her

glad that she is fine

Maan was indeed relieved

his concern was justified

as expected Khushi was worried about Geet

but Geet assured her

Dev clearly does not like Maan

of cos Geet thanked Maan

Maan is not what he portrays to be

circumstances made him like this

great that theses sessions with Geet at the library discussing their project is a welcome escape from home

feeling for Maan

hate his parents

he is suffering so much

and nobody knows

at least Geet has her nanima who loves her so much

Maan's thoughts were justified

sad that Maan's mom never has time for him

she just prefers her alcohol

dismayed that he does not get a family's love

not surprised with Maan's remarks

he tried to cover up his emotions

so Geet was affected by his touch

he was upset when Geet told him that everyone calls him Frankenstein

she then explained

glad that she does see Maan like that

loved that she sees him as a person

Maan was really emotional

angry that his dad hits him

dismayed that his parents do not care about him

no wonder Maan is like that

finally someone sees him


update soon

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Posted: 5 months ago
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nice start and update

prologue is scary please dont let that to be maan

well maan is a nerd here ?

not surprised as additional to it as he has dark reality in his house

well I like geet friends circle ,ofcourse i hate dev if he is paring with geet in future updates

I think maan hate too much of chatting as he hates the continous bickering of geet 's circle

oh wow geet maan pair with maan

as expected he was not interested in pairing with anyone ,not with geet too

well dev is lazy and geet knows that

oh atleast maan care for geet and jumped in pool to save her

well seems like geet is affected by maan s proximity good

there is maan with geet in prologue ?

I cant take that but ofcourse its a story

Edited by GuruDd - 5 months ago
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Posted: 5 months ago
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Great parts

Maaneet working together for a project and Geet trying to know him better

Does Dev like Geet as he does like Maan that much

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Posted: 4 months ago
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Wonderful wonderful update great to see maan making friends with geet atleast and she cleared dev about being good friends not much

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Only Geet makes Maan feel like a normal person otherwise his parents are pathetic.

His mother is not fighting against her husband for abusing her and not even for her son.

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Maan parents is not good

How he hurt him like that

Geet only make him feel alive 😍

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Great part

Maan suffering so much

Hope he is okay

Geet’s nanima is so cute hope she meets Maan again and is able...

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 months ago
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nice update

dev is jealous that geet spend time with maan n be friend with him

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Posted: 4 months ago
#30

Chapter 3

Fantastic and yet Painful

I'm glad that Geet explains Dev that there are friends

while Maan is her project partner

Maan going home once again to despair seeing his mother bruised

while his father a prominent figure in society in a terror at home

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